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WarLord_2000 · 12-22-2004, 03:57 PM

This is part 1 of "The Rise of Hellbeast".

Beam Yosho the Drunkard · 12-22-2004, 04:00 PM

......ô.o

WarLord_2000 · 12-22-2004, 04:15 PM

This is part 2 of "The Rise of Hellbeast".

thunt · 12-22-2004, 04:25 PM

Uh... Kay.
Well, let's get this over with.
Some sprite's are badly resized, the backrounds completely lack imagination and are eye-searing, the Toads look like they're transparent, people are floating off the ground, bittages are horribly mixed, and special effects are awful. Plus, the idea isn't very original...
Don't you already have a comic thread?
Rating

Ihaven't pulled this out in a long time...)

I feel kinda sorry to give you that, but...

[ December 22, 2004, 03:27 PM: Message edited by: tlGT t3h b@ndlt I h@v t3h $kILZ1111 ]

RMC · 12-22-2004, 07:02 PM

im not going to say anything its already tells itself its crappy.

thunt · 12-22-2004, 07:13 PM

Joe, your comics were even worse when you first came here, and they haven't gotten much better. I wouldn't be talking.
Wlrd2k, just fix what people say is broken and it will get better.

**Dylan** · 12-23-2004, 01:45 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by tlGT t3h b@ndlt I h@v t3h $kILZ1111:
Joe, your comics were even worse when you first came here, and they haven't gotten much better. I wouldn't be talking.

You just said a mouthful.

But ya, your comics need serious work, WarLord. Practice makes perfect.

~Dylan

Glyph Phoenix · 12-23-2004, 08:39 AM

Quote:

I feel kinda sorry to give you that, but...

Why, Tigt? It's got no background, no interesting characters, the colors are messed up, and it's not funny at all. It's an "Ugh" on the Tigt scale if I've ever seen one.

thunt · 12-23-2004, 01:47 PM

Well, I don't want to turn into a person who just says every comic on Earth besides his is just a piece of crap. But an "Ugh" on the scale isn't neseccarely the worst. There's a secret one for both ends of the scale, and I haven't had to pull them out yet.
Warlord, here's a tip. Copy and paste the backrounds over again so you don't have to make them over again. I noticed that the size of the throne and the placement of the characters flucuated(don't know what that is[though you should], look it up).
Fortune('cause I feel like it)

Fortune: Teh Mystic Fish says “Fortune cookies? Psssssssh. Teh Mystic Fish you should listen to. I mean, come on! Those things are completely random! Not like me!” :hides hat with fortunes in it:
Edit: After some thinking, I decided to show the secret rating. I mean, for crying out loud! It's not the Holy Grail or anything! It works for both ends of the scale.

[ December 29, 2004, 02:48 PM: Message edited by: Tigt ]

Gaara · 12-29-2004, 03:44 PM

Even though my comix aren't so good.....
-Why does that slug thing have a white thing on him?
-Is Toad part Rayman?
-Why are Raytoad's friends suddenly gone in part 2?

Glyph Phoenix · 12-29-2004, 09:34 PM

I'm dissapointed, Tigt. The smiley is awesome, but it doesn't even have a word to go with it and it doesn't actually go on the scale. You could have just pasted it over Ugh like the scale was breaking.

Oh, and I have to ask... If you had the scale around the time of Avatar Mario, would you have given it the highest ranking?

http://www.icestormcity.com/avatarmario

Codiekitty · 12-29-2004, 10:00 PM

That's not the Nightmare King.

This is the Nightmare King.

On that smiley, it took me a while to figure out what it was doing. For a while I thought it was drooling, then I finally realized it was one of those cartoony jaw-drops.

Where are these lemmings going? The Super Nintendo Super Shire! Hop in line and follow them there!

Wonder Wario · 12-29-2004, 11:11 PM

Heh, I like the smilie, that should be on the chart thing.

The comic needs work. A LOT of work.
I can't tell if it's supposed to be funny, or serious, or whatever.

thunt · 12-30-2004, 10:57 AM

The smilely has a word, but it's different for both sides. That's why I didn't include one. It also goes on the end of the scale when the need arises.
And Glyph, about Avatar Mario... I dunno. I wouldn't have given it this

, but some of your comics are just... worse than the others. I'd probably give it a "good." On average. Some are really good, though.

