Metal Does a Comic: Coffee and Buttons do not mix. Rating: 1.5/5 Stars XD

Metal Man · 01-31-2005, 03:40 PM

Here I am, with none other than a sprite comic. Please tell me what you think. Also, the Metal Man sprite came from Sprites, Inc. And the Wart image also came from SMBHQ.
Since there are so many panels and I already have a web page for it, you can go see it at SSQ .

[ February 09, 2005, 05:38 PM: Message edited by: Metal Man: The SMBHQ Staff Member ]

thunt · 01-31-2005, 03:50 PM

Frick! My eyes! Owowowowowowowowowowowow!!!!
...

Metal Man · 01-31-2005, 04:13 PM

Alright! Someone who agrees with myself on my comic making ability! XD
I mean... okay... must have something either that's too bright in there, or you just hate the poorly drawn stuff. Oh well. Thanks for your honest opinion. I hope to see many more.

X-3 · 01-31-2005, 04:26 PM

I didnt like the comic either. Something about it wasnt right.... Maybe it was bright colors and Sprite Bittage Mix?

Dont wory, you are still Metal Man, not Melt Man. If you were, my eyes would have melted.

Metal Man · 01-31-2005, 04:30 PM

Hmmm... well then, it appears we are reaching a consensus. Soon enough, I will... be able to make the next part without the blindingness. Oh, and same-bittage sprites, yeah... hopefully.

The Scatmanson · 01-31-2005, 05:16 PM

Wow.I have two inspirational words.

DAT BURNS!

Man,do those colors sting.Plus,the effects remind me too much of my past.Also,the warping randomly to another dimension thing is overused.Again,I say that the colors and bittage really,really,REALLY HURT!Even my old comics two toned bacground didn't hurt that bad...

I'd give it a 2.0 out of 5.

A Genius · 01-31-2005, 05:46 PM

I don't think the comic was that ugly, but you have little writing ability and many wasted frames.

-A Genius (How many DEAD CHILDREN does it take to DEAD CHILDREN A house?)

Mikhail Gorbachev · 02-01-2005, 06:29 PM

Wow, that blank blue page was great. Why won't it show up?

Actually, if Tigt wasn't exaggerating, I guess I got lucky to not have my eyes melted. [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img]

Glyph Phoenix · 02-01-2005, 09:34 PM

Just terrible. I expected more from a SMBHQ staff member. It's not funny, it's not made very well, it looks terrible... and it stinks overall. I guess I should give you points for grammar, but at the very least you could have made some text bubbles.

I've really gotten hooked on the Tigt scale, though. I give this an 'Ugh' also.

Mikhail Gorbachev · 02-01-2005, 10:00 PM

I finally got the comic to work.
MY EYES OMG LOL!! !!!!!1111 one AHHhhhAHhaH A
teh p41n!!!!111

111111111one one eleven sixty four *dies*

thunt · 02-02-2005, 03:42 PM

If you want to use it too, Glyph, just PM me and I'll send you the code.

Crescent Kirby · 02-06-2005, 10:10 PM

Ow. My EYES! You...um...have room to improve. First and foremost, pretty please no more red/blue combos. Ow. Ow. Ow...Next, make things more semitary(sp?), as in equal sided. I'm not so sure doors everywhere are slanted. Lastly, if you have writing on something, make sure it stays on the thing, not off to the side. The comedy was fine, it needs graphical improvement, is all.

Metal Man · 02-09-2005, 06:34 PM

Huh... I swear one of my replies got eaten somewhere...

Anyway. Thanks for the input. Now if only I had 'Ow. My EYES!' for a custom title-thingy intstead of 'Cheapskate'.... </FishingforAdminsmakingfunofhim>
</MessedupHTMLtagswhichsuck>

Oh yeah. While I may be a SMBHQ staff member, I do not have any knowledge of drawing. None. Nada. My main expertise is text-based RPGs. And I corrected that weird 'Chapskate' mistake above.

[ February 09, 2005, 05:36 PM: Message edited by: Metal Man: The SMBHQ Staff Member ]

01-31-2005, 03:40 PM	#1
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,749 Thanks: 74 Thanked 199 Times in 137 Posts Points: 10,136.59 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 10,136.59 Donate	Here I am, with none other than a sprite comic. Please tell me what you think. Also, the Metal Man sprite came from Sprites, Inc. And the Wart image also came from SMBHQ. Since there are so many panels and I already have a web page for it, you can go see it at SSQ . [ February 09, 2005, 05:38 PM: Message edited by: Metal Man: The SMBHQ Staff Member ]

01-31-2005, 03:50 PM	#2
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,469.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,969.00 Donate	Frick! My eyes! Owowowowowowowowowowowow!!!! ...

