| 1) Inverted colors for an evil twin or likewise is a huge cliche. 2) I would actually make some ground there instead of having Mario and Luigi standing on the bottom line of the frame. It actually looks like Bowser is levitating. 3) I can't say I'm too thrilled with the fight effects, like some of the fire effects (flames, fireballs, etc.) or Luigi's tornado punch. I'm really not too thrilled about the ashes-and-hat joke or the ashes-and-eyes joke at the end either. 4) Speech bubbles would be nice to identify who's speaking first. Plus, some of Mario's text was a little hard to read. Needs a little work, but other than that, I like those sprites. Keep workin' on it. -Dylan |