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DELICIOUS POISON · 01-25-2008, 10:39 PM

Well that is a huge improvement over the first version. Only thing I'd criticize is that the technique you've employed for shading has made it very "busy" looking, which has a way of distracting the viewer from the subject. The new, thicker outlines definitely help, and the second frame is more attractive - the energy in the scribbley background shows the action much better in that frame than the simple action-lines you used before. It looks like you've got the idea, though. Kudos on making the words easier to find - very important, even if the speech isn't integral to the humor.

Great job, CL.

01-25-2008, 10:39 PM	#28
DELICIOUS POISON Retro Nintendo Supermod Art & Literature Mod Metroid Mod Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: I rub my tilde all over your asterisk Gender: Posts: 16,224 Thanks: 519 Thanked 1,367 Times in 704 Posts Points: 6,407.05 Bank: 2,464,338.98 Total Points: 2,470,746.03 Donate	Well that is a huge improvement over the first version. Only thing I'd criticize is that the technique you've employed for shading has made it very "busy" looking, which has a way of distracting the viewer from the subject. The new, thicker outlines definitely help, and the second frame is more attractive - the energy in the scribbley background shows the action much better in that frame than the simple action-lines you used before. It looks like you've got the idea, though. Kudos on making the words easier to find - very important, even if the speech isn't integral to the humor. Great job, CL. Last edited by GRENTLEMEN; 01-25-2008 at 10:54 PM.