Fusion! Yeah, not DBZ related. - VGF

dux_is_me · 11-02-2004, 04:51 PM

For some reason, I decided to do a refreshing course on comic making, and ended up with this.

Strip 0 - Just your average intro strip.

Strip 1 - Or was it 6?

Strip 2 - It was evident.

Strip 3 - Enter the Metroid Curse

Reply or suffer.

[ November 02, 2004, 03:53 PM: Message edited by: Dux soy yo ]

X-3 · 11-02-2004, 05:05 PM

Good so far, but what does Samus have to do with the plot?

ludwigvan · 11-02-2004, 05:36 PM

Patience, dude. I think he's trying to tie Samus in. Dux, don't spoil it because X-3 didn't understand it, even though I have a feeling what the tie might be.

sladd54 · 11-02-2004, 06:51 PM

Mario and Luigi have turned up in Metroid Land. Not that hard to figure out.

Good so far.

dux_is_me · 11-02-2004, 09:22 PM

Quote:

Metroid Land

LOL. And not in the web-slang meaning of the acronym. I actually laughed out loud when i read that. Heh!

Anyway, it was easy. Or was it?

Strip 4 - No Powerups... Allowed?

Strip 5 - Yeah, no powerups... allowed.

[ November 02, 2004, 08:25 PM: Message edited by: Dux soy yo ]

dux_is_me · 11-03-2004, 05:02 PM

Come on. I know you people are in there. I need comments!

Strip 6 - Ladies and Gentlemen!

dux_is_me · 11-04-2004, 05:17 PM

People, comments sell well at Dux Land.

Strip 7 - The Bros'. Combat Skills

Mikhail Gorbachev · 11-05-2004, 03:38 PM

Pretty good comics, but you should try to make them funnier.

Cataclysmic Paradox · 11-05-2004, 07:15 PM

I agree. It's done well, but it could be funnier.

dux_is_me · 11-05-2004, 11:54 PM

Oh well. Guess humor is in the eye of the beholder after all. Suggestiong for increasing humor value would help. I'm not really used to writing jokes for someone else.

Strip 8 - Warning! Lame Brother Activity Detected!

dux_is_me · 11-06-2004, 04:16 PM

Strip 1-0 - Enter the Angry Mech!

Sim Kid · 11-06-2004, 06:27 PM

Please seperate the panels (Left-to-right) a bit better please. It looks like they're all just one panel.

dux_is_me · 11-06-2004, 10:31 PM

I thought you'd be able to discern each panel, they're separated by wall... Sorry.

dux_is_me · 11-13-2004, 03:08 PM

Okay, here's some more of Chapter 2. This is the point at which I began experimenting with spraypaint effects (like what LvK did sometime ago) and I don't yet know if it looks cool, okay, crappy, or n00bish.

Strip 1-1: Teh Curious Bros.

Strip 1-2: Stupid missiles appearing out of nowhere.

Strip 1-3: Teh Angry Bros.

[ November 13, 2004, 02:14 PM: Message edited by: Dux soy yo ]

Cataclysmic Paradox · 11-13-2004, 08:01 PM

I think it's nice. It's a good comic, you should keep it up.

Donezdude · 11-13-2004, 10:34 PM

Very good! Keep it up!

Hans Kjellin · 11-14-2004, 08:03 AM

I like it!

RMC · 11-14-2004, 01:09 PM

I really dont get the Metroid jokes but other than that nice keep them coming

yoshimario564 · 11-15-2004, 06:13 PM

hahahaaha...lvk was right u worked the metroid in .... thats pretty good(on here pretty good is like awesome comliments arent really spontanius around here)(spontanius is a big word) well i like the jokes there funny because the metroid is actully like a moron.....keep em' coming dont let anyone change your mind....

11-02-2004, 04:51 PM	#1
dux_is_me Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Colombia, with an O. Gender: Posts: 796 Thanks: 7 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 1,492.23 Bank: 14,762.93 Total Points: 16,255.16 Donate	For some reason, I decided to do a refreshing course on comic making, and ended up with this. Strip 0 - Just your average intro strip. Strip 1 - Or was it 6? Strip 2 - It was evident. Strip 3 - Enter the Metroid Curse Reply or suffer. [ November 02, 2004, 03:53 PM: Message edited by: Dux soy yo ]

11-02-2004, 05:05 PM	#2
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,006 Thanks: 264 Thanked 276 Times in 205 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 5,452.31 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,452.31 Donate	Good so far, but what does Samus have to do with the plot?

