Spoiler Below Few things I noticed: Many characters who have made minor appearances in previous books get a role here (Griphook)
Ron and Hermione as a couple is shoved into your face less subtley by the chapter, but that's not a problem.
Dumbledore really didn't tell him much. Jeez, you gotta leave him in the dark on something this important? This almost made me dislike Dumbledore. In Snape's memories him talking about how Harry would be sacrificed..... it feels like he betrayed him. But I guess that's made up for later.
I actually guessed about the whole Snape/Lily thing. Come on, he hates James Potter that much just because of some bullying? Not quite.
And most importantly: why Fred? Why? Why not PERCY for gossakes? Fred........No!