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Cataclysmic Paradox · 11-06-2005, 08:41 PM

Bad things:
-Dr. Dude is just a lame Dr. Donez ripoff
-Black holes are supposed to be a lot bigger
-Some words weren't capitalized when they should have been
-It doesn't make much sense that the Black Mage would be thanking Dr. Dude
-The comic mixes bittages a lot
-There aren't any borders for the frames
-The Tony the Tiger joke was really stupid
-The text bubbles are very sloppy
-The black hole effect didn't turn out good at all
-The blood effect was created using the spraypaint tool, and therefore doesn't look good at all
-Some stuff was mispelled
-When you realized you made the mistake with Dr. Dude's eyes, you should have fixed it
-You should have put the word "ding" closer to the actual door
-You kept changing the color of the text for the different characters, in one panel, Dr. Dude used green, and in another, he used black

Good things:
-The black hole joke wasn't THAT bad
-It wasn't BMP or JPG format

So, it's not a very good idea to use heads of cereal mascots in comics. Maybe you thought it would turn out kind of like Jay's stick figure people, but it didn't. And you should check over your comics for spelling and grammar errors before you post them here. Sorry if that was a bit harsh, but I'm just trying to be honest.

[ November 06, 2005, 10:08 PM: Message edited by: Jumi Jao ]

11-06-2005, 08:41 PM	#2
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,920.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,539.27 Donate	Bad things: -Dr. Dude is just a lame Dr. Donez ripoff -Black holes are supposed to be a lot bigger -Some words weren't capitalized when they should have been -It doesn't make much sense that the Black Mage would be thanking Dr. Dude -The comic mixes bittages a lot -There aren't any borders for the frames -The Tony the Tiger joke was really stupid -The text bubbles are very sloppy -The black hole effect didn't turn out good at all -The blood effect was created using the spraypaint tool, and therefore doesn't look good at all -Some stuff was mispelled -When you realized you made the mistake with Dr. Dude's eyes, you should have fixed it -You should have put the word "ding" closer to the actual door -You kept changing the color of the text for the different characters, in one panel, Dr. Dude used green, and in another, he used black Good things: -The black hole joke wasn't THAT bad -It wasn't BMP or JPG format So, it's not a very good idea to use heads of cereal mascots in comics. Maybe you thought it would turn out kind of like Jay's stick figure people, but it didn't. And you should check over your comics for spelling and grammar errors before you post them here. Sorry if that was a bit harsh, but I'm just trying to be honest. [ November 06, 2005, 10:08 PM: Message edited by: Jumi Jao ]