Dynamite Crappy/Behind The Series 3 thread....don't ask me how it got to this

Superyoshi · 12-14-2004, 08:02 PM

Forget what I said about my final comic! I'm back with a vengence eveyone! Here is the crappy intro to my new series! Believe me folks, intros for a series never go well for me. But it will get better tomorrow in Dynamite Crappy #2!

OK, anyone who knows me knows that I FREAKING hate my own typos! I forgot to add a " ' " in "How's", so sorry about that.

[ December 27, 2004, 08:51 PM: Message edited by: SuperYoshi ]

Superyoshi · 12-14-2004, 08:49 PM

Well I was bored, so I finished #2 5 minutes ago. Hope you all like it!

*slaps self in head* Crap! Sorry about the double-post. I hadn't realized no one had replied becuase I had the window of the topic open ever since I created it. Please forgive me! I'm just learning to edit sprites now wee!

[ December 15, 2004, 07:27 PM: Message edited by: This isn't SuperYoshi ]

Chunky Kong12345 · 12-14-2004, 09:26 PM

Unappreciated is spelled with two p's.

Other than that, it's good, but don't use such big word bubbles for small lines.

thunt · 12-14-2004, 09:30 PM

How does Dynamite Headdy attack people? I heard he throws his head at people... Based on his name, does it explode or something?

Superyoshi · 12-14-2004, 09:47 PM

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Originally posted by Chunky Kong12345:
Unappreciated is spelled with two p's.

Other than that, it's good, but don't use such big word bubbles for small lines.

Somehow, I get the feeling you said that becuase you know I hate my own typos. Especially becuase I type so freking fast and don't notice them at all. Thanks for the heads-up, though. I might fix it...or I might not, becuase I'm too lazy to. I'll try to make the word bubbles a little smaller next comic.

Superyoshi · 12-14-2004, 09:51 PM

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Originally posted by Tigt the n00bish Bandit:
How does Dynamite Headdy attack people? I heard he throws his head at people... Based on his name, does it explode or something?

You see...it's like this. I got the game for my 6th birthday and didn't give two craps about the title. Therefore, 9 years later, I don't even think about why it's called "Dynamite" Headdy. There really is no reason. Oh, and he just attacks by lunging his head at people. It's like Super Mario World, it's not his world, it's friggin' Dinosaur Land. Nor does Dinosaur Land belong to him. And what happened to "Bros." in the title anyway? That's why we have NC.

[ December 14, 2004, 08:54 PM: Message edited by: This isn't SuperYoshi ]

ludwigvan · 12-14-2004, 11:18 PM

Actually, "Dynamite" could be a noun in the place of an adjective, you know? Describing "excellent" or "explosive"(in the non-literal-explosion sense) or, dare I say, "Dynamic"?

I think you may get the point.

**Dylan** · 12-14-2004, 11:55 PM

In that case, call me Dynamite Dylan.

~Dyna-freakin'-mite Dylan

Glyph Phoenix · 12-14-2004, 11:58 PM

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It's like Super Mario World, it's not his world, it's friggin' Dinosaur Land. Nor does Dinosaur Land belong to him.

Well, Nintendo has to call it "Mario" so people will buy it. Like Super Mario Land 3: Wario Land. Mario got about one or two seconds in at the very end, and wasn't in the game otherwise. And who would want to buy a game called "Super Dinosaur Land"? I wouldn't. Sounds like a crummy generic third-party game. "Mario World", on the other hand, has come to mean a great game for the SNES.

Maybe if "Dynamite Headdy" had a better name it would have sold as much as it should have, since it's an awesome game.

I think you should make your comic longer and your frames a bit smaller. I'm kind of interested in your take on DH's plot; is this going to follow the same story as the game or is it going to be entirely different except the characters?

Superyoshi · 12-15-2004, 06:37 PM

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Originally posted by Glyph Phoenix:
</font><blockquote>quote:</font><hr />It's like Super Mario World, it's not his world, it's friggin' Dinosaur Land. Nor does Dinosaur Land belong to him.

