My new comic series...again(#3 is up)

sladd54 · 05-14-2005, 06:34 PM

Alright, sorry about ditching my "scruffinators" comic, but when you think about it, it would've been a bad idea, and when I think its a bad idea the whole comic goes down the drain.

and my computer crashed...again, but i managed to get my sprites back, so thats a plus!

anyway, here's part 1...to an unnamed comic right now

[ May 15, 2005, 02:53 PM: Message edited by: Shadow Sean ]

thunt · 05-14-2005, 09:41 PM

One would think if you were carried by Ridley, you'd change your pose.

Glyph Phoenix · 05-14-2005, 11:22 PM

Zing!

But really, he was being picked up by the hood. The pose didn't really need to change. We can't hold that against him, what with all the other glaring problems this comic has. And his mouth doesn't open when he talks while being carried away by ridley, either. Normally this isn't a problem... but on this sprite you can see his unopen mouth and everything.

Some of your backgrounds are resized incorrectly. Your sprites are of different bittages, thanks to your crappy 8-bit Sean recolor. You have sprites of all different sizes and perspectives together. You resized the Pokemon starter town background incorrectly. You have annoying black space on the side of your comic. You put a freakin' Pokemon battle sprite behind an Earthbound counter. The comic is not very funny.

Now, on to the good things about this comic...

...your text is nice.

That should be it.

thunt · 05-14-2005, 11:30 PM

Well, his feet shouldn't be looking like they were still on the ground.

sladd54 · 05-15-2005, 01:33 PM

Alright, here's my second comic. And yeah, I thought the ending was bad, and I always change my sprites, and it's not funny, and the resizing horrible. But at least I actually watch my spelling...most of the time.

Oh yeah, I just saw that I forgot to add some of the Lines pointing to who's talking. Its kind of obvious who is though.

sladd54 · 05-15-2005, 02:52 PM

here's part 3

Glyph Phoenix · 05-16-2005, 10:18 AM

Okay, naming some of the guards after The Chimpunks was kinda funny. And while I really should be tired of characters being smart for a change and pulling Uzis out instead of some stupid RPG weapon, I have to admit... I'm not.

But that's about it. Putting yourself and your friends as characters in a comic is still dumb. Your sprites still don't match at all. Your special effects are really bad. Your blood is ridiculous, you're not impressing anyone with red lines drawn on your characters, especially when the lines mysteriously disappear the next frame.

indexcard · 06-20-2005, 02:39 AM

I actually like this comic. The effects are lame but I don't care. I love this comic. I can see the bad effects but not everyone is an artist.

Glyph Phoenix · 06-20-2005, 12:54 PM

[Sorry, I didn't know what I said here was already addressed in other threads]

[ June 20, 2005, 01:00 PM: Message edited by: Glyph Phoenix ]

RMC · 06-20-2005, 02:35 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by indexcard:
I actually like this comic. The effects are lame but I don't