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Old 05-29-2009, 04:01 PM   #55
Gabriel
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Looks good. Here's some stuff that can maybe be touched up on:

His eyes look weird. Try changing it around.
The nose, I think, should be bigger, rounder.
His arms are too short and his legs are too long.
If you can, change his pose, Mario doesn't usually have his hand on his hips.
His head and feet are kinda big for his body, so you may want to fix that.

To try to balance that out, here's what looks good:

The colors look good.
The hat looks good.
Except for his face, the head looks good, but the hair may be a bit long.
Shading looks real good, which is a bonus to me, 'cause I kinda suck at shading. (Well, I sorta suck at spriting in general, but...)

So, all in all, it could use some touching up, but it looks pretty good. Also, why not Sonic 3 & Knuckles style?
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