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Old 11-20-2007, 04:51 PM   #13
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Originally Posted by Wyborn View Post
If you're going to be in comic book form, I suggest writing it in script format. You might do it a little something like this.

PANEL 1

Ericman (the hero of our story) is walking along one day against a fairly generic background, maybe just plain white space. Nothing indicative of what's going to happen. Maybe he's whistling to himself.

Panel 2

Cue a black hole popping up out of nowhere.

Eric: WHAT THE CRAP

Panel 3

Ericman is sucked into the black hole.

Eric: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH-

Panel 4

Ericman is falling down a long tube lines with black hands that are reaching for him - this frame should be very visually full, an assault on the senses to contrast with the first three panels.

Eric: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH-


You could keep going on like this.
funny.I don't like putting a narrater
in my comics
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