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Glyph Phoenix · 04-06-2005, 09:49 PM

These are mildly entertaining. Your art is quite good, although your grammar and text boxes are horrific. Fix them. Fix them now!

I don't know if anyone here who's not from sheezyart will understand the clock-strawberry part, though. If you do, it's kinda funny. Kinda makes you chuckle and say, "Oh. I know what that means."

If you don't, seeing a strawberry drive isn't terribly unfunny either. But not as funny as if you know who it's supposed to be, and even then it's only a little funny.

I guess my summary is this: Your art is fine, but you need better jokes, grammar, and text before it's worth reading. Unless you're the guy whose avatar is a giant strawberry, in which case I suppose this would be funny to read.

thunt · 04-07-2005, 02:13 PM

God, Sheezyart NEVER loads on my computer. I can't see a frickin' thing.
Based on what Glyph says though, you've improved.

RMC · 04-07-2005, 05:56 PM

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Originally posted by Glyph Phoenix:
These are mildly entertaining. Your art is quite good, although your grammar and text boxes are horrific. Fix them. Fix them now!

I don't know if anyone here who's not from sheezyart will understand the clock-strawberry part, though. If you do, it's kinda funny. Kinda makes you chuckle and say, "Oh. I know what that means."

If you don't, seeing a strawberry drive isn't terribly unfunny either. But not as funny as if you know who it's supposed to be, and even then it's only a little funny.

I guess my summary is this: Your art is fine, but you need better jokes, grammar, and text before it's worth reading. Unless you're the guy whose avatar is a giant strawberry, in which case I suppose this would be funny to read.

Erm thankies Glyph.

RMC · 04-07-2005, 07:53 PM

New Comic

RMC · 04-08-2005, 06:44 PM

thunt · 04-08-2005, 09:48 PM

Speech bubbles would be nice.

RMC · 04-09-2005, 12:14 PM

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Originally posted by Tigt is h00k3d 0n f0n/c$:
Speech bubbles would be nice.

I'll keep that in mind.

OcarinaMan · 04-09-2005, 04:26 PM

Not very funny at all.

RMC · 06-30-2005, 05:36 PM

Holy this is old, I guess it's time to update with my new sprite in work.

04-06-2005, 09:49 PM	#61
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,546.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,046.00 Donate	These are mildly entertaining. Your art is quite good, although your grammar and text boxes are horrific. Fix them. Fix them now! I don't know if anyone here who's not from sheezyart will understand the clock-strawberry part, though. If you do, it's kinda funny. Kinda makes you chuckle and say, "Oh. I know what that means." If you don't, seeing a strawberry drive isn't terribly unfunny either. But not as funny as if you know who it's supposed to be, and even then it's only a little funny. I guess my summary is this: Your art is fine, but you need better jokes, grammar, and text before it's worth reading. Unless you're the guy whose avatar is a giant strawberry, in which case I suppose this would be funny to read.

04-07-2005, 02:13 PM	#62
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,361.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,861.00 Donate	God, Sheezyart NEVER loads on my computer. I can't see a frickin' thing. Based on what Glyph says though, you've improved.

04-07-2005, 07:53 PM	#64
RMC Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenix, NY Posts: 1,129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 9,720.05 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 10,220.05 Donate	New Comic

04-08-2005, 06:44 PM	#65
RMC Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenix, NY Posts: 1,129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 9,720.05 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 10,220.05 Donate

04-08-2005, 09:48 PM	#66
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,361.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,861.00 Donate	Speech bubbles would be nice.

04-09-2005, 04:26 PM	#68
OcarinaMan Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Ikana Castle Posts: 2,482 Thanks: 1 Thanked 5 Times in 3 Posts Points: 7,797.77 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 8,297.77 Donate	Not very funny at all.

06-30-2005, 05:36 PM	#69
RMC Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenix, NY Posts: 1,129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 9,720.05 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 10,220.05 Donate	Holy this is old, I guess it's time to update with my new sprite in work.