| I'm gonna be honest here.
It's bad.
I'm not good at giving criticism. *rants about what if Glyph were here*
...but I'll give you some advice.
The panels are poorly done and the sprites often cut into the ground, or the ground cuts into the sprites. The red and orange parts of the fire cuts into the ground but the yellow doesn't. I see how this could make a 3d effect, but without the yellow it's terrible. In general, it's sloppy and there are stray pixels here and there. You could also put more effort into your backgrounds and effects. I don't think I would be able to tell that was a bush unless it was labelled. The textboxes need work as well. And... the plot seems... generic and incoherent. That's all I have to say about that. |