Ya know, with all this talk about ratings 'n stuff, I thought that maybe we could have a standardized system. You know, some spriter who knows what he/she's doing could make something, he/she'd post the code, and we could use that. Dunno. Maybe people would make some and we'd vote on 'em. Just a thought.

^^^ For the first two, probably bad use of the crop box. 3, maybe the people are in the poorly drawn houses.

[ December 30, 2004, 04:47 PM: Message edited by: Tigt ]

Gaara · 12-31-2004, 11:14 PM

-How much cake has that princess or whatever eaten?
-Why are Waddle Dee, Raytoad, and the slug thing hovering?
-Why me!?

**NintendoNut** · 01-01-2005, 06:26 AM

That Hellbeast's fire is bad.

thunt · 01-04-2005, 05:07 PM

Don't give up Warlord! Just fix the mistakes and it'll be better. If you don't know how, just ask someone.

And are we going to do that rating system thing?

WarLord_2000 · 01-11-2005, 07:13 PM

Its been a while since I did a comic so finally heres my lastest comic.Plus i'm not sure when i'll continue The Rise of Hellbeast but I might make another part eventually.

Cataclysmic Paradox · 01-12-2005, 01:36 AM

EDIT: Nevermind, I thought it wasn't showing up in your post, but it was just my computer.

[ January 12, 2005, 12:46 AM: Message edited by: Jumi Jao ]

thunt · 01-12-2005, 05:36 PM

O_o...Ouch. that one hurt.

12-22-2004, 04:25 PM	#4
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,592.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,092.00 Donate	Uh... Kay. Well, let's get this over with. Some sprite's are badly resized, the backrounds completely lack imagination and are eye-searing, the Toads look like they're transparent, people are floating off the ground, bittages are horribly mixed, and special effects are awful. Plus, the idea isn't very original... Don't you already have a comic thread? RatingIhaven't pulled this out in a long time...) I feel kinda sorry to give you that, but... [ December 22, 2004, 03:27 PM: Message edited by: tlGT t3h b@ndlt I h@v t3h $kILZ1111 ]

12-22-2004, 03:57 PM	#1
WarLord_2000 Newbie Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,012.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,512.00 Donate	This is part 1 of "The Rise of Hellbeast".

12-22-2004, 04:00 PM	#2
Beam Yosho the Drunkard Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: The oversized rock of Hawaii. Gender: Posts: 5,664 Thanks: 5 Thanked 17 Times in 13 Posts Points: 23,878.39 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 24,378.39 Donate	......ô.o

12-22-2004, 04:15 PM	#3
WarLord_2000 Newbie Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,012.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,512.00 Donate	This is part 2 of "The Rise of Hellbeast".

12-22-2004, 07:02 PM	#5
RMC Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenix, NY Posts: 1,129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 10,538.05 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 11,038.05 Donate	im not going to say anything its already tells itself its crappy.

12-22-2004, 07:13 PM	#6
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,592.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,092.00 Donate	Joe, your comics were even worse when you first came here, and they haven't gotten much better. I wouldn't be talking. Wlrd2k, just fix what people say is broken and it will get better.

12-23-2004, 01:47 PM	#9
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,592.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,092.00 Donate	Well, I don't want to turn into a person who just says every comic on Earth besides his is just a piece of crap. But an "Ugh" on the scale isn't neseccarely the worst. There's a secret one for both ends of the scale, and I haven't had to pull them out yet. Warlord, here's a tip. Copy and paste the backrounds over again so you don't have to make them over again. I noticed that the size of the throne and the placement of the characters flucuated(don't know what that is[though you should], look it up). Fortune('cause I feel like it) Fortune: Teh Mystic Fish says “Fortune cookies? Psssssssh. Teh Mystic Fish you should listen to. I mean, come on! Those things are completely random! Not like me!” :hides hat with fortunes in it: Edit: After some thinking, I decided to show the secret rating. I mean, for crying out loud! It's not the Holy Grail or anything! It works for both ends of the scale. [ December 29, 2004, 02:48 PM: Message edited by: Tigt ]

12-29-2004, 03:44 PM	#10
Gaara Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Megaman 8 Posts: 53 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,235.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,735.00 Donate	Even though my comix aren't so good..... -Why does that slug thing have a white thing on him? -Is Toad part Rayman? -Why are Raytoad's friends suddenly gone in part 2?

