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Old 12-10-2004, 10:28 PM   #5
Glyph Phoenix
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That's because there's nothing to get. It's a piece of crap. There's barely a plot, crappy font... the only good things about it are the grammar and graphics, both of which are decent.

The title is crap. Fix it.

Get a basic plot hammered out clearly before stuffing stupid action sequences in it.

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