my comics - Page 2

thunt · 01-16-2005, 04:28 AM

Double Post!!!! Sorry.
Kay, sice I showed the new smilely here, I'll show it on the scale as well. I finally decided to get off my duff and do some work.

And again, are we going to do the rating suggestion I put up earlier? (I wanna be heard, and it's looking pathetic)

Glyph Phoenix · 01-16-2005, 02:28 PM

A "good" for Avatar Mario, Tigt?! I am insulted.

And while your graphics have certainly improved, WarLord, your plot has not. Well, a little. But come up with better jokes or a better plot or something.

thunt · 01-17-2005, 07:22 PM

Hey, everyone has different taste! I didn't like giving it that, but... I dunno why I did. There was just something I didn't like about it. I guess I thought it was kinda bland, maybe. I'll look over it again.

And why exactly do you take my system as law? I even don't think it's very good, myself.

WarLord_2000 · 01-19-2005, 04:43 PM

This is the final part of The Rise of Hellbeast. I will be making another comic series called Dragonball Extreme.

sladd54 · 01-19-2005, 07:01 PM

they weren't saved if they all died from the explosion. Only that lamely edited general and soldier are alive.

Wonder Wario · 01-19-2005, 07:45 PM

Even though the army survived, I feel horribly empty inside. [img]tongue.gif[/img]
Maybe it was because this comic was'nt very goot?

thunt · 01-20-2005, 03:58 PM

Graphic wise, better. Other wise... The way Hellbeast died was just way too cheap, there wasn't any real fighting! And the whole series was what, 30 frames? Lame. The general's hair could definitely use some shading.

And I think I understand where the soldiers went, most of the army charged ahead to fight HB, but those two lagged. And then it switched back, even though it doesn't look like it beacause the backround didn't change...
And rise of HB, mo' lahk HB came back, then died.

Rating:

Mikhail Gorbachev · 01-22-2005, 03:17 PM

This new one was better with sprites, but had a very rushed ending. Also, Dragon Ball Z in sprite comics is not good. Oh, and the Hellbeast should have a dying sprite or something, not just disappearing.

[ January 22, 2005, 02:20 PM: Message edited by: Pixelated Penguin Is A Penguin ]

Gaara · 01-22-2005, 10:16 PM

(I thought it would've been cool if Hellbeast was really a maverick in disguise.)
-Slight improvement
-Hellbeast looked less like something drawn by a parrot
-The end of Raytoad

Bad stuff:
-rushed ending
-everything else
-no mavericks

thunt · 01-22-2005, 10:43 PM

T_T Someone listen to meeee!!!!! I wanna knowwwwww!!!! Waaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! T_T

:cough:
SPAM. ish. ness.

WarLord_2000 · 04-09-2005, 09:31 AM

After many months, I have finally made a comic and started my Dragonball Extreme series. [IMG]

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Mikhail Gorbachev · 04-09-2005, 11:08 AM

Text bubbles are a waste of time if they are completely transparent. Fill them in!

WarLord_2000 · 04-09-2005, 12:00 PM

I dont know how to fill them in. I tried it before and it didnt come out right.

WarLord_2000 · 04-09-2005, 12:03 PM

Heres part 2 of Dragonball Extreme. [IMG]

[/IMG]

RMC · 04-09-2005, 12:23 PM

I'm just going to say it once and for all.....DBZ SUCKS ASS!

Aqsol · 04-10-2005, 03:04 PM

Edit: Ok, I will say something. Your comics are so insanely horrible that I want to gouge my eyes out. You have zero humor in your comics, you have a bunch of lame dialouge and you HAD to pick the WORST series to rip off of! If your going to make comics, make it have some freakin jokes and make your OWN storyline.

[ April 14, 2005, 03:28 PM: Message edited by: Aqsol ]

Glyph Phoenix · 04-10-2005, 06:15 PM

This disappoints me. There are so many things wrong with the last comic. So many that I deemed it a waste of my time to list them all. And yet you, Joe, had to make up a flaw. Dragonball Z has lots of stupid problems, but so freaking what. This comic has so many of its own. You should have pointed out those instead of things wrong with the series. For shame, Joe.

For shame.

01-16-2005, 04:28 AM	#21
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,892.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,392.00 Donate	Double Post!!!! Sorry. Kay, sice I showed the new smilely here, I'll show it on the scale as well. I finally decided to get off my duff and do some work. And again, are we going to do the rating suggestion I put up earlier? (I wanna be heard, and it's looking pathetic)

01-16-2005, 02:28 PM	#22
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 7,691.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 8,191.00 Donate	A "good" for Avatar Mario, Tigt?! I am insulted. And while your graphics have certainly improved, WarLord, your plot has not. Well, a little. But come up with better jokes or a better plot or something.