Well, Nintendo has to call it "Mario" so people will buy it. Like Super Mario Land 3: Wario Land. Mario got about one or two seconds in at the very end, and wasn't in the game otherwise. And who would want to buy a game called "Super Dinosaur Land"? I wouldn't. Sounds like a crummy generic third-party game. "Mario World", on the other hand, has come to mean a great game for the SNES.

Maybe if "Dynamite Headdy" had a better name it would have sold as much as it should have, since it's an awesome game.

I think you should make your comic longer and your frames a bit smaller. I'm kind of interested in your take on DH's plot; is this going to follow the same story as the game or is it going to be entirely different except the characters?

</font>[/quote]Well, yeah Super Dinosaur Land is a crappy title. But what I REALLY wanted to know was why they didn't bother to call it "Super Mario Bros. 4" or something that INVOLVES Luigi in some way. I mean come on! Even when you beat a Castle level in SMW, it ALWAYS says that it was Mario who did it. That's just sick, Nintendo.

RMC · 12-15-2004, 07:28 PM

Those are pretty good ^_^ I like Dynamite Headdy sprite. Anywho did you get that sprite sheet of Dynamite Headdy ready?

Superyoshi · 12-15-2004, 07:36 PM

Actually most of the sprites are from a friend of mine's. He made an amazing spritesheet. When he comes onto AIM, I'll ask him if it's OK for me to send it to some people, only if they give credit though.

EDIT: Added Dynamite Crappy #3! I've just started editing sprites, so please bare with the bad editing jobs.

[ December 15, 2004, 07:24 PM: Message edited by: This isn't SuperYoshi ]

X-3 · 12-15-2004, 09:28 PM

Great comic SuperYoshi! Happy to hear you're back in comics!

Glyph Phoenix · 12-16-2004, 01:35 AM

The close-up was a nice effect, but I still say you should add some more panels and make the ones you have smaller.

thunt · 12-16-2004, 10:30 AM

Okay, so Dynamite Headdy's House is the stage? And the fire in the door symbolizes that it's a bout to catch on fire? Probably not, because it's not that funny that way. Still, good comic. I can't see any big problems.
Rating:

Superyoshi · 12-16-2004, 04:20 PM

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Originally posted by Tigt the Bandit has a Blunt Sword:
Okay, so Dynamite Headdy's House is the stage? And the fire in the door symbolizes that it's a bout to catch on fire? Probably not, because it's not that funny that way. Still, good comic. I can't see any big problems.
Rating:

Heh, thanks. As long as no one thinks it's bad, I'm happy. And yeah, his house (or stage...I think it's funny that way) IS on fire. Sorry that it's not that funny for you, but I thought that it'd be the funniest ending for the comic. But he might not come back to check on his house until VERY later in the comic. Like around...after the whole thing is gone.

thunt · 12-16-2004, 05:55 PM

Well, I couldn't tell if the doorway was just open and showing the flames, or if was catching on fire. And dodn't worry about what I think is funny. I've never liked irony anyway.

Superyoshi · 12-16-2004, 08:49 PM

Dynamite Crappy #4 is up! I've made it 6 frames now.

[ December 16, 2004, 07:54 PM: Message edited by: This isn't SuperYoshi ]

thunt · 12-16-2004, 09:38 PM

That kinda conflicted how Headdy had those large profile sprites and how Luigi looked like he was zoomed. And man, D.H.'s expressions are intense.

Superyoshi · 12-16-2004, 09:48 PM

Yeah. Although it is easy to tell which sprites I editied though (like the one in the last frame). And MS Paint isn't exactly good for zooming in on things.

[ December 17, 2004, 10:48 PM: Message edited by: This isn't SuperYoshi ]

12-14-2004, 08:02 PM	#1
Superyoshi Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 486 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,981.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,481.00 Donate	Forget what I said about my final comic! I'm back with a vengence eveyone! Here is the crappy intro to my new series! Believe me folks, intros for a series never go well for me. But it will get better tomorrow in Dynamite Crappy #2! OK, anyone who knows me knows that I FREAKING hate my own typos! I forgot to add a " ' " in "How's", so sorry about that. [ December 27, 2004, 08:51 PM: Message edited by: SuperYoshi ]

