are we allowed to post aname that we drew? - VGF

BLUEShyGuy · 11-13-2007, 07:24 PM

so i drew this 5 months ago and posted in a forum i got banned from called z14.invisionfree.com/anothartist well basicly its a art forum

***Ace Mercury*** · 11-13-2007, 07:48 PM

Ah, an amateur artist. Well, the local mod'll decide whether it's okay to post own art; note that it is also okay to use correct spelling and grammar.

If you're open to criticism, I noticed the following things:

The eyes are kind of misshapen. Her left eye doesn't have the same shape as the left, even taking parallax into account. There are no eyelashes; girls especially have pronounced eyelashes that bring attention to the eyes. The eyes make or break an anime girl.
The nose is disproportionately low on the face; it should follow the curve of her left eye and end at about a third down.
The long hair strands look more like wet noodles than hair strands; especially the one coming off the top of her head.
She looks like she's missing the back half of her head; behind the ear there is supposed to be either neck or hair covering the neck.
The torso is kind of confusingly shaped. Side view? Is that her left arm in the back there?
Please crop the image before you post it

Ike · 11-13-2007, 07:54 PM

Also, on a side note, we do in fact have an art and literature forum which would have been a better place to put it. But at least you're in the ballpark.

As for the picture: Pretty much what Ace said. Part of the head seems to be missing and the eyes are a little bit off. But for the most part, it's not too bad.

MasaFACE · 11-14-2007, 01:38 AM

I personally have no objections. Good start by the way.

BLUEShyGuy · 11-14-2007, 08:05 PM

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Originally Posted by Ace Mercury

[*]The torso is kind of confusingly shaped. Side view? Is that her left arm in the back there?[/list]

no its the back of her shirt but ya like i said i drew it 5 months ago

LuWEEGEEman · 11-17-2007, 08:37 AM

no, you cant post aname. you can post anime, though.

MasaFACE · 11-18-2007, 08:20 AM

No, no, you can post Aname also. Diversity is fun.

11-13-2007, 07:24 PM	#1
BLUEShyGuy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: at my house Gender: Posts: 79 Thanks: 8 Thanked 8 Times in 2 Posts Points: 849.24 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 849.24 Donate	are we allowed to post aname that we drew? so i drew this 5 months ago and posted in a forum i got banned from called z14.invisionfree.com/anothartist well basicly its a art forum

11-13-2007, 07:48 PM	#2
*Ace Mercury* Marshmallow Knight ☆ Supermod Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: Southern Ontario Gender: Posts: 18,948 Thanks: 360 Thanked 1,501 Times in 783 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 98,135.91 Bank: 12,202,050.71 Total Points: 12,300,186.62 Donate	Ah, an amateur artist. Well, the local mod'll decide whether it's okay to post own art; note that it is also okay to use correct spelling and grammar. If you're open to criticism, I noticed the following things: The eyes are kind of misshapen. Her left eye doesn't have the same shape as the left, even taking parallax into account. There are no eyelashes; girls especially have pronounced eyelashes that bring attention to the eyes. The eyes make or break an anime girl. The nose is disproportionately low on the face; it should follow the curve of her left eye and end at about a third down. The long hair strands look more like wet noodles than hair strands; especially the one coming off the top of her head. She looks like she's missing the back half of her head; behind the ear there is supposed to be either neck or hair covering the neck. The torso is kind of confusingly shaped. Side view? Is that her left arm in the back there? Please crop the image before you post it

11-13-2007, 07:54 PM	#3
Ike Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: I don't know. Where do I live? Gender: Posts: 5,640 Thanks: 7 Thanked 157 Times in 110 Posts Points: 6,345.97 Bank: 181,693.55 Total Points: 188,039.52 Donate	Also, on a side note, we do in fact have an art and literature forum which would have been a better place to put it. But at least you're in the ballpark. As for the picture: Pretty much what Ace said. Part of the head seems to be missing and the eyes are a little bit off. But for the most part, it's not too bad.

11-14-2007, 01:38 AM	#4
MasaFACE Anime & Cartoon Mod Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In my pants Gender: Posts: 1,839 Thanks: 613 Thanked 182 Times in 114 Posts Points: 15,244.03 Bank: 6,609.11 Total Points: 21,853.14 Donate	I personally have no objections. Good start by the way.

11-17-2007, 08:37 AM	#6
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11-18-2007, 08:20 AM	#7
MasaFACE Anime & Cartoon Mod Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In my pants Gender: Posts: 1,839 Thanks: 613 Thanked 182 Times in 114 Posts Points: 15,244.03 Bank: 6,609.11 Total Points: 21,853.14 Donate	No, no, you can post Aname also. Diversity is fun.