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Alink - VCR Man. VCR. · 11-30-2004, 10:31 AM

Doma's cool ;P

Looking forward to the next installment.

Cataclysmic Paradox · 11-30-2004, 05:54 PM

I fixed that text in part 3, and that thing under Doma is a painting. I'm starting part 4 right now.

thunt · 12-01-2004, 03:26 PM

That blue guy with no aim looks... like... JADD!
As if it wasn't obvious anyway. Am I right?

Cataclysmic Paradox · 12-01-2004, 07:31 PM

Right. Here's part 4, and trust me, when you see Trinity in part 5, you'll be amazed.

[ December 01, 2004, 08:09 PM: Message edited by: Jumi Jao ]

thunt · 12-02-2004, 12:43 PM

Yesssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!
I was right!
A tip: try making the text bold. It's easier to read.

X-3 · 12-02-2004, 02:39 PM

This comic rocks.

Cataclysmic Paradox · 12-02-2004, 07:25 PM

I'll make the text in part 5 bold. It might be up later tonight.

santa · 12-02-2004, 09:42 PM

Alien: u r 2 kewl

Prinny

ood, you can;t spell

Alien:Yetts i camn! Aniwa, kewl comix, dood.

thunt · 12-03-2004, 06:07 PM

Uh, what?

ludwigvan · 12-03-2004, 06:45 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by alien_offspring:
Alien: u r 2 kewl

Prinnyood, you can;t spell

Alien:Yetts i camn! Aniwa, kewl comix, dood.

What Tigt said. I might delete that post.

Mr.Hammermap · 12-03-2004, 11:30 PM

Your comics probably would rate higher than mine would. You rock.

Cataclysmic Paradox · 12-04-2004, 12:44 AM

Thanks. Here's part 5, I would have had it done earlier, but I was obsessed with beating Metal Shark Player's level on Megaman X6.

thunt · 12-04-2004, 12:23 PM

Yay! New comic! I like how it's going so far. Oh, are the walls in Dr. Randomguy's house supposed to be grainy? I don't remember that from before.

Cataclysmic Paradox · 12-04-2004, 08:17 PM

I don't know why they're like that. I couldn't fix it, either. I'm starting part 6.

[ December 05, 2004, 02:00 AM: Message edited by: Jumi Jao ]

A Genius · 12-05-2004, 01:14 PM

The story is kind of lacking, but it looks like its on its home stretch now, so I wouldn't worry about that at this point. The humor and images are about as good as you can expect. The paciong is nice. Good job.

-A Genius (When you move onto the next story, just try to be more creative, okay? Awakening dark forces has been done already. A lot. Otherwise, I'd give it an A.)

Cataclysmic Paradox · 12-07-2004, 05:36 PM

Part 6! It's probably going to go up to at least 8 parts.

thunt · 12-07-2004, 05:45 PM

Part of the right frames are cut off.

Cataclysmic Paradox · 12-07-2004, 05:49 PM

Where, the last 4 frames? That's where Plant X entered.

thunt · 12-07-2004, 05:51 PM

Whoops, sorry. They didn't show up on my computer until now.

A Genius · 12-07-2004, 10:11 PM

Yeah. Good job.

-A Genius (I'd give you a 10/10 of ten, but I don't like rating things 10/10, so you're still a niner. DUMBASS.)

11-30-2004, 10:31 AM	#41
Alink - VCR Man. VCR. Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Behind The Wall Of Sleep. Gender: Posts: 768 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 4,623.99 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 4,623.99 Donate	Doma's cool ;P Looking forward to the next installment.

11-30-2004, 05:54 PM	#42
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,709.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,328.27 Donate	I fixed that text in part 3, and that thing under Doma is a painting. I'm starting part 4 right now.

12-01-2004, 03:26 PM	#43
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,361.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,861.00 Donate	That blue guy with no aim looks... like... JADD! As if it wasn't obvious anyway. Am I right?

12-01-2004, 07:31 PM	#44
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,709.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,328.27 Donate	Right. Here's part 4, and trust me, when you see Trinity in part 5, you'll be amazed. [ December 01, 2004, 08:09 PM: Message edited by: Jumi Jao ]

12-02-2004, 12:43 PM	#45
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,361.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,861.00 Donate	Yesssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!! I was right! A tip: try making the text bold. It's easier to read.

12-02-2004, 02:39 PM	#46
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,001 Thanks: 263 Thanked 273 Times in 202 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 5,311.53 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,311.53 Donate	This comic rocks.

12-02-2004, 07:25 PM	#47
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,709.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,328.27 Donate	I'll make the text in part 5 bold. It might be up later tonight.

12-02-2004, 09:42 PM	#48
santa Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: The North Pole Gender: Posts: 208 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 1,065.57 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,565.57 Donate	Alien: u r 2 kewl Prinnyood, you can;t spell Alien:Yetts i camn! Aniwa, kewl comix, dood.

12-03-2004, 06:07 PM	#49
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,361.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,861.00 Donate	Uh, what?

12-03-2004, 11:30 PM	#51
Mr.Hammermap Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: POUNDS OF BEER Posts: 479 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,584.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 6,084.00 Donate	Your comics probably would rate higher than mine would. You rock.

12-04-2004, 12:44 AM	#52
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,709.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,328.27 Donate	Thanks. Here's part 5, I would have had it done earlier, but I was obsessed with beating Metal Shark Player's level on Megaman X6.

12-04-2004, 12:23 PM	#53
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,361.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,861.00 Donate	Yay! New comic! I like how it's going so far. Oh, are the walls in Dr. Randomguy's house supposed to be grainy? I don't remember that from before.

12-04-2004, 08:17 PM	#54
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,709.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,328.27 Donate	I don't know why they're like that. I couldn't fix it, either. I'm starting part 6. [ December 05, 2004, 02:00 AM: Message edited by: Jumi Jao ]

12-05-2004, 01:14 PM	#55
A Genius Senior Member Join Date: May 2001 Location: Place Posts: 2,657 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 2,298.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 2,798.00 Donate	The story is kind of lacking, but it looks like its on its home stretch now, so I wouldn't worry about that at this point. The humor and images are about as good as you can expect. The paciong is nice. Good job. -A Genius (When you move onto the next story, just try to be more creative, okay? Awakening dark forces has been done already. A lot. Otherwise, I'd give it an A.)

12-07-2004, 05:36 PM	#56
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,709.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,328.27 Donate	Part 6! It's probably going to go up to at least 8 parts.

12-07-2004, 05:45 PM	#57
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,361.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,861.00 Donate	Part of the right frames are cut off.

12-07-2004, 05:49 PM	#58
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,709.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,328.27 Donate	Where, the last 4 frames? That's where Plant X entered.

12-07-2004, 05:51 PM	#59
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,361.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,861.00 Donate	Whoops, sorry. They didn't show up on my computer until now.

12-07-2004, 10:11 PM	#60
A Genius Senior Member Join Date: May 2001 Location: Place Posts: 2,657 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 2,298.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 2,798.00 Donate	Yeah. Good job. -A Genius (I'd give you a 10/10 of ten, but I don't like rating things 10/10, so you're still a niner. DUMBASS.)