12-14-2004, 08:49 PM	#2
Superyoshi Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 486 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,981.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,481.00 Donate	Well I was bored, so I finished #2 5 minutes ago. Hope you all like it! slaps self in head Crap! Sorry about the double-post. I hadn't realized no one had replied becuase I had the window of the topic open ever since I created it. Please forgive me! I'm just learning to edit sprites now wee! [ December 15, 2004, 07:27 PM: Message edited by: This isn't SuperYoshi ]

12-14-2004, 09:26 PM	#3
Chunky Kong12345 WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK I AM!? Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: ogmftwbqq Gender: Posts: 17,132 Thanks: 64 Thanked 338 Times in 241 Posts Points: 4,201.92 Bank: 178,076.98 Total Points: 182,278.90 Donate	Unappreciated is spelled with two p's. Other than that, it's good, but don't use such big word bubbles for small lines.

12-14-2004, 09:30 PM	#4
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,583.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,083.00 Donate	How does Dynamite Headdy attack people? I heard he throws his head at people... Based on his name, does it explode or something?

12-14-2004, 11:18 PM	#7
ludwigvan Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: The well of wishes. Gender: Posts: 5,444 Thanks: 3 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Points: 11,810.44 Bank: 510.00 Total Points: 12,320.44 Donate	Actually, "Dynamite" could be a noun in the place of an adjective, you know? Describing "excellent" or "explosive"(in the non-literal-explosion sense) or, dare I say, "Dynamic"? I think you may get the point.

12-14-2004, 11:55 PM	#8
Dylan Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,361 Thanks: 1,004 Thanked 1,001 Times in 457 Posts Points: 38,258.10 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 38,258.10 Donate	In that case, call me Dynamite Dylan. ~Dyna-freakin'-mite Dylan

12-15-2004, 07:28 PM	#11
RMC Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenix, NY Posts: 1,129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 10,515.05 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 11,015.05 Donate	Those are pretty good ^_^ I like Dynamite Headdy sprite. Anywho did you get that sprite sheet of Dynamite Headdy ready?

12-15-2004, 07:36 PM	#12
Superyoshi Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 486 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,981.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,481.00 Donate	Actually most of the sprites are from a friend of mine's. He made an amazing spritesheet. When he comes onto AIM, I'll ask him if it's OK for me to send it to some people, only if they give credit though. EDIT: Added Dynamite Crappy #3! I've just started editing sprites, so please bare with the bad editing jobs. [ December 15, 2004, 07:24 PM: Message edited by: This isn't SuperYoshi ]

12-15-2004, 09:28 PM	#13
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,601 Thanks: 337 Thanked 387 Times in 279 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 21,928.04 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 21,928.04 Donate	Great comic SuperYoshi! Happy to hear you're back in comics!

12-16-2004, 01:35 AM	#14
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 7,018.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,518.00 Donate	The close-up was a nice effect, but I still say you should add some more panels and make the ones you have smaller.

12-16-2004, 10:30 AM	#15
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,583.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,083.00 Donate	Okay, so Dynamite Headdy's House is the stage? And the fire in the door symbolizes that it's a bout to catch on fire? Probably not, because it's not that funny that way. Still, good comic. I can't see any big problems. Rating:

12-16-2004, 05:55 PM	#17
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,583.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,083.00 Donate	Well, I couldn't tell if the doorway was just open and showing the flames, or if was catching on fire. And dodn't worry about what I think is funny. I've never liked irony anyway.

12-16-2004, 08:49 PM	#18
Superyoshi Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 486 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,981.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,481.00 Donate	Dynamite Crappy #4 is up! I've made it 6 frames now. [ December 16, 2004, 07:54 PM: Message edited by: This isn't SuperYoshi ]

12-16-2004, 09:38 PM	#19
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,583.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,083.00 Donate	That kinda conflicted how Headdy had those large profile sprites and how Luigi looked like he was zoomed. And man, D.H.'s expressions are intense.

12-16-2004, 09:48 PM	#20
Superyoshi Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 486 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,981.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,481.00 Donate	Yeah. Although it is easy to tell which sprites I editied though (like the one in the last frame). And MS Paint isn't exactly good for zooming in on things. [ December 17, 2004, 10:48 PM: Message edited by: This isn't SuperYoshi ]