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sladd54 · 03-27-2005, 11:17 AM

Yeah, I know, Not funny. Bite me.

This actually has a story, and will actually be funny(if you guys like my kind of humor)

so before you say anything(GLYPH) read the above statement then read the comic

sladd54 · 03-27-2005, 12:33 PM

Alright, I made the second one...this one has NO joke.

RMC · 03-27-2005, 12:47 PM

Meh there pretty decent..Isnt that the same house you had in the one comic?

sladd54 · 03-27-2005, 12:59 PM

Yes, yes it is. Thanks for pointing that out for us today.

sladd54 · 03-27-2005, 01:05 PM

#3 is ready

last one for today

X-3 · 03-27-2005, 02:16 PM

These are pretty funny, but is Taylor's sprite a girl? Sorry, I'm not sure if Taylor is a girl name as well, sue me....

RMC · 03-27-2005, 03:14 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by X-3 X:
These are pretty funny, but is Taylor's sprite a girl? Sorry, I'm not sure if Taylor is a girl name as well, sue me....

Yes this has been confusing me too is he or she a girl or a guy?

sladd54 · 03-27-2005, 04:58 PM

It's a she. We make fun of her for it. Dead serious.

thunt · 03-27-2005, 08:42 PM

God, I'm a guy, and the same things hapen to me.
The plot... isn't very good actually. And the comic feels rushed.
Rating:
[img]redface.gif[/img] Meh.

sladd54 · 03-27-2005, 08:49 PM

well plots have to unfold, you can't read one comic and expect the plot to stay the same

2 words

plot twist

thunt · 03-28-2005, 12:57 AM

No, Sean, this comic is people running around and doing stupid stuff for no reason. I mean, launching straight into something sometimes gives a feeling of suspense, but this isn't. It's just random, which really needs something to bind it together, which most people use humor. And, it's just predictable, and the characters are flat, and two-dimensional. It just doesn't work.(wow, listen to me, I sound like Glyph 'n stuff)

Glyph Phoenix · 03-28-2005, 03:42 AM

You sure do. Well, you would if you actually pointed out the things that were wrong instead of the gibberish you spouted.

It's not that predictable. One minute they're outside, then in a house, then Shadow Sean is driving Robotnik's vehicle from Sonic 2 into some cows. Stupid, perhaps. But not predictable.

It's not that random, either. It has a plot. And it's not a terribly bad one, either. It has a better plot than any other comics in this forum, but I guess that doesn't mean much of anything. Y'know, beause of the whole comics in this forum being crap thing.

And finally, it is funny at times. Okay, one time... and even then it wasn't that funny. I liked the Chitty Chitty Bang Bang joke. It was just one of those things that was stupid cleverly placed to be funny. Not that jokes so stupid they're funny are so terribly bad; pretty much all of NC is like that.

This comic isn't bad. Your grammar is good, your text boxes are nice, your sprites have nice expressions even if they are mixed bittages and the only edits are lazy ones and... okay, need some work there.

But to reiterate, this comic isn't bad. It's not good enough to make me read it if I weren't a regular of this forum, but this comic isn't bad. I'm actually quite relieved. I'm so sick of really sucky comics around here, it's nice to see one that has a plot and is fairily good looking.

sladd54 · 03-29-2005, 06:59 PM

Sorry about the long wait, but the thing is my friend wants to take turns doing comics

I do one, he takes the next part, then me(right now he only did one and I did 4)

so i'll post them later on

his comic making style is alot different than mine(vulgar, horribly made, but alot more funny to me)

oh and tigit, plot twists mean when the plot changes, the plot didn't change yet, meaning the plot twist was going to happen later, ******* !

so forget #2 and #3

Glyph Phoenix · 03-29-2005, 07:11 PM

Hey, now. Go ahead and point out all the stupid things Tigt says (there's a lot of them), but don't go insulting him for stupid things that he never did.

Unless we get to see this plot twist of yours, this is all we can review. We can't go pointing out how good or bad this plot twist is before it's happened yet, can we?

And if your friend makes vulgar, horribly made comics, why are you going to post them? They better be really funny, or else this comic is going to go from mediocre to craptacular.

sladd54 · 03-29-2005, 07:46 PM

well if I don't post his comics mine won't make sense

if you like sex jokes and swear jokes you'll like his, if you don't

too bad

Glyph Phoenix · 03-30-2005, 12:12 AM

Sounds like this friend of yours isn't very talented.

Oh well. More failure to laugh at.

thunt · 04-03-2005, 08:36 PM

Hah! If I made a list of all the stupid things I've ever said, I'd... have a long list, and add this.

Mariocomicfan · 04-08-2005, 02:48 PM

How did you put those comics there?

X-3 · 04-08-2005, 04:18 PM

Read this topic Mariocomicfan: Click here

Sean, this comic isnt very funny(But it doesnt have to). But it looks like the plot can thinken and expand. Probaly, I guess.

yo478 · 04-14-2005, 07:03 PM

Hi shadow sean, I really like your comic series a lot, really good work. I can't wait for the next one.

03-27-2005, 11:17 AM	#1
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,223.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,723.00 Donate	Yeah, I know, Not funny. Bite me. This actually has a story, and will actually be funny(if you guys like my kind of humor) so before you say anything(GLYPH) read the above statement then read the comic

03-27-2005, 12:33 PM	#2
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,223.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,723.00 Donate	Alright, I made the second one...this one has NO joke.

