It's not good. No sir.
- It looks like you tried cutting away parts that weren't necessary but didn't bother to take away whatever small pieces were left. Lazy much?
- Like LinkManDX said, put whatever is said first goes on top.
- Why is the text overlapping panels in those last panels? If your text won't fit, either shorten the dialogue or make the image smaller.
- The art leaves a lot to be desired. It looks really rushed and shoddy, even for an MS Paint drawing. Just look at your boy Jhonny. He reeks of hurriedness. And why does Veronica's right shoulder overlap her head? And the same poses? Really? Were you rushing out the door when you made this?
Your comic needs work. Get crackin'. |