11-02-2004, 05:36 PM	#3
ludwigvan Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: The well of wishes. Gender: Posts: 5,444 Thanks: 3 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Points: 10,540.44 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 11,040.44 Donate	Patience, dude. I think he's trying to tie Samus in. Dux, don't spoil it because X-3 didn't understand it, even though I have a feeling what the tie might be.

11-02-2004, 06:51 PM	#4
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,026.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,526.00 Donate	Mario and Luigi have turned up in Metroid Land. Not that hard to figure out. Good so far.

11-03-2004, 05:02 PM	#6
dux_is_me Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Colombia, with an O. Gender: Posts: 796 Thanks: 7 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 1,492.23 Bank: 14,762.93 Total Points: 16,255.16 Donate	Come on. I know you people are in there. I need comments! Strip 6 - Ladies and Gentlemen!

11-04-2004, 05:17 PM	#7
dux_is_me Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Colombia, with an O. Gender: Posts: 796 Thanks: 7 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 1,492.23 Bank: 14,762.93 Total Points: 16,255.16 Donate	People, comments sell well at Dux Land. Strip 7 - The Bros'. Combat Skills

11-05-2004, 03:38 PM	#8
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,481 Thanks: 25 Thanked 60 Times in 45 Posts Points: 16.00 Bank: 23,461.58 Total Points: 23,477.58 Donate	Pretty good comics, but you should try to make them funnier.

11-05-2004, 07:15 PM	#9
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,711.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,330.27 Donate	I agree. It's done well, but it could be funnier.

11-05-2004, 11:54 PM	#10
dux_is_me Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Colombia, with an O. Gender: Posts: 796 Thanks: 7 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 1,492.23 Bank: 14,762.93 Total Points: 16,255.16 Donate	Oh well. Guess humor is in the eye of the beholder after all. Suggestiong for increasing humor value would help. I'm not really used to writing jokes for someone else. Strip 8 - Warning! Lame Brother Activity Detected!

11-06-2004, 04:16 PM	#11
dux_is_me Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Colombia, with an O. Gender: Posts: 796 Thanks: 7 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 1,492.23 Bank: 14,762.93 Total Points: 16,255.16 Donate	Strip 1-0 - Enter the Angry Mech!

11-06-2004, 06:27 PM	#12
Sim Kid Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: The state of Denial Gender: Posts: 6,869 Thanks: 9 Thanked 54 Times in 29 Posts Points: 32,788.04 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 33,288.04 Donate	Please seperate the panels (Left-to-right) a bit better please. It looks like they're all just one panel.

11-06-2004, 10:31 PM	#13
dux_is_me Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Colombia, with an O. Gender: Posts: 796 Thanks: 7 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 1,492.23 Bank: 14,762.93 Total Points: 16,255.16 Donate	I thought you'd be able to discern each panel, they're separated by wall... Sorry.

11-13-2004, 03:08 PM	#14
dux_is_me Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Colombia, with an O. Gender: Posts: 796 Thanks: 7 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 1,492.23 Bank: 14,762.93 Total Points: 16,255.16 Donate	Okay, here's some more of Chapter 2. This is the point at which I began experimenting with spraypaint effects (like what LvK did sometime ago) and I don't yet know if it looks cool, okay, crappy, or n00bish. Strip 1-1: Teh Curious Bros. Strip 1-2: Stupid missiles appearing out of nowhere. Strip 1-3: Teh Angry Bros. [ November 13, 2004, 02:14 PM: Message edited by: Dux soy yo ]

11-13-2004, 08:01 PM	#15
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,711.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,330.27 Donate	I think it's nice. It's a good comic, you should keep it up.

11-13-2004, 10:34 PM	#16
Donezdude Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: The Starbucks across the street from the Starbucks Posts: 304 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 3,071.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,571.00 Donate	Very good! Keep it up!

11-14-2004, 08:03 AM	#17
Hans Kjellin Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Delsbo Posts: 143 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,156.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,656.00 Donate	I like it!

11-14-2004, 01:09 PM	#18
RMC Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenix, NY Posts: 1,129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 9,726.05 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 10,226.05 Donate	I really dont get the Metroid jokes but other than that nice keep them coming

11-15-2004, 06:13 PM	#19
yoshimario564 Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: <- location im on the moon Posts: 67 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,588.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 2,088.00 Donate	hahahaaha...lvk was right u worked the metroid in .... thats pretty good(on here pretty good is like awesome comliments arent really spontanius around here)(spontanius is a big word) well i like the jokes there funny because the metroid is actully like a moron.....keep em' coming dont let anyone change your mind....