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Old 02-19-2006, 04:30 PM   #23
Glyph Phoenix
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I have come back from the dead to announce that this comic sucks.

I laughed at the Looney Toons part with Pat. That was funny enough. And working the Goomba King in was decent.

But... that was about it. LOTW was funnier than this was. Speaking of, thinking back LOTW wasn't bad. Box Front was priceless. Executrain's shenanigans were pretty cool. I didn't give LOTW the credit it deserved.

But this, on the other hand, was quite bad. Your new characters aren't wacky or interesting or fun like the ones Jay or Reid makes. And you didn't even do existing characters characters and jokes right. Now, a list of reasons this comic sucks.
  • You had two earth exploding moments and you didn't do anything interesting with either.
  • Eye Care Man doesn't get angry and shout like that. Anger only serves to increase blood pressure, which can cause bloodshot eyes.
  • Lord Reid wasn't nearly wacky enough.
  • You didn't edit the screenshots to include stupid things like Jay does. If you put in random things as part of the score, or coins, or something like that it would totally create NC-style wackiness. But you didn't.
  • The Goomba King said wackier things in the actual games in which he appeared. How you managed to make NC less wacky than the games it is based on is beyond me.

In closing, make better comics.

Now, back to the safety of the grave.
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