| Eh. In a way you didn't lose the spirit of the comix, however certain parts were better than others.
The "Other Girl", for example, wasn't quite wacky enough. Also, Fred didn't quite get a funny quip, despite the strange/absurd nature of his 99 red balloon appearance.
The minus world thing was the best part, though you sorta messed up with black boxes in the last part. The font wasn't quite the right one either. Also, at least one of the Poser/What's his face duel needed to be shouting like some guy on those car destruction derbies. As for VG and Pat, that was pretty much spot on...
It's taken so long to make, though, this crossover, that in the time span so far, I've bounced between being an SP and not being one over five times.
If it hits another month+ lull, though, I may just have to try a part of it for myself. *Stares at red phone on his desk labeled "Jay"* |