Then request so in this topic. I'll check out whatever piece of fanfiction (or stories in general, actually) you have written and tell you extensive information on what I thought was good and what desperately needs touch-ups to work better. Just say that you want something to be looked at, and then post the link to it, whether it be on fanfiction.net, a different web site, or even on this forum (due to the fact that I practically never use more than two sentences when generally commenting, or that I may have skipped over it without actually reading it).
Some notes, though:
-These are only my own opinions on your work. The fact that everyone else thought something was really great does not influence my thoughts.
-Be prepared to take the criticism. By saying that you want me to look at your writings here, you must realize that I will take every single word into account and examine it very carefully, and what may appear as times as harshly. This does not mean you suck as a writer. It just means that should you take some things listed into consideration, you could most likely do moderately better. You can either ignore me or listen, and when you put a request up, I assume you want the latter.
-Don't expect immediate results, especially if what you've written is long and in many chapters. [img]tongue.gif[/img]
-There are no number ratings. That ain't how it works.
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