| Some things I missed in my first review...
1) Don't do the hand-drawn houses anymore. It just doesn't look that great.
2) Mixed bittages. While I'm not a huge stickler about this, sometimes the bits kind of clash. For example, having 16-bit Mario and Luigi in an 8-bit world sort of seems a little weird, for a lack of better words.
3) It looks like you're having some pasting problems (Look at the bush and the pipe in the first panel of the second comic.). It looks like they're sitting in little craters. When you paste, make sure you copy as little blank space as possible, then paste the object right on the horizon line.
-Dylan |