My First Comic (I so hope)

Callipso · 09-18-2004, 03:16 PM

[ September 18, 2004, 03:25 PM: Message edited by: Greg_The_Squid_Gui ]

Callipso · 09-18-2004, 03:30 PM

Any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated

Glyph Phoenix · 09-18-2004, 05:34 PM

When resizing images, make sure to resize them evenly. Like 100% to 200% or 300% with really small sprites. That's the main thing you should worry about.

You might want to use better looking special effects and cleaner text boxes. Also, a lot of stuff is capitalized. Your punctuation could use some improvement. Besides that, it's looking pretty good. Really good. Nice usage of words, so far no one's said anything out of character or stupid.

Hey... is it just me, or is Gannondorf a custom sprite that you didn't give credit for?

OcarinaMan · 09-18-2004, 10:03 PM

It's spelled "Ganondorf"

Callipso · 09-20-2004, 10:02 AM

Credits are definantly coming soon I just gotta get them all together. I have about 8 more comix coming

Callipso · 09-20-2004, 11:53 AM

[ September 20, 2004, 03:36 PM: Message edited by: Greg_The_Squid_Gui ]

sladd54 · 09-20-2004, 07:55 PM

Not that funny, but pretty good. I see potential for it.

**L007 is Cooler than Dylan** · 09-20-2004, 08:08 PM

Some nitpicks:

1) The white parts on the edges. Those are a little annoying. Try moving the comic. However, considering the size of them, it may be a little hard. Just try not to make the whiteness appear the edges.

2) Using the lines to show movement? Not exactly professional looking. Of course, to make it neat looking, you would need Photoshop. Who would pay for that stuff?

Anyways, yeah, it's turning out pretty good, otherwise.

Visit Chao Adventures in the Comix Thread! Go and read them, now!

09-18-2004, 03:16 PM	#1
Callipso Newbie Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: The Moon Special Base Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,182.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,682.00 Donate	[ September 18, 2004, 03:25 PM: Message edited by: Greg_The_Squid_Gui ]

09-18-2004, 03:30 PM	#2
Callipso Newbie Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: The Moon Special Base Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,182.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,682.00 Donate	Any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated

09-18-2004, 05:34 PM	#3
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 7,020.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,520.00 Donate	When resizing images, make sure to resize them evenly. Like 100% to 200% or 300% with really small sprites. That's the main thing you should worry about. You might want to use better looking special effects and cleaner text boxes. Also, a lot of stuff is capitalized. Your punctuation could use some improvement. Besides that, it's looking pretty good. Really good. Nice usage of words, so far no one's said anything out of character or stupid. Hey... is it just me, or is Gannondorf a custom sprite that you didn't give credit for?

09-18-2004, 10:03 PM	#4
OcarinaMan Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Ikana Castle Posts: 2,481 Thanks: 1 Thanked 5 Times in 3 Posts Points: 9,411.77 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 9,911.77 Donate	It's spelled "Ganondorf"

09-20-2004, 10:02 AM	#5
Callipso Newbie Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: The Moon Special Base Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,182.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,682.00 Donate	Credits are definantly coming soon I just gotta get them all together. I have about 8 more comix coming

09-20-2004, 11:53 AM	#6
Callipso Newbie Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: The Moon Special Base Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,182.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,682.00 Donate	[ September 20, 2004, 03:36 PM: Message edited by: Greg_The_Squid_Gui ]

09-20-2004, 07:55 PM	#7
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,217.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,717.00 Donate	Not that funny, but pretty good. I see potential for it.

09-20-2004, 08:08 PM	#8
L007 is Cooler than Dylan WELL I AM. Join Date: May 2001 Location: Farmerland. Gender: Posts: 7,536 Thanks: 101 Thanked 343 Times in 202 Posts Points: 1,905.03 Bank: 32,057.30 Total Points: 33,962.33 Donate	Some nitpicks: 1) The white parts on the edges. Those are a little annoying. Try moving the comic. However, considering the size of them, it may be a little hard. Just try not to make the whiteness appear the edges. 2) Using the lines to show movement? Not exactly professional looking. Of course, to make it neat looking, you would need Photoshop. Who would pay for that stuff? Anyways, yeah, it's turning out pretty good, otherwise. Visit Chao Adventures in the Comix Thread! Go and read them, now!