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Old 05-14-2005, 11:22 PM   #3
Glyph Phoenix
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Zing!

But really, he was being picked up by the hood. The pose didn't really need to change. We can't hold that against him, what with all the other glaring problems this comic has. And his mouth doesn't open when he talks while being carried away by ridley, either. Normally this isn't a problem... but on this sprite you can see his unopen mouth and everything.

Some of your backgrounds are resized incorrectly. Your sprites are of different bittages, thanks to your crappy 8-bit Sean recolor. You have sprites of all different sizes and perspectives together. You resized the Pokemon starter town background incorrectly. You have annoying black space on the side of your comic. You put a freakin' Pokemon battle sprite behind an Earthbound counter. The comic is not very funny.

Now, on to the good things about this comic...

...your text is nice.

That should be it.
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