01-31-2005, 04:13 PM	#3
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,749 Thanks: 74 Thanked 199 Times in 137 Posts Points: 10,136.59 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 10,136.59 Donate	Alright! Someone who agrees with myself on my comic making ability! XD I mean... okay... must have something either that's too bright in there, or you just hate the poorly drawn stuff. Oh well. Thanks for your honest opinion. I hope to see many more.

01-31-2005, 04:26 PM	#4
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,242 Thanks: 280 Thanked 323 Times in 240 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 13,903.48 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 13,903.48 Donate	I didnt like the comic either. Something about it wasnt right.... Maybe it was bright colors and Sprite Bittage Mix? Dont wory, you are still Metal Man, not Melt Man. If you were, my eyes would have melted.

01-31-2005, 04:30 PM	#5
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,749 Thanks: 74 Thanked 199 Times in 137 Posts Points: 10,136.59 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 10,136.59 Donate	Hmmm... well then, it appears we are reaching a consensus. Soon enough, I will... be able to make the next part without the blindingness. Oh, and same-bittage sprites, yeah... hopefully.

01-31-2005, 05:16 PM	#6
The Scatmanson badadadadiiii Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: BOP BOP BOTTOM BOP Gender: Posts: 5,668 Thanks: 652 Thanked 387 Times in 292 Posts Blog Entries: 2 Points: 5,800.89 Bank: 20,325.19 Total Points: 26,126.07 Donate	Wow.I have two inspirational words. DAT BURNS! Man,do those colors sting.Plus,the effects remind me too much of my past.Also,the warping randomly to another dimension thing is overused.Again,I say that the colors and bittage really,really,REALLY HURT!Even my old comics two toned bacground didn't hurt that bad... I'd give it a 2.0 out of 5.

01-31-2005, 05:46 PM	#7
A Genius Senior Member Join Date: May 2001 Location: Place Posts: 2,657 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 2,721.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,221.00 Donate	I don't think the comic was that ugly, but you have little writing ability and many wasted frames. -A Genius (How many DEAD CHILDREN does it take to DEAD CHILDREN A house?)

02-01-2005, 06:29 PM	#8
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,580 Thanks: 29 Thanked 79 Times in 63 Posts Points: 56.71 Bank: 30,317.43 Total Points: 30,374.14 Donate	Wow, that blank blue page was great. Why won't it show up? Actually, if Tigt wasn't exaggerating, I guess I got lucky to not have my eyes melted. [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img]

02-01-2005, 09:34 PM	#9
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,781.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,281.00 Donate	Just terrible. I expected more from a SMBHQ staff member. It's not funny, it's not made very well, it looks terrible... and it stinks overall. I guess I should give you points for grammar, but at the very least you could have made some text bubbles. I've really gotten hooked on the Tigt scale, though. I give this an 'Ugh' also.

02-01-2005, 10:00 PM	#10
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,580 Thanks: 29 Thanked 79 Times in 63 Posts Points: 56.71 Bank: 30,317.43 Total Points: 30,374.14 Donate	I finally got the comic to work. MY EYES OMG LOL!! !!!!!1111 one AHHhhhAHhaH A teh p41n!!!!111 111111111one one eleven sixty four dies

02-02-2005, 03:42 PM	#11
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,469.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,969.00 Donate	If you want to use it too, Glyph, just PM me and I'll send you the code.

02-06-2005, 10:10 PM	#12
Crescent Kirby Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Um...LOOK A BABOON Posts: 128 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,231.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,731.00 Donate	Ow. My EYES! You...um...have room to improve. First and foremost, pretty please no more red/blue combos. Ow. Ow. Ow...Next, make things more semitary(sp?), as in equal sided. I'm not so sure doors everywhere are slanted. Lastly, if you have writing on something, make sure it stays on the thing, not off to the side. The comedy was fine, it needs graphical improvement, is all.

02-09-2005, 06:34 PM	#13
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,749 Thanks: 74 Thanked 199 Times in 137 Posts Points: 10,136.59 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 10,136.59 Donate	Huh... I swear one of my replies got eaten somewhere... Anyway. Thanks for the input. Now if only I had 'Ow. My EYES!' for a custom title-thingy intstead of 'Cheapskate'.... </FishingforAdminsmakingfunofhim> </MessedupHTMLtagswhichsuck> Oh yeah. While I may be a SMBHQ staff member, I do not have any knowledge of drawing. None. Nada. My main expertise is text-based RPGs. And I corrected that weird 'Chapskate' mistake above. [ February 09, 2005, 05:36 PM: Message edited by: Metal Man: The SMBHQ Staff Member ]