VGF Big Brother, Week 6: Intro and Recap on W5

[ADVENTURE BUS]

Well, since I am a fan of big brother, and we're on VGF, I've decided to combine them together (with the fanfic of course), and some other twisted things, to give this a punch.
NOTE: I am not using nicknames given by VGFer's PDNS, I'm using a real name, not really THEIRS, but I'll be hinting whom they are, by personality, and things that hint their PDNs, but SOME go by their real name.
So are we all ready?

Day 01

It was a beautiful 1-roomed building, the lights shone on, to show an average heighted Asain-American woman, standing next to a television, and infront of a couch

"Hello, I'm Connie Chung, and welcome to Big Brother, we have brought 15 Housemates, from around the world, and put them in a house to live among another, for the next 4 months. Every week, one will be eliminated, well, by now, you know how the game goes."

Connie turned to the fifteen standing outside the house

"Houseguests, you may now enter the house." Connie said

The 15 houseguests, walked inside the house, claiming their rooms, and checking out the house before eventually returning to the main room, to have a seat.

"Wow, this is cool" said one,
"This ain't bad", said another
"I could get used to this", said a third.

"Well, it's time for you all to meet each other, now that you're all seated, please, you sir, at the end, tell us about yourself" Connie instructed

A tall man, dressed in a slightly dirty shirt, and some black pants, with a clean hair do, got up and sat in the middle chair.

"Well, how are you guys? My name is Aden Iron, but you can all me AI." He said

"Hello AI" everyone said

"I'm from Louisiana, and my age is not going to be revealed, I like to create and listen to music, so, yeah.... that's me", he said, as took a piece of cantelope from the tray, then sat down.

"Thanks Aden, now please come up here young woman." Connie said, pointing to the lady that sat next to AI, she was wearing a long pink dress, and had long hair going past her shoulders. She stood up and walked to the center.

"Hello everyone, my name is Saria, I'm from Australia"

"Cool," said a short, tanned kid in the back, And so it went for the other 12 guests,
being, the boys: a tanned boy, named "Ollie", Ace, Mosh, Drake, Kirby, Brandon, and Malik, Some of the girls included:
A Shy girl, named Jessica, Samantha, Shannon, Gia, Silvy and Sonja

"Ok houseguests, now that all of you presented yourselves, it's time for the first HoH Competition, everyone will need to find a partner, whoever is left out, will still have an important role." connie said

--Continued Later----

[ October 25, 2004, 07:57 PM: Message edited by: Rubber Band Man ]

[Brandon2390]

I'm a black 14 year old, just for a short description of me while your writing.

[S1x]

Sooooo tempted to edit that post so that I'm included in it. Ah, whatever.

This could be interesting. It'll mostly depend on how well you capture the way the members act.


Origin of Entria

[ADVENTURE BUS]

Bleh [img]tongue.gif[/img]
I was going to put you in there, but couldn't think of a creative name,

but don't worry, I'm going to do a whole second season, and a third, and so on, until people get tired of it. So eventually you WILL end up in it.

AND! Big mistake I just caught.
Connie= Julie, It's supposed to be JULIE not Connie

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Day 01

"So Houseguests, you are in 7 pairs,
Ace and Kirby, Brandon and Mosh, Aden and Saria, Ollie and Malik, Jessica and Shannon, Gia and Samantha, and finally Silvy and Sonja. Drake, you ahve opted to sit out, so please take a seat over in the corner, when you all get outside."

The houseguests all walked outside to see seven tredmills, all lined up in front of a piled-ish, puddles, of mud and dirt, they had now seen what they had chaned for.

"The name of this game is 'Run-A-Muck'" Julie implied
"Seven houseguests, one from each group, will step onto the tredmill, the other seven, will be on a podium, infront of them. I will ask 10 questions, on how the houseguests were surveyed before they entered, they will respond by holding their true or false flag. If you are correct, your partner's tredmill will remain at the same speed, if you miss the question, the tredmill's speed will increase, stopping at 8, but surely increasing your partner's chance for falling off, once he or she falls off, you both will be eliminated."
Julie turned and grabbed the question cards off the couch that sat next to her in the confined 1-room house.
"So, on the tredmill we have, Ace, Mosh, Aden, Ollie, Jessica, Samantha, and Silvy; leaving the others at the podium. Now we shall begin."
The contestants could all feel sweat coming from their hands already, Aden was already drenched before the first question even was asked.

"First question," began Julie, reading slowly, "Ollie said, that his favorite sport was football, true or false?" The houseguests, one by one raised their poles.
"The correct answer is FALSE, it is basketball, Kirby, Malik, and Gia, you got it incorrect, I am now increasing the speed by 1."