12-29-2004, 09:34 PM	#11
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 7,039.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,539.00 Donate	I'm dissapointed, Tigt. The smiley is awesome, but it doesn't even have a word to go with it and it doesn't actually go on the scale. You could have just pasted it over Ugh like the scale was breaking. Oh, and I have to ask... If you had the scale around the time of Avatar Mario, would you have given it the highest ranking? http://www.icestormcity.com/avatarmario

12-29-2004, 10:00 PM	#12
Codiekitty Just Another Face in Red Jumpsuit Join Date: May 2001 Location: Lemmingland Gender: Posts: 19,143 Thanks: 121 Thanked 174 Times in 120 Posts Points: 48,935.72 Bank: 3,021,450.74 Total Points: 3,070,386.46 Donate	That's not the Nightmare King. This is the Nightmare King. On that smiley, it took me a while to figure out what it was doing. For a while I thought it was drooling, then I finally realized it was one of those cartoony jaw-drops. Where are these lemmings going? The Super Nintendo Super Shire! Hop in line and follow them there!

12-29-2004, 11:11 PM	#13
Wonder Wario Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Gender: Posts: 2,089 Thanks: 65 Thanked 36 Times in 22 Posts Points: 6,454.75 Bank: 1,284.12 Total Points: 7,738.87 Donate	Heh, I like the smilie, that should be on the chart thing. The comic needs work. A LOT of work. I can't tell if it's supposed to be funny, or serious, or whatever.

12-30-2004, 10:57 AM	#14
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,592.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,092.00 Donate	The smilely has a word, but it's different for both sides. That's why I didn't include one. It also goes on the end of the scale when the need arises. And Glyph, about Avatar Mario... I dunno. I wouldn't have given it this , but some of your comics are just... worse than the others. I'd probably give it a "good." On average. Some are really good, though. Ya know, with all this talk about ratings 'n stuff, I thought that maybe we could have a standardized system. You know, some spriter who knows what he/she's doing could make something, he/she'd post the code, and we could use that. Dunno. Maybe people would make some and we'd vote on 'em. Just a thought. ^^^ For the first two, probably bad use of the crop box. 3, maybe the people are in the poorly drawn houses. [ December 30, 2004, 04:47 PM: Message edited by: Tigt ]

12-31-2004, 11:14 PM	#15
Gaara Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Megaman 8 Posts: 53 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,235.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,735.00 Donate	-How much cake has that princess or whatever eaten? -Why are Waddle Dee, Raytoad, and the slug thing hovering? -Why me!?

01-01-2005, 06:26 AM	#16
NintendoNut NinNut Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Hold on, I know this..... Gender: Posts: 8,286 Thanks: 84 Thanked 37 Times in 30 Posts Points: 47,953.56 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 47,953.56 Donate	That Hellbeast's fire is bad.

01-04-2005, 05:07 PM	#17
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,592.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,092.00 Donate	Don't give up Warlord! Just fix the mistakes and it'll be better. If you don't know how, just ask someone. And are we going to do that rating system thing?

01-11-2005, 07:13 PM	#18
WarLord_2000 Newbie Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,012.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,512.00 Donate	Its been a while since I did a comic so finally heres my lastest comic.Plus i'm not sure when i'll continue The Rise of Hellbeast but I might make another part eventually.

01-12-2005, 01:36 AM	#19
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 7,073.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,692.27 Donate	EDIT: Nevermind, I thought it wasn't showing up in your post, but it was just my computer. [ January 12, 2005, 12:46 AM: Message edited by: Jumi Jao ]

01-12-2005, 05:36 PM	#20
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,592.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,092.00 Donate	O_o...Ouch. that one hurt.