01-17-2005, 07:22 PM	#23
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,892.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,392.00 Donate	Hey, everyone has different taste! I didn't like giving it that, but... I dunno why I did. There was just something I didn't like about it. I guess I thought it was kinda bland, maybe. I'll look over it again. And why exactly do you take my system as law? I even don't think it's very good, myself.

01-19-2005, 04:43 PM	#24
WarLord_2000 Newbie Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,041.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,541.00 Donate	This is the final part of The Rise of Hellbeast. I will be making another comic series called Dragonball Extreme.

01-19-2005, 07:01 PM	#25
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,433.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,933.00 Donate	they weren't saved if they all died from the explosion. Only that lamely edited general and soldier are alive.

01-19-2005, 07:45 PM	#26
Wonder Wario Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Gender: Posts: 2,090 Thanks: 65 Thanked 37 Times in 23 Posts Points: 7,445.57 Bank: 1,309.80 Total Points: 8,755.37 Donate	Even though the army survived, I feel horribly empty inside. [img]tongue.gif[/img] Maybe it was because this comic was'nt very goot?

01-20-2005, 03:58 PM	#27
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,892.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,392.00 Donate	Graphic wise, better. Other wise... The way Hellbeast died was just way too cheap, there wasn't any real fighting! And the whole series was what, 30 frames? Lame. The general's hair could definitely use some shading. And I think I understand where the soldiers went, most of the army charged ahead to fight HB, but those two lagged. And then it switched back, even though it doesn't look like it beacause the backround didn't change... And rise of HB, mo' lahk HB came back, then died. Rating:

01-22-2005, 03:17 PM	#28
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,593 Thanks: 30 Thanked 82 Times in 65 Posts Points: 2,055.54 Bank: 132,290.67 Total Points: 134,346.21 Donate	This new one was better with sprites, but had a very rushed ending. Also, Dragon Ball Z in sprite comics is not good. Oh, and the Hellbeast should have a dying sprite or something, not just disappearing. [ January 22, 2005, 02:20 PM: Message edited by: Pixelated Penguin Is A Penguin ]

01-22-2005, 10:16 PM	#29
Gaara Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Megaman 8 Posts: 53 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,252.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,752.00 Donate	(I thought it would've been cool if Hellbeast was really a maverick in disguise.) -Slight improvement -Hellbeast looked less like something drawn by a parrot -The end of Raytoad Bad stuff: -rushed ending -everything else -no mavericks

01-22-2005, 10:43 PM	#30
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,892.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,392.00 Donate	T_T Someone listen to meeee!!!!! I wanna knowwwwww!!!! Waaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! T_T :cough: SPAM. ish. ness.

04-09-2005, 09:31 AM	#31
WarLord_2000 Newbie Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,041.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,541.00 Donate	After many months, I have finally made a comic and started my Dragonball Extreme series. [IMG] [/IMG]

04-09-2005, 11:08 AM	#32
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,593 Thanks: 30 Thanked 82 Times in 65 Posts Points: 2,055.54 Bank: 132,290.67 Total Points: 134,346.21 Donate	Text bubbles are a waste of time if they are completely transparent. Fill them in!

04-09-2005, 12:00 PM	#33
WarLord_2000 Newbie Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,041.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,541.00 Donate	I dont know how to fill them in. I tried it before and it didnt come out right.

04-09-2005, 12:03 PM	#34
WarLord_2000 Newbie Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,041.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,541.00 Donate	Heres part 2 of Dragonball Extreme. [IMG] [/IMG]

04-09-2005, 12:23 PM	#35
RMC Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenix, NY Posts: 1,129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 11,580.05 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 12,080.05 Donate	I'm just going to say it once and for all.....DBZ SUCKS ASS!

04-10-2005, 03:04 PM	#36
Aqsol Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Romules Posts: 67 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 649.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,149.00 Donate	Edit: Ok, I will say something. Your comics are so insanely horrible that I want to gouge my eyes out. You have zero humor in your comics, you have a bunch of lame dialouge and you HAD to pick the WORST series to rip off of! If your going to make comics, make it have some freakin jokes and make your OWN storyline. [ April 14, 2005, 03:28 PM: Message edited by: Aqsol ]

04-10-2005, 06:15 PM	#37
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 7,691.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 8,191.00 Donate	This disappoints me. There are so many things wrong with the last comic. So many that I deemed it a waste of my time to list them all. And yet you, Joe, had to make up a flaw. Dragonball Z has lots of stupid problems, but so freaking what. This comic has so many of its own. You should have pointed out those instead of things wrong with the series. For shame, Joe. For shame.