03-27-2005, 12:47 PM	#3
RMC Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Phoenix, NY Posts: 1,129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 10,538.05 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 11,038.05 Donate	Meh there pretty decent..Isnt that the same house you had in the one comic?

03-27-2005, 12:59 PM	#4
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,223.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,723.00 Donate	Yes, yes it is. Thanks for pointing that out for us today.

03-27-2005, 01:05 PM	#5
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,223.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,723.00 Donate	#3 is ready last one for today

03-27-2005, 02:16 PM	#6
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,636 Thanks: 339 Thanked 388 Times in 280 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 22,766.30 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 22,766.30 Donate	These are pretty funny, but is Taylor's sprite a girl? Sorry, I'm not sure if Taylor is a girl name as well, sue me....

03-27-2005, 04:58 PM	#8
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,223.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,723.00 Donate	It's a she. We make fun of her for it. Dead serious.

03-27-2005, 08:42 PM	#9
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,593.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,093.00 Donate	God, I'm a guy, and the same things hapen to me. The plot... isn't very good actually. And the comic feels rushed. Rating: [img]redface.gif[/img] Meh.

03-27-2005, 08:49 PM	#10
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,223.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,723.00 Donate	well plots have to unfold, you can't read one comic and expect the plot to stay the same 2 words plot twist

03-28-2005, 12:57 AM	#11
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,593.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,093.00 Donate	No, Sean, this comic is people running around and doing stupid stuff for no reason. I mean, launching straight into something sometimes gives a feeling of suspense, but this isn't. It's just random, which really needs something to bind it together, which most people use humor. And, it's just predictable, and the characters are flat, and two-dimensional. It just doesn't work.(wow, listen to me, I sound like Glyph 'n stuff)

03-28-2005, 03:42 AM	#12
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 7,039.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,539.00 Donate	You sure do. Well, you would if you actually pointed out the things that were wrong instead of the gibberish you spouted. It's not that predictable. One minute they're outside, then in a house, then Shadow Sean is driving Robotnik's vehicle from Sonic 2 into some cows. Stupid, perhaps. But not predictable. It's not that random, either. It has a plot. And it's not a terribly bad one, either. It has a better plot than any other comics in this forum, but I guess that doesn't mean much of anything. Y'know, beause of the whole comics in this forum being crap thing. And finally, it is funny at times. Okay, one time... and even then it wasn't that funny. I liked the Chitty Chitty Bang Bang joke. It was just one of those things that was stupid cleverly placed to be funny. Not that jokes so stupid they're funny are so terribly bad; pretty much all of NC is like that. This comic isn't bad. Your grammar is good, your text boxes are nice, your sprites have nice expressions even if they are mixed bittages and the only edits are lazy ones and... okay, need some work there. But to reiterate, this comic isn't bad. It's not good enough to make me read it if I weren't a regular of this forum, but this comic isn't bad. I'm actually quite relieved. I'm so sick of really sucky comics around here, it's nice to see one that has a plot and is fairily good looking.

03-29-2005, 06:59 PM	#13
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,223.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,723.00 Donate	Sorry about the long wait, but the thing is my friend wants to take turns doing comics I do one, he takes the next part, then me(right now he only did one and I did 4) so i'll post them later on his comic making style is alot different than mine(vulgar, horribly made, but alot more funny to me) oh and tigit, plot twists mean when the plot changes, the plot didn't change yet, meaning the plot twist was going to happen later, ******* ! so forget #2 and #3

03-29-2005, 07:11 PM	#14
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 7,039.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,539.00 Donate	Hey, now. Go ahead and point out all the stupid things Tigt says (there's a lot of them), but don't go insulting him for stupid things that he never did. Unless we get to see this plot twist of yours, this is all we can review. We can't go pointing out how good or bad this plot twist is before it's happened yet, can we? And if your friend makes vulgar, horribly made comics, why are you going to post them? They better be really funny, or else this comic is going to go from mediocre to craptacular.

03-29-2005, 07:46 PM	#15
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,223.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,723.00 Donate	well if I don't post his comics mine won't make sense if you like sex jokes and swear jokes you'll like his, if you don't too bad

03-30-2005, 12:12 AM	#16
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 7,039.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,539.00 Donate	Sounds like this friend of yours isn't very talented. Oh well. More failure to laugh at.

04-03-2005, 08:36 PM	#17
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,593.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,093.00 Donate	Hah! If I made a list of all the stupid things I've ever said, I'd... have a long list, and add this.

04-08-2005, 02:48 PM	#18
Mariocomicfan Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Irving Posts: 28 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 2,265.31 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 2,765.31 Donate	How did you put those comics there?

04-08-2005, 04:18 PM	#19
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,636 Thanks: 339 Thanked 388 Times in 280 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 22,766.30 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 22,766.30 Donate	Read this topic Mariocomicfan: Click here Sean, this comic isnt very funny(But it doesnt have to). But it looks like the plot can thinken and expand. Probaly, I guess.

04-14-2005, 07:03 PM	#20
yo478 Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: kentucky Posts: 45 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,504.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 2,004.00 Donate	Hi shadow sean, I really like your comic series a lot, really good work. I can't wait for the next one.