Ace and Kirby- 2 mph
Brandon and Mosh- 1mph
Aden and Saria- 1mph
Ollie and Malik- 2mph
Jessica and Shannon- 1 mph
Gia and Samantha- 2mph
Silvy and Sonja- 1mph

"Next question," Julie began, "Mosh hates eating at fast food restraunts, true or false?"
The houseguests, once again, slowly rose their paddles.
"The answer, is TRUE, everyone except for Malik, and Brandon, got it wrong."
So everyone put down their paddles. This routine went on for another 15 minutes, before finally coming to the twelfth question. It was down to Ollie and Malik, Mosh and Brandon, and Jessica, and Shannon, all at 6 mph on their tredmills.
"Question Twelve, Aden, is from Louisiana, true or false?" Julie asked, Malik, slowly rose his paddle to True, Shannon said false, and Brandon, said True.
"Shannon, you are incorrect, the answer is TRUE, Jessica and Shannon, your tredmill has been raised to 7 mph." Julie announced.
Jessica ran as hard as she could, and Ollie was pounding his legs harder and harder with each step, but Mosh was not pushing, we was easing along on the tredmill as if there was nothing to it. Before Julie could get out question thirteen, Jessica rolled off into the dirty-mud.
"Jessica, you and Shannon are eliminated," Julie announced, as she began to read the question, "Question Thirteen, Drake said that his nickname was Royal Toad, because of his love for 'Toad',a popular character, true or false?" Malik rose a FALSE, and Brandon, a TRUE.
"Wrong Malik, now I shall increase Ollie's speed to 7 mph." Julie exclaimed. Ollie couldn't do it anymore, his muscles gave out and he fell KA-PUT, onto the ground.
"Well, Ollie, you and Malik are eliminated. Now Drake, please pick whom, out of Mosh, and Brandon, you'd like to be HoH." Julie instructed, Drake looked at both competitors, analyzing what they endured from the competition, and how they took it, after seeing how calm Mosh was, and how brilliant Brandon was, he decided.
"I choose to crown Mosh, as the first HoH." Drake called,
"Well, let me make it official, Mosh, please grab that key off the couch over there, and place it around your neck!" Julie instructed once more, "Congratulations Mosh, you are the first HoH."

The cameras shifted from the yard, to the small shelter, with Julie.
"Well, now that Mosh has won HoH he will have to choose two people to nominate, then tune in to find out who will win the veto competition, and join us again next Tuesday, for who he evicts,goodbye for now, I am Julie chen."

The cameras pulled away.
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Now that is how the story will work, there will be diary personals, that will be written in Script form, it will switch on and off, it will be somewhat difficult to follow at first, but you will get used to it.

Now, I have introduced all 14 people almost greatly,
A guest apperance will go to whomever guesses the VGFers I have used (must guess at least 8 to be automatically qualified, unless more than 3 get 8 +, then it will go with the heighest)

Please give me feedback

PS- AND OH! I forgot, I will go day by day, not just airtimes when, it is fit to create an hour block, though SOME days will be like that (editing and not a full story), and every seven days Julie will show up.

So there's Day 01.

[ September 07, 2004, 05:02 PM: Message edited by: Trap Muzik ]

[[Dragoon]]

YAY! Excellent effort and creative ideas! Keep at it!

[ADVENTURE BUS]

Before I continue the story on, as I said the story will be a switch between script and paragraph, P being story, and S being diary room entries. Onward!


Key symbols:

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Morning Day 02:

Mosh and the others quickly went to outside the HoH bedroom door, Mosh slowly turned the key, and opened the door.

The 14 of them rushed inside to see the room, and the letters and items that he had gotten from home.
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Ace: Mosh got a lot of stuff from home
-shows Mosh opening and reading a letter-
Ace: A letter from home, a CD
-shows Mosh opening a CD Case
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Mosh finished reading the letter and put it back down, everyone hugged him and congradulated him once more before leaving.

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Kirby: I'm happy Mosh won the HoH, I just fear being nominated, it's so early in the game, so anyone is prime rib for nomination and eviction
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Brandon: Hopefully, teaming up with Mosh will give me a garunteed safety, I mean, we've already began to become friends, but it's only been a day
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Brandon goes into the HoH bedroom, with Drake, while Mosh is listening to his CD, and shuts the door behind him.

