Necro Tails

dino13135 · 01-27-2005, 05:07 PM

I had a little training in comics now.Its alot better then my older comics.

[ January 27, 2005, 04:10 PM: Message edited by: tails loves his fluffy tails ]

A Genius · 01-27-2005, 07:10 PM

Hmm... that's kind of bad. Work on your humor and grammar. And I think you should use speech balloons for when the characters talk.

Mikhail Gorbachev · 01-27-2005, 09:42 PM

Don't scale pictures up like in the fourth panel.
It makes them indistinguishable from crap. Also, use speech bubbles. If you can't draw buildings well, get a house sprite.

Crescent Kirby · 02-09-2005, 10:14 PM

Ok, who is yellow and purple? Is Necro's text always changing? Also, it isn't funny. If it's supposed to, please say so. Finally, don't mix bittages. Why was Necro Advanced in the fourth panel and S3&K in all the others? A bit of tweaking, and it should become MUCH better than it is...

01-27-2005, 05:07 PM	#1
dino13135 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenix,New York Posts: 67 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,951.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 2,451.00 Donate	I had a little training in comics now.Its alot better then my older comics. [ January 27, 2005, 04:10 PM: Message edited by: tails loves his fluffy tails ]

01-27-2005, 07:10 PM	#2
A Genius Senior Member Join Date: May 2001 Location: Place Posts: 2,657 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 3,139.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,639.00 Donate	Hmm... that's kind of bad. Work on your humor and grammar. And I think you should use speech balloons for when the characters talk.

01-27-2005, 09:42 PM	#3
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,593 Thanks: 30 Thanked 81 Times in 65 Posts Points: 821.54 Bank: 32,290.67 Total Points: 33,112.21 Donate	Don't scale pictures up like in the fourth panel. It makes them indistinguishable from crap. Also, use speech bubbles. If you can't draw buildings well, get a house sprite.

02-09-2005, 10:14 PM	#4
Crescent Kirby Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Um...LOOK A BABOON Posts: 128 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,350.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,850.00 Donate	Ok, who is yellow and purple? Is Necro's text always changing? Also, it isn't funny. If it's supposed to, please say so. Finally, don't mix bittages. Why was Necro Advanced in the fourth panel and S3&K in all the others? A bit of tweaking, and it should become MUCH better than it is...