Megaman - The Three Laws

chaoscontrol · 05-14-2005, 05:41 AM

Heh... Razorclaw is back in business, with better comics and names. Made by me, CO Shade/Mesanshade and with help from Darkprime/Terraprime. Mostly serious, but some funnyessness. Read, and enjoy! [img]tongue.gif[/img]

1. Teaser

2. The Years Following

3. Deadly Diagnostics

4. Rumours, and what follows

5. Sparring

6. X and Zero

7. Damn Reptition...

chaoscontrol · 05-14-2005, 05:42 AM

Damn image limit...

8. Fear my Power!?!

9. Oh, the humanity!

chaoscontrol · 05-15-2005, 12:37 PM

BUMP!

Come on, peeps! Reviews arnt that hard!

Glyph Phoenix · 05-16-2005, 10:01 AM

You bumped a day old thread. I'm going to tell you what your common sense failed to: Don't do that.

I have nothing but bad thing to say about this place. Er... comic. It's not funny at all, and it consists mostly of used jokes from other Megaman comics. Lame.

No one wants to see someone watching Dr. Wily from behind. That joke was only funny once, and Bob and George alone killed it. And then there were tons of fancomics that stomped on its grave.

And did you really think the whole "Megaman is stupid" thing would be funny? Did you? Gah. It's out of character for Dr. Light, and just really poor humor in general.

Comic 8 was pretty funny, but that's about it. And as for a plot... you don't have much of one. We all know what's going to happen to Zero, and you're just setting up things that have already been laid out by Capcom.

chaoscontrol · 05-16-2005, 01:15 PM

*sigh* Not all comics have to be funny, you know. Humours is more of a smaller point in these comics.

Glyph Phoenix · 05-16-2005, 01:25 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Glyph Phoenix:
And as for a plot... you don't have much of one. We all know what's going to happen to Zero, and you're just setting up things that have already been laid out by Capcom.

Hey, what do you know. Why, it's almost like I know that, stupid.

chaoscontrol · 05-16-2005, 01:30 PM

I knew there was a reason I left... Lukly for me, there are people who actually like my work...

ludwigvan · 05-16-2005, 04:33 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Glyph Phoenix:
We all know what's going to happen to Zero, and you're just setting up things that have already been laid out by Capcom.

*Sneakon*
This is aimed at Chaos Control. STOP. Everybody and their effin' mother has at least once thought of doing - and probably at least started - Their own story of what happened to bridge MM and MMX. And it's so tired, anything even remotely simultaneously plausible and original (for it) can apparently not be done. It's not like I see much effort for originality in these things, anyways.

Just do something more original, man.

I don't mean you have to have a brand new story, I'm just saying, Megaman's done to death, and amazingly the Megaman to X stories are part of it. So just stop. If you want to find a game, sure, find a game to expand, or, hell, just give your own version of the plot or something. (Like take a sidescroller game without much story, and string it together like a story or movie)

chaoscontrol · 05-17-2005, 01:24 PM

Meh, the people at AWB like it, so thats all that matters. Advice ignored, member left, comic continued...

Codiekitty · 05-17-2005, 02:05 PM

Well, as long as we don't have to read it.

Where are these lemmings going? The Super Nintendo Super Shire! Hop in line and follow them there!

Alink - VCR Man. VCR. · 05-17-2005, 10:31 PM

One and Two seemed alright. The white text was sort of 'highlited' by black, which made it easier to read and nicer looking.

Number three seemed less.... Classy. Then it went downhill. Number four has white text which was VERY hard to read.
You mispelt Museum a couple times over. When Megaman was talking to the Wood robot-master-dude, his mouth was black, and it looks like you drew it to make it look open when it doesn't.

It's not funny, which you explained, but it looks like it's TRYING to be funny. And even if you didn't intend that, there's really no seriousness in it at all.
The larger Robot Masters look REALLY bad standing next to Megaman. They don't look like they match very well.

;P That was fun. (Next time I'll try to order my thoughts more. It's just that it's Late, and I'm tired. ;P)

[ May 17, 2005, 10:34 PM: Message edited by: ^Alink ]

indexcard · 06-07-2005, 09:35 PM

The comic... well it's good, but the "seriousness" gets ruined early in the comic series because of spelling mistakes. Although the mistakes gave it much needed funniness. But, sadly Megaman has been done 1,000,000 times. The Megaman thing is so old it feels like people have no life and the only life they has is Megaman. But don't get me wrong I love comic, and the spelling mistakes. I just don't like Megaman. I haven't played a Megaman game and I haven't heard good things about Megaman games I have seen a lot of Megaman comics and I keep trying to call Megaman Megan.