Brandon began to talk
"So Mosh, I was hoping we could make some sort of pact...." Brandon began, "I know it's early and we don't know each other too well, but I'd like to offer a proposal." He stopped, and turned to Drake, who continued on,
"You see, you save Myself and Brandon, and we save you when our turns come. We can even try and take each other to the final three." Drake finished
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Mosh: Drake and Brandon came to me, asking me if I wanted to make some sort of alliance with them
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"We can," began Mosh, "but, we can't give ANY hint, what so ever, that we are together, because that will garuntee, and early eviction."
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Mosh: I will form whatever alliances I can, too keep myself in this game, I will take them as far as I can, and then probably ditch them for whoever happens to be the weakest player at the time.
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The other two agreed with Mosh, and left the HoH room. Mosh had to make a desicion on whom to nominate by tommorow.
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Ollie, Malik, Saria and Aden are all playing cards at the table outside.
"Oh, so you're cuttin' now eh Aden?" Said Ollie, questioningly, he quickly laid down a higher card, and took the book.
"Damnit." Exclaimed Aden
"Hey, you guys, how bout we make ourselves a little deal?" Saria asked.
"An alliance? Already?" Brandon asked surprisingly, "I mean, no offense Saria, but don't you think we should get to know one another better first?"
"Yes, but well, ok, you make a good point, but we must promise this," Saria began, "We must promise that if one of us is up against another person in the house, the rest of us shall never cast a vote for each other.

They all agreed
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Mosh walked into the middle of the house, and shouted:
"EVERYONE GATHER ROUND IT'S TIME FOR THE LUXURY COMPETITION!" Within 3 minutes, everyone was on the couchm waiting for instructions. Mosh slowly read from a sheet,
"Well houseguests, you may have noticed during the first HoH competition, there was a Jacuuzi in the back, well, here's your chance to unlock it. PLease, follow me outback." Mosh lead the other 13 to the back.

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Gia: When we walked out back, we saw a giant pool of whipped cream
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The houseguests all cheered with excitement
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Malik: Man, that pool made me so damn craving for some ice cream.
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"Here's how it goes everyone," Mosh began to explain, " Inside this pool, are 14 of the giant plastic keys, we all have, all with names upon them, we must all work as a team to find all 14, then, we must choose seven, to run over to the second part, the giant puzzle, where the seven will piece together a giant puzzle. Complete this task within 12 minutes, and the Jacuuzi, is ours!"
Everyone cheered
"Houseguests, are we ready?" Mosh shouted,
"Yeah" they all exclaimed,
"3, 2, 1, GO!"
They all jumped into the pool
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Samantha: The hardest thing of all was trying to get these keys with about 20 somethin' asses in your face.
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Malik: Poor ollie was getting thrown around, him being so light
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Ollie: That was the worst thing, I've ever done in my life
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Everyone was scrambling, eventually all the keys were found, Mosh, Ollie, Aden, Gia, Shannon, Drake, and Saria all took off, and began placing the pieces rapidly
(9:59)
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Ollie: I was scrambling to find that last piece, it took me awhile to notice it was stuck on Aden's ass
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The puzzle was finished after 11 Minutes, the houseguests celebrated their victory, and headed inside to relax once more

DAY 02 Continued later

[Parrakarry]

i haev ben neglectored

It's pretty cool though. [img]tongue.gif[/img]

[ADVENTURE BUS]

Screw Day 02, we're going into Day 03

So I'll give you some VGF Names of who's used, then you can probably piece it together


Tubs, Toad556, AI, Prince Toad, HotD, SD, Samantha, SIG, ShyGirl, Sonic 5, Brandon2390, Malik, Silverwind, Ace Mercury, and KirbyKing.






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Ollie: When I woke up this morning, it hit me

-------Ollie is seen walking by the giant TV screen from which Julie Chen speaks to them, the screen reads "Nominations Today"-------------

Ollie: A hole opened in my chest

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Drake: Hopefully Mosh will stick to his word, and won't nominate me and Brandon, but we shall see.

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Mosh: I haven't got a damn clue who to nominate, we all don't know each other too well.

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Aden, whom was up before anyone, was already in the back yard, staring at the sky, Ollie soon came by to join him.

"Ade," Ollie began, "who do you think he's going to put up?"

"I don't know," Aden began, "it's too early in the game to tell, we don't know what he's thinking, and hell, he probably doesn't know who the hell to nominate, just know, you're not safe, no matter what." Ollie continued to look at the sky,

"Aden, you think it'd be smart to start the alliance with Saria?" Ollie asked,

"It'd be a good idea later on, but now, at this moment, we could keep it secret, but it'd be hard to do for two reasons:

1. There are too many people, it could get around, and no longer be secret, and

2. Having a strong alliance with 10 others in the game, if they notice, we'd all be picked off like flies.

You get me?" Explained Aden, "But, you and me, would be pretty good, whatd'ya say Ollie?" Aden asked, Ollie quickly turned to Aden, and said, "Sure."

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Aden: Hopefully creating an alliance with someone as shy as Ollie is good, because, I can trust, Ollie doesn't talk much, therefore it'd be hard to figure us out, plus there are only two, and people wouldn't suspect an alliance.

