Leo and Doma comics/sprites - Page 2 - VGF

Cataclysmic Paradox · 11-24-2004, 04:18 AM

Here's a new comic.

Glyph Phoenix · 11-24-2004, 06:12 AM

This last one's not knee-slapping funny like most of NC is, but funny and wacky in a way that makes me want to read more.

thunt · 11-24-2004, 10:03 AM

I remember that lucky object joke from another source, except it was a hat in Nickeloden Magazine.

Alink - VCR Man. VCR. · 11-24-2004, 09:38 PM

Heh. These comics are preeeeeetty cool. ;PP

RMC · 11-25-2004, 04:30 PM

Nice. I had a lucky penny once, but, sadly, I spent it. Anywho, keep those comics coming, and Happy Thanksgiving, everyone!

[ November 26, 2004, 12:45 PM: Message edited by: joe_hatter wants to be a mod ]

Cataclysmic Paradox · 11-27-2004, 01:39 AM

Thanks for all the comments. I'm starting an extended series, Attack of the Mystery Men. Here's part one, it's short, but the next one should be longer.

[ November 27, 2004, 11:55 PM: Message edited by: Jumi Jao ]

Glyph Phoenix · 11-27-2004, 05:31 AM

Why are those four panels repeated?

Sim Kid · 11-27-2004, 02:23 PM

The colour of the background makes some of the text hard to read.

Cataclysmic Paradox · 11-28-2004, 01:34 AM

How could I miss those panels? It's fixed now. I found the text easy to read. Maybe Leo's was too light.

sladd54 · 11-28-2004, 09:15 AM

I liked it. it was pretty funny how he just told somebody to help him. Wacky, stupid, and pretty lame. That's 21th centruy comedy, baby!

Cataclysmic Paradox · 11-28-2004, 07:53 PM

Thanks. I'm done with part 2. Here it is.

[ November 28, 2004, 08:28 PM: Message edited by: Jumi Jao ]

Alink - VCR Man. VCR. · 11-29-2004, 10:28 AM

;P That poor, cakeless, soul.

RMC · 11-29-2004, 11:55 AM

Heh, it was okay not great but okay and the text is still kind of hard to read. Other then that its okay.

Beam Yosho the Drunkard · 11-29-2004, 01:12 PM

[img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img]

Great stuff, man.

thunt · 11-29-2004, 04:10 PM

It's good. Still, the text is hard to read.

sladd54 · 11-29-2004, 04:23 PM

Can you please make it easier to read the text? The color is fine for me, it's just That it's hard to know who is talking when.
What I do in my comics is list them talking from top to bottom, maybe you should try it too?

Cataclysmic Paradox · 11-29-2004, 10:48 PM

I'll try to make the text better in the part 4. Here's part 3. I'm making these things fast...

Glyph Phoenix · 11-30-2004, 12:58 AM

Placing cluttered text over characters makes baby Mario cry.

Cataclysmic Paradox · 11-30-2004, 01:27 AM

I don't think I placed any text on characters.

Glyph Phoenix · 11-30-2004, 03:29 AM

Look at Doma in the twenty-fourth panel. That looks like crap.

I guess it's not specifically on Doma, but it still covers that thing below Doma and, as a rule of thumb, text that has to surround a character is crap text.

11-24-2004, 04:18 AM	#21
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11-24-2004, 06:12 AM	#22
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Points: 6,416.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 6,916.00 Donate	This last one's not knee-slapping funny like most of NC is, but funny and wacky in a way that makes me want to read more.

11-24-2004, 10:03 AM	#23
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,287.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,787.00 Donate	I remember that lucky object joke from another source, except it was a hat in Nickeloden Magazine.

11-24-2004, 09:38 PM	#24
Alink - VCR Man. VCR. Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Behind The Wall Of Sleep. Gender: Posts: 768 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 4,506.99 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 4,506.99 Donate	Heh. These comics are preeeeeetty cool. ;PP

11-25-2004, 04:30 PM	#25
RMC Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenix, NY Posts: 1,129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 9,446.05 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 9,946.05 Donate	Nice. I had a lucky penny once, but, sadly, I spent it. Anywho, keep those comics coming, and Happy Thanksgiving, everyone! [ November 26, 2004, 12:45 PM: Message edited by: joe_hatter wants to be a mod ]

11-27-2004, 01:39 AM	#26
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,603.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,222.27 Donate	Thanks for all the comments. I'm starting an extended series, Attack of the Mystery Men. Here's part one, it's short, but the next one should be longer. [ November 27, 2004, 11:55 PM: Message edited by: Jumi Jao ]

11-27-2004, 05:31 AM	#27
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Points: 6,416.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 6,916.00 Donate	Why are those four panels repeated?

11-27-2004, 02:23 PM	#28
Sim Kid Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: The state of Denial Gender: Posts: 6,869 Thanks: 9 Thanked 54 Times in 29 Posts Points: 31,336.04 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 31,836.04 Donate	The colour of the background makes some of the text hard to read.

11-28-2004, 01:34 AM	#29
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,603.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,222.27 Donate	How could I miss those panels? It's fixed now. I found the text easy to read. Maybe Leo's was too light.

11-28-2004, 09:15 AM	#30
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 3,964.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,464.00 Donate	I liked it. it was pretty funny how he just told somebody to help him. Wacky, stupid, and pretty lame. That's 21th centruy comedy, baby!

11-28-2004, 07:53 PM	#31
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,603.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,222.27 Donate	Thanks. I'm done with part 2. Here it is. [ November 28, 2004, 08:28 PM: Message edited by: Jumi Jao ]

11-29-2004, 10:28 AM	#32
Alink - VCR Man. VCR. Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Behind The Wall Of Sleep. Gender: Posts: 768 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 4,506.99 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 4,506.99 Donate	;P That poor, cakeless, soul.

11-29-2004, 11:55 AM	#33
RMC Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenix, NY Posts: 1,129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 9,446.05 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 9,946.05 Donate	Heh, it was okay not great but okay and the text is still kind of hard to read. Other then that its okay.

11-29-2004, 01:12 PM	#34
Beam Yosho the Drunkard Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: The oversized rock of Hawaii. Gender: Posts: 5,665 Thanks: 5 Thanked 17 Times in 13 Posts Points: 22,018.39 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 22,518.39 Donate	[img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img] Great stuff, man.

11-29-2004, 04:10 PM	#35
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,287.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,787.00 Donate	It's good. Still, the text is hard to read.

11-29-2004, 04:23 PM	#36
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 3,964.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,464.00 Donate	Can you please make it easier to read the text? The color is fine for me, it's just That it's hard to know who is talking when. What I do in my comics is list them talking from top to bottom, maybe you should try it too?

11-29-2004, 10:48 PM	#37
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,603.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,222.27 Donate	I'll try to make the text better in the part 4. Here's part 3. I'm making these things fast...

11-30-2004, 12:58 AM	#38
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Points: 6,416.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 6,916.00 Donate	Placing cluttered text over characters makes baby Mario cry.

11-30-2004, 01:27 AM	#39
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,603.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,222.27 Donate	I don't think I placed any text on characters.

11-30-2004, 03:29 AM	#40
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Points: 6,416.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 6,916.00 Donate	Look at Doma in the twenty-fourth panel. That looks like crap. I guess it's not specifically on Doma, but it still covers that thing below Doma and, as a rule of thumb, text that has to surround a character is crap text.