| Hmm...It's ok, but you should use speech bubbles, especially in the town scene. It was sorta hard to read that part. The Prolog was a good introduction for the charatcers but nothing really happens in part 1. Irby just slaps a bad guy. It was funny, though.
Make sure to spell check and use correct grammer!
Hey, can I appear in your comic since I'm a Shy Guy? I can make you a Lord Kenny Shy Guy sprite that matches those. |