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Mosh, Brandon, and Malik were in the kitchen, making themselves breakfast,

"Man, it's going to be hell going on PB&J everyday." Malik started,

"Yea, but at least anyone who may be trying to lose weight, will." Mosh said

"Yea, Big Brother, the ultimate diet plan." Brandon said, they all laughed,

"Cheers, to the game." Mosh said, holding out his glass,

"CHEERS!" The other two said happily

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Mosh: I think that whoever I nominate today will be determined on, who I really know, and everyone's personality. I'm trying to meet everyone so I can get a good idea on who I want to stay around.

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Saria, Gia, Drake, and Samantha were all sitting in the main room on the couches, conversing with one another.

"So, you were really called 'Royal Shroom' among your friends?" Saria asked Drake,

"Yea, oddly enough, I don't REALLY even know why." (Figure out who he is yet?)

They laughed and talked some more, before Drake, and samantha got up and left.

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Mosh: Nominating was so hard, Ireally didn't know who's who, and who I should nominate

----Shows Mosh placing the keys inside the Circular key holder--------------

Mosh: But life's full of hard desicions.

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Mosh slowly walks out the room, and then goes around the house, telling people:

"It's time for the nomination ceremony."

One by one, the houseguests gathered, around the large table, before eventually filling it up.

Mosh stood in front, and began

"Welcome fellow mates, to the nomination ceremony, most of you know how it goes, but for those who don't, let me explain." Mosh let out a sigh, "I shall pull a key out of the first slot, I will read who's safe, and pass the holder to them, they then put the key around their neck, and pull the next key, and so on, and so on, until we have our two nominated people." Mosh put his hand on the key, and turned it so that it would come out.

"Brandon, you are safe." Mosh announced, giving Brandon his key, and the key holder. Brandon adjusted the holder, and pulled the next key out.

"Malik, you are safe." Brandon said, giving Malik's key and the box to him. Malik did as Brandon, he carefully and slowly pulled the key out,

"Drake, you are safe." He said, and pushed the box along. Drake then took the box, and quickly pulled the key out,

"Saria, you are safe," he announced. Drake passed the box along to Saria, who pulled Gia's key out, who pulled Ollie, who pulled Kirby, who pulled Samantha, who pulled Aden, this went on until Shannon and Ace were left.


"As you can see, Shannon, and Ace, I have nominated you. I ahve done this because I haven't realy got to meet you. I'm sorry if you're upset, but it's a game, and the first week, someone random has to go, that's the way it is, I'm sorry."


with that, Mosh returned the box, and ajouirned the meeting.


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Ace: Mosh, has nominated me, and I'm sure he knows about just as much as I do on why, we don't know each other, that's that.

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Shannon: Mosh, has been pissing me off these passed couple of days, I hope I don't get evicted, so I can win HoH and slap it back on him

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Now that Mosh has nominated two people, who will win the Power Of veto? Will they use it? And who will Mosh consider replacing them with?

Find out, Tuesday, 8/7C, (for you it's tommorow)

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END Day 03

[ September 09, 2004, 10:12 PM: Message edited by: Trap Muzik ]

[Cornell J]

Good jarb Andre!

Keep it going, I was going to do an Amazing Race, but eh, I don't think VGF can handle to "reality fanfics" at once.

[Brandon2390]

lol, damn, I hate being completely in some power. And I SHOULD HAVE HEAD OF HOUSEHOLD! Haha, but keep this goin, it's intresting.

[ADVENTURE BUS]

DAY 04

Shannon sat in the main room pouting and playing chess with Ace.

"Dude, I hope one of us wins the veto." Ace whispered to Shannon.
"One of us has to win, hopefully the other won't go and we can get back at Mosh." Shannon said.
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Ace: I don't think Shannon got the idea of me wanting to form an alliance. I think that she just wants to get back at Mosh.
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"Taking Mosh out would make me so happy, I swear it." Shannon said.
Ace made a move and checked and mated Shannon,
"Well, that's 2-4, wanna go again?" Shannon asked,
"Sure." Ace said
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Ollie and Aden were sitting by the pool.
"Look, I got an idea," Aden began, "we ally, yes, and we also throw EVERY HoH and veto competition until we go noticed. That way, no one will pay attention, because we won't be considered a 'threat', we later join with Saria and Malik, when there are only seven left. It'll then come to four of us, and we can play it out."

"Sounds cool," Ollie agreed, "but we can't plan ahead TOO far, so we throw every HoH and Veto competition, and worry about the final four when the final four gets here."
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Ollie: Aden had a great plan, I think we can REALLY pull this off, but once again, we've only been here 3 days.
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Malik, Brandon, Drake, and Mosh are sitting in the HoH room, discussing what they should do.

