I thought about this. I thought about this a lot. What is the noise that one hears when their doom is imminent? Is it like The Terminator, Psycho, or Baron von Blubba? Get out that sound, ladies and gents, because Glyph Phoenix is back in town and school is in session!
Do a gross lack of capitalization and punctuation, sucky comic recolors, and random attacks and explosions make your intro cool? No, it makes it awful! Congratulations!
Sprites and backgrounds of totally different perspectives = fun, fun, fun! No, wait, that's awful again, my bad.
Your 'intruders' panel would have looked a lot less stupid if they hadn't just instantly popped out of nowhere.
As punishment you must write "'Oh poop' is not a punchline" on the blackboard 50 times.
Now, let's see what you did get right...
The masks were okay. They look kinda stupid on M&L Yoshi, though. Again, don't mix perspectives like that.
The green eyepatch is acceptable also. Nothing special, but at least you bothered to shade it. But you followed up with a lame fake phone number, when there are so many funny fake phone numbers out there! To reiterate, lame.
The way the Boos couldn't tell the mask from the real boo, and "landscaping" were almost funny. They weren't funny, mind you, but they were almost funny.
Now, I just got a great idear this mounth myself. How about you and any other poorly edoted sprite friends of yours either fix this mess of a comic or mosey on out of here, huh? |