| Vapor: Chaos. Pure, freaking, CHAOS. Your posts were sometimes fun to read, and sometimes disorienting, and either way, my expression changed a total of seven times in one post. I like your style, its original and rather good. A good, longer post full of that kind of stuff would be great. But some of your stuff and weaponry magically appeared without warning, so try harder to add a little bit of description from here-forward.
8.5/10
Slife: Ever descriptive and encompassing. I had a good feeling of what was going on throughout your posts, and though Vapor did a majority of the damage, your writing style was a bit more on tune. However, simply because you described more and didn't have random bullet slapping, you won this. I won't preach to you about longevity, as I've seen your other work and know how long your posts usually are. Good job.
9/10
Winner: Slife
Hard decision... |