"I've been going around," Malik spoke up, "and it seems Aden and Saria are hanging very close,"
"Dude, I've noticed that too!" Drake shouted
"Well, I'm not sure if they're an alliance, they're probably just getting to meet each other." Mosh proposed, "Besides, I don't think Aden is going to be THAT much trouble."
"The guy is ****in' hilarious though!" Brandon said, laughing
(- Aden is standing with Brandon, telling him about a recent expierence, while Brandon is seen laughing-)
"I think we're trying to strategize to early," Malik said, "if anyone starts to pick up on us, we'll be picked off and knocked out this house, before even becoming eligible jurors."

True, they all said, Mosh turned around
"Hey, I want you guys to look at something." Mosh said, Brandon, Malik, and Drake turned towards Mosh's direction.
"Look at that picture." Mosh instructed, pointing to an apple picture on the wall, "that doesn't look.....real, I mean, LOOK at it."
The others looked at it, Brandon got up and began messing with the picture, a yellow plastic paper fell out; Brandon picked it up and read it:
"Dear HoH," he began, "this is not actually a picture, if you will please open your middle dresser drawer." Malik got up and pulled the drawer open, revealing a remote, Malik pressed the remote and the picture pulled up, revealing a spyscreen.
"Oh ****!" Mosh shouted, "I can't believe it!" He and the others sat in awe at the screen.
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The houseguests stood in the backyard after being called by Mosh,
"Now, it's time for the food competition!"
"Yay." The rest of the house aplauded.
"The game is called Bobbing for Food," began Mosh, "before you is a spinning table, that revolves constantly, one at a time, you will dig your face into the pie, grabbing a tag, with a ceratin meal on it. 2 people will represent a single day, whatever they win, we eat for that day." Mosh finished. "Now, who's ready for some pie?"
"YAY!" The rest cheered.
"So, here's who's representing what," Mosh turned to the board behind him, "Monday, will be represented by Malik, and Gia, Tuesday, Kirby and Ace; Wednesday, Ollie, and Aden; Thursday, Shannon, and Myself; Friday is Saria, and Saturday represented by Drake and Brandon. So are we ready?"

(I'll report what they won later)
DAY 05 and Veto Tommorow

[ADVENTURE BUS]

Day 05: VETO competition

Brandon stepped out into the backyard where Aden and Ollie were lying down.
"Oh, hey Brandon." Aden said, smiling, "what can I do ya for?"
"Well, I was wondering if you guys know of any alliances forming around." Brandon said
"We know a couple, especially yours," Ollie began,
"Mine?" Brandon interupted.
"Yea, just admit it," Aden smirked, "and we won't turn the house against you."
"Well, that's the thing, I'm not actually part of any alliance, I'm just well, there to be protected the first couple of weeksm but I have been thinking of ways to get them out without myself being a target. That way I can at least become a juror." Brandon explained, confidently, he put a toothpick into his mouth.
"Well," Ollie said, "we can......" Aden quickly put his hand over Ollie's mouth, to keep him from saying anything that'd threaten himself or Aden.
"I can't think of any alliances forming, except maybe Gia and Saria, they've been pretty close lately." Aden said, "but if we find more, we'll get back to you."
Brandon felt contempt and rose up to return to the house. Aden finally removed his hand from Ollie's mouth,
"We can't do anything like that, we don't know if he really is still with Mosh and Company." Aden explained.
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Ace and Shannon, were again together outside in the hammock.
"Promise me this," Ace began, "if oone of us is taken off the block by the veto, not only will we save each other, we will become a team to play in this game." At this time, Kirby came and sat in front, the three talked, while Mosh sat peering out a window at them, but they'd yet to notice.
"Well, so you two want me to help you, and use the veto on Shannon if I get it?" Kirby asked, "well, I'll try to win, but I don't know if my luck is that good."
"That's okay, as long as you try to get it. We're going to talk to Samantha, to see if she will help us." Ace pointed out.
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Gia, Samantha, Jessica, Silvy, and Sonja are all in one of the bedrooms, conversing amongst another, while Shannon, Ace, and Kirby were outside, as Aden and Ollie lay in the lawn, whilst Drake, and Mosh are in the HoH bedroom, and Saria is having a strategic chat with Brandon, and Malik.
"So boys, the girls in the house see Mosh as a prime target this week, but I want to keep him safe, as it is to my advantage, and probably yours." Saria explained
"So, who do you think should go next?" Malik asked.
"Whoever DOESN'T go out of Ace and Shannon, then we can remove Kirby, and then Samantha, she's really beggining to strategize." Saria continued.
"What about Aden, or Ollie? What do you think of them?" Brandon asked,
"What? Oh, to be honest, I want to keep them around." Saria said,
"Yea, that's not a bad idea, the five of us, we'll let them know we want to keep them around."
Malik said.
"No, wait, we do THIS," Brandon began to propose, "we tell them that we will not nominate one another, that way, we aren't too large, and we're still two different teams, this allows us to not be targeted upon as easily, we glide through, helping each other whenever possible, and eventually make it to the final five, it'll be 3 of us against them 2, we go on to the final three, and one of us comes out on top." Brandon took a breath.
"That's a good idea Brandon, but let's not get to far ahead of ourselves," Malik complimented, "for now let's focus on being two separate 'allied' alliances."
"Good with me." Saria said
"Same here" added Brandon
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Mosh called all the houseguests to the main room, 12 alined on the couch, with Ace and Shannon on the red chairs, and Mosh standing in front of them all, reading from a plastic sheet of paper.
"Well houseguests, congrats to us all on our five days so far. It is now time for us to participate in our first veto competition, but this year there is a twist to it. only six of us may compete, that means, each nominee picks another houseguest, and I myself, pick one. I will then pick one to host the challenge." Mosh said. The houseguests were shocked, as usually they were all able to participate.
"So, Ace, Shannon, please accompany me up here." Ace and Shannon walked up to Mosh,
"Please pick your players." Mosh said,
Shannon picked Silvy, and Ace picked Kirby, as Mosh picked Drake, and chose Aden to host, and they all walked out back.
"Welcome houseguests to the 'Veto Galore' contest," Aden began reading, "all around this yard are hidden vetos, 50 in total, at the end of two mintes, the person with the most vetos wins, but here's the catch, you may not use your hands! When I say go, you begin," Aden smirked and put down the sheet, "GO!"

