'Kay. Here we go.
Good points:
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- I can see it. That's always a plus with my computer.</font>
- Um... the backrounds... aren't too bad.</font>
- ... I'm kinda out of this stuff...</font>
Overall, an interesting concept.
Bad points:
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- Text= I can't see!</font>
- The vivian sprite looks awkward.</font>
- Aiiiiiiiiieeeeeee!!!! Author character!!!</font>
- It was kind of hard to understand sometimes.</font>
- No plot, just a teaser.</font>
Like I said, interesting concept. But it needs work.
Rating:
