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Old 07-03-2008, 05:34 PM   #11
GURU ANT
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^ I was thinking that same thing. Several lines have more syllables than it should.
Yeah, just read over it as well. Maybe shorten some syllables, and make sure at certain points you just shout UNNNNNNNN instaed of Damnit UNNNNNNN.
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