The six rushed off looking for vetos, Shannon got a great start fitting at least 8 vetos between her lips within a good 50 seconds. Drake had some trouble picking his up, and Mosh was close behind. The only problem was that the vetos were hidden in extremely hard places, under a bush, underwater.
1:30
Shannon had well near 20, as Ace was close in second, and Mosh a near third. Before they knew it, time ran out.

"I don't know how you did it Shannon, but let's see how many you have first," Aden called, Shannon walked over and dropped her vetos upon the table, Aden began counting,
"1, 2, 3..... 16, 17, 18, 19, 20!" Aden exclaimed, "your turn Mosh, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8!" Aden shouted, and called for the rest of them.
Shannon had won, with 20, Ace came with 10, Mosh had 8, Kirby had 2, Drake had 1, and Silvy, 6.

"Well, congradulations Shannon, you have won the power of veto!" Aden announced, "The meeting shall be tommorow!" And with that, the houseguests all went back inside.

END DAY 05

[Brandon2390]

haha, I love this so far Andre. I can't help but think I'm gonna end up being in the 4 horsemen alliance, lol.

[ADVENTURE BUS]

Day 06.1: Veto Meeting
This part is short, The rest of Day06 will come tommorow with Day07, the first eviction.
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Shannon and Ace were rejoicing in the kitchen.
"I can't believe I won that!" Shannon exclaimed,
"Me neither, what matters now is that you remove yourself off the block," Ace reccomended, "we can convince Mosh to put up Samantha, and BOOM she's gone."
"How are you so sure?" Asked Shannon, concerned.
"Simple, I get Mosh to believe Samantha is backtalking, Mosh'll then call her out, she'll get pissed, and they'll vote her out to go home." Ace considered,
"Well, let's hope you're right." Shannon said.
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Mosh was with Drake in the HoH room.
"So, we know Shannon is going to remove herself, who should we put up?" Mosh asked.
"Well, Malik, and Brandon, have gone off kinda, you know, hopefully they'll wise up and return, or I'd consider putting Malik up." Drake said,
"I really want Ace out, so putting someone like Ollie, do you think would attract attention to ACe or what?" Mosh asked,
"Hmmm, he could, we can try that." Drake said
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Shannon called everyone in for the veto meeting, and all took a spot on the couch, with Ace and Shannon sitting on the red seats.

"Welcome, to the Power ofVeto meeting, as you know, I hold the veto, and can take either myself, or Ace off, but, I must, as a tradition, ask Ace why he thinks it should be used upon himself." Shannon sat, and Ace began speaking.
"Well, we all don't know each other real well, and for me to say, It's not fair, would totaly be inaccurate. So do what you must, and I will support it 100%." Ace said

"Well, I have decided I shall use the veto, on you Ace." shannon gave the veto to Ace, as he put it on, and got onto the other couch. "Mosh, if you'd please, now nominate anotehr in Ace's place." Shannon sat down, and Mosh stood,

"well, I don't think anyone expected this, so, I will nominate in your place, Brandon, would you please sit next to Ace in that chair?" Mosh announced.
Brandon sat next to Ace.