Glyph Phoenix · 06-08-2005, 12:28 AM

yo478 · 06-09-2005, 10:59 AM

Hi, may I ask where you got those Megaman 7 backgrounds?

ludwigvan · 06-09-2005, 12:58 PM

http://www.bghq.com/pages/mm7.php?mode=main

05-14-2005, 05:41 AM	#1
chaoscontrol Newbie Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: The Star Forge Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 875.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,375.00 Donate	Heh... Razorclaw is back in business, with better comics and names. Made by me, CO Shade/Mesanshade and with help from Darkprime/Terraprime. Mostly serious, but some funnyessness. Read, and enjoy! [img]tongue.gif[/img] 1. Teaser 2. The Years Following 3. Deadly Diagnostics 4. Rumours, and what follows 5. Sparring 6. X and Zero 7. Damn Reptition...

05-14-2005, 05:42 AM	#2
chaoscontrol Newbie Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: The Star Forge Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 875.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,375.00 Donate	Damn image limit... 8. Fear my Power!?! 9. Oh, the humanity!

05-15-2005, 12:37 PM	#3
chaoscontrol Newbie Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: The Star Forge Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 875.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,375.00 Donate	BUMP! Come on, peeps! Reviews arnt that hard!

05-16-2005, 10:01 AM	#4
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 7,018.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,518.00 Donate	You bumped a day old thread. I'm going to tell you what your common sense failed to: Don't do that. I have nothing but bad thing to say about this place. Er... comic. It's not funny at all, and it consists mostly of used jokes from other Megaman comics. Lame. No one wants to see someone watching Dr. Wily from behind. That joke was only funny once, and Bob and George alone killed it. And then there were tons of fancomics that stomped on its grave. And did you really think the whole "Megaman is stupid" thing would be funny? Did you? Gah. It's out of character for Dr. Light, and just really poor humor in general. Comic 8 was pretty funny, but that's about it. And as for a plot... you don't have much of one. We all know what's going to happen to Zero, and you're just setting up things that have already been laid out by Capcom.

05-16-2005, 01:15 PM	#5
chaoscontrol Newbie Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: The Star Forge Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 875.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,375.00 Donate	sigh Not all comics have to be funny, you know. Humours is more of a smaller point in these comics.

05-16-2005, 01:30 PM	#7
chaoscontrol Newbie Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: The Star Forge Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 875.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,375.00 Donate	I knew there was a reason I left... Lukly for me, there are people who actually like my work...

05-17-2005, 01:24 PM	#9
chaoscontrol Newbie Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: The Star Forge Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 875.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,375.00 Donate	Meh, the people at AWB like it, so thats all that matters. Advice ignored, member left, comic continued...

05-17-2005, 02:05 PM	#10
Codiekitty Just Another Face in Red Jumpsuit Join Date: May 2001 Location: Lemmingland Gender: Posts: 19,143 Thanks: 121 Thanked 174 Times in 120 Posts Points: 48,800.72 Bank: 3,021,450.74 Total Points: 3,070,251.46 Donate	Well, as long as we don't have to read it. Where are these lemmings going? The Super Nintendo Super Shire! Hop in line and follow them there!

05-17-2005, 10:31 PM	#11
Alink - VCR Man. VCR. Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Behind The Wall Of Sleep. Gender: Posts: 768 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 5,023.99 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,023.99 Donate	One and Two seemed alright. The white text was sort of 'highlited' by black, which made it easier to read and nicer looking. Number three seemed less.... Classy. Then it went downhill. Number four has white text which was VERY hard to read. You mispelt Museum a couple times over. When Megaman was talking to the Wood robot-master-dude, his mouth was black, and it looks like you drew it to make it look open when it doesn't. It's not funny, which you explained, but it looks like it's TRYING to be funny. And even if you didn't intend that, there's really no seriousness in it at all. The larger Robot Masters look REALLY bad standing next to Megaman. They don't look like they match very well. ;P That was fun. (Next time I'll try to order my thoughts more. It's just that it's Late, and I'm tired. ;P) [ May 17, 2005, 10:34 PM: Message edited by: ^Alink ]

06-07-2005, 09:35 PM	#12
indexcard Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 37 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,121.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,621.00 Donate	The comic... well it's good, but the "seriousness" gets ruined early in the comic series because of spelling mistakes. Although the mistakes gave it much needed funniness. But, sadly Megaman has been done 1,000,000 times. The Megaman thing is so old it feels like people have no life and the only life they has is Megaman. But don't get me wrong I love comic, and the spelling mistakes. I just don't like Megaman. I haven't played a Megaman game and I haven't heard good things about Megaman games I have seen a lot of Megaman comics and I keep trying to call Megaman Megan.

06-08-2005, 12:28 AM	#13
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 7,018.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,518.00 Donate

06-09-2005, 10:59 AM	#14
yo478 Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: kentucky Posts: 45 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,502.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 2,002.00 Donate	Hi, may I ask where you got those Megaman 7 backgrounds?

06-09-2005, 12:58 PM	#15
ludwigvan Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: The well of wishes. Gender: Posts: 5,444 Thanks: 3 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Points: 11,809.44 Bank: 510.00 Total Points: 12,319.44 Donate	http://www.bghq.com/pages/mm7.php?mode=main