[Luigi III]

This guy gives Chomps a bad name. And Kirby. And X-Nauts. And Metal Sonic. And Magus. And Luigi's Mansion ghosts. And Doopliss.
First off, that is a horrible Kirby edit. "I'M GOING TO MAKE A BAD EYE PATCH ON KIRBY FOR NO REASON!" If you're going to use paint effects, give them purpose instead of randomness, and shade them. Also, those are such original names. Seriously, "Mr. Nauty"? Chomp Chomp? ORANGE GHOST?!? And why does the Chomp say "Chomp Chomp"? If you're not going to let it talk, make it say ARF ARf, as they actually say that. And why did the ghost say anything? It didn't make sense. And whats with the mad scientist voice for the X-Naut? ANd if they're rivaling groups, does it really matter HOW you smite your foes, just as long as you do? Whats the point of Magus, Metal Sonic, and Doopliss if they don't do squat? The panels are awful, and why are they stationed at the hub area of Kirby and the Amazing Mirror? And for the last thing I noticed, why are they in an area that is supposed to be a mountain, but they're on a bunch of clouds?

Ok. So maybe I shouldn't have matched Mountain with clouds around it, with clouds. But if you hate it so much, WHY ARE YOU HERE?! Geez! It'll get better! And maybe I should get rid of "the mad scientist voice for the X-Naut." And maybe I should scrap the comic and start a new one! In fact, I will! ..........as soon as I have the time to think up a whole new storyline.