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Now that Shannon has used the veto, does that make her a target? And who will be evicted? Shannon or brandon?
Find out tommorow

[ADVENTURE BUS]

The TV Cut on to the "Big Brother" title screen

A voice is heard
"Last time on Big Brother." Various clips are shown,
"The houseguests quickly got to competition. Mosh became the first HoH, nominating Ace and Shannon." The clip cuts to Mosh's voice
"I nominate you Shannon and you Ace."
"But Shannon soon won the Veto, removing Ace off the block. Forcing Mosh to put someone else up."

Now, stay tuned to see who will be voted off, Shannon or Brandon.

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DAY 07: 1ST EVICTION NIGHT
The cameras were focused upon Julie as she got off the couch in the little house.
"Welcome all, I'm Julie Chen, and this is Big Brother 5.5, last week 15 new houseguests moved in and got situated, but first, tonight is eviction night, one of the two nominees, Shannon, or Brandon, will be evicted tonight, that will be decided by 12 of the houseguests. It's time to check in with the houseguests."
Julie turned to the television.
"Hello houseguests," she began
"HI! JULIE!" they spoke in unison
"As you all know, one of you will be evicted tonight, you all have already made your desicion, and I will announce the evicted later in the show, first I must ask you some questions," She paused, "Aden."
"Yes Julie?" Aden aasked,
"After living with this people for a week, do you think you can stand it an entire game?"
"Well, everyone in the house has their own personality, and it'sreal great living with them." Mosh cut him off,
"You won't be saying that a couple weeks from now."
They all laughed
"How true," Aden said, "Everyone here is unique, and funny, or at least has asense of humor, and I think I'll enjoy this for quite some time."
"Okay, well, I'll be back later to talk to you some more."
Julie turned to the main camera.
"Later tonight Shannon or Brandon will be evicted, but before we take our break, let's check and see what Ollie, Drake, Sonja and Gia are thinking about the two nominees.
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Drake: It'd definetly help me out to keep Brandon in this game, it would further our alliance, and give me time to see if I can trust him
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Sonja: Shannon is really cool, she is a bright girl, Brandon on the other hand I don't know too much about.
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Ollie: Brandon is cool, and there is no doubt in my mind on keeping him here, having him around would help Aden and I, I do believe.
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Gia: Both of the nominees are great, Shannon has got this great attitude, and Brandon is just an all-around good guy, it's going to be hard choosing.
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Drake: After a while I have come to my conclusion: I vote to evict Shannon
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Ollie: I vote to evict Shannon
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Gia: I vote to evict Shannon
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Sonja: I vote to evict Brandon.
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The viewer's Television screens cut to commercial.

The 15 were sitting in the house's main room, quietly, waiting upon Julie's return, out of boredom, Aden and Ollie began playing "Rock, Paper, Scissors" and Gia and Silvy began to spark conversation. A good minute or so later, Mosh was called through entercom, to the HoH bedroom. About 5 minutes later, Julie was back, but had yet to communicate to the houseguests, instead, she was at the cameras again, talking to the viewers.
"And we're back, as stated before, the 12 houseguests eligible to vote, have already voted, as you saw some diary entrees. But before we announce who's evicted, we're going to talk to Mosh inside the HoH room, on his last night of being HoH.
"Hello Mosh." She began
"Hi Julie" Mosh said,
"As you may know, our conversation cannot be heard so feel free to speak your mind." She stated
"Okay." Mosh replied
"So, during your first week in the house, have yo useen any alliances form?" Julie asked
"Yes, I've seen a couple, one in particular I'm worried about is Aden and Ollie, they've lain low all week, and I think if they go unnoticed they may pull out on top." Mosh explained.
"Of all people," Julie began, "why would you suspect them?"
"Well Julie, seeing previous Big Brothers, I've come to learn that those who go unnoticed, not winning an HoH, or Veto, or whatever, tend to make it farther than those who strive to win it, and whom eventually become big targets."
"Yes, that is true I guess." Julie said,
"Between these two nominees, who do you want to see leave the most? And who do you want to leave next week?"
"well, tonight, I'd have to say Shannon, but next week, I think that Aden should leave, and I'll try to open the other's eyes about him." Mosh stated.
"Well, thank you Mosh, you may join with your fellow houseguests." Julie announced, and turned to the camera.
"We'll be right back, but we're going to leave you with Diary entrees from Malik, Silvy, Saria, Aden, and Kirby."
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Kirby: Shannon is a cool girl, I've been with her since Day 1 in this huose, Brandon, I've come not to know him to well.
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Malik: Brandon is an ally, and shall be my ally for the time being, I'm not sure about Shannon, she's cool but, I don't think I'd be able to trust her as far as I can throw her.
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Silvy: I like both members, but I don't know Brandon too well, he's been kinda shadowy, and I don't particularly like shadowy.
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Saria: Shannon is my best friend in this house, but I'm not sure if I can trust her enough to protect me like Brandon will.
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Aden: I don't even know why I'm spending time on this, I vote to evict Shannon
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Saria: I vote to evict Shannon
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Malik: I vote to evict Shannon
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Silvy: I vote to evict Brandon
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Kirby: I vote to evict Brandon
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The viewers were once again on commercial
The houseguests just waited another 5 minutes waiting on Julie.
About 5 or so minutes later, the focus was back on Julie,
"Welcome back, it's time to reveal the votes."
Julie turned to the TV
"Ok houseguests, in this envelope, I have the votes, when I read the desicion, the evicted houseguest will have one minute to say goodbye."
Julie opened up the envelope,
"By A vote of 7-5, Shannon, you are evicted from the Big Brother house."
Tears began to run down Samantha's eyes, as she hugged Shannon.
"It'll be okay, don't cry," she said to her, holding her hand. Ollie came along, and walked with her to the door, hugging her right before she left. Shannon exited the door, and headed down the ramp, into the little building.
"Hey Julie, nice to meet you in person." Shannon said, cheerfully hugging Julie, and they sat down on the couch.
The view shifted back to the house, where they were all standing by the door, and discussing the eviction. The camera then shifted right back to Julie and Shannon.
"So, first one out, by a VERY close vote, how does that make you feel?" Julie asked.
"I feel great, everyone in that house is great, they are all cool people, and I can't get mad at a game you know, that happens, you win some, you lose some." Shannon said
"So, are you mad at Mosh for putting you on the block?" Julie asked,
"No, I'm not, it's the first week, nobody really knows anybody, so yea, that's it." Shannon said.
"Well, in the event that you were evicted, all your housemates filmed a message for you, if you wanna look over here." Julie pointed to the screen.

