| Alright, the text SUCKS. It's hard to read. However, your comics are considerably better then Saeed's, because you actually have jokes. Saeed's comics are just random crap. Dont take Saeed's advice, because his comics are not too good to begin with.
Anyway.....
Comic 1: Joke sucks, but the text isnt hard to read like it is in the later editions. 5/10
Comic 2: No text, but the joke is alright. 6/10
Comic 3: Incredibly hard to read text, and the joke has been overdone. 2/10
Comic 4: Hard to read, and contains an anti-gay joke. The last panel <Mario and Luigi screaming "GAY"> was very offensive to me. You should consider the fact that some viewers might be gay before making a cruel joke such as that. 0/10
Comic 5: WAAAAAAAAY overdone. 3/10 |