Ow. My EYES! You...um...have room to improve. First and foremost, pretty please no more red/blue combos. Ow. Ow. Ow...Next, make things more semitary(sp?), as in equal sided. I'm not so sure doors everywhere are slanted. Lastly, if you have writing on something, make sure it stays on the thing, not off to the side. The comedy was fine, it needs graphical improvement, is all. |