After seeing the messages, Shannon almost dropped,
"Well, you're not part of the Jury, but you will return finale night." Julie shook Shannon's hand and turned to the screen.
"When we come back, the houseguests will compete in their next HoH competition."

They cut to break and came back a good 5 minutes later.
"Welcome back, it's time for the new HoH competition." She turned to the screen to talk to the houseguests,
"Well houseguests, it's time for the second HoH competition, Mosh, being the outgoing HoH, you are not eligible to compete. This competition is called "Majority Rules", I will ask a question about a personality, and you will turn the sqaure to the face of whom you think the majority of the house will say if you get it wrong you are out, when we get to the final two or, after 10 questions, there will be a tiebreak question. Are you ready? Here is the first question." She picked up the cards,
"Question 1: Who would the house say is the gutsiest player?"
The houseguests all turned their squares.
"6 of you said Drake, 2 said Aden, 3 said Ace, and 2 more said Samantha, that means, Kirby, Saria, Drake, Jessica, Gia, Silvy, and Sonja are eliminated."
Malik and the rest stepped down and sat by Mosh.
"Question 2: Who would the house say has the most brains?" The houseguest turned their squares,
"Five of you said Aden, I'm sorry Aden, but you missed that one."
Aden took a seat.
"Question 3: Who would be the most likely to break expensice furniture?"
The squares were once again turned.
"All of you agree, and say Ollie. Question 4: Given the opportunity, who would be most likely to sign a recording contract?"
The faces showed
"Three of you said Brandon, Ollie, and Malik, please sit down."
Ollie and Malik sat down,
"So, it's down to Brandon, Samantha, and Ace; Question 5: Which of the houseguests would be most likely to begin acting?"
The competitors chose
"So, Samantha and Ace say Malik, Brandon I'm sorry but you are eliminated." Brandon sat down,
"Tiebreaker question, if you'd please pull out the white boards, and markers," Julie instructed
"Your question is, guess the age of all the huoseguests combined, whoever goes closest without going over wins."
The houseguests wrote their answers down,
"On 3, I ask you to reveal your answer, 1, 2, 3."
Samantha revealed: 212
Ace revealed: 226
"The correct answer is, 258, congradualtions Ace, you are the new HoH!" Ace jumped up and down, and hugged Kirby, and Samantha.

Julie turned to the audience,
"Now that Ace is HoH, who will he nominate? Tune in Saturday, to find out."

With that the cameras backed away from the house.

[Toad556]

Hmmm, doin' good Ryan, that is, because, I am in it.

[Brandon2390]

um...whos Ryan?

Anyways, good job, this is getting done very well, and is playing out just like the television show. Can't wait to see who wins.

[ADVENTURE BUS]

I'm Ryan, Ryan is my real name

[Brandon2390]

LOL, how come you never told me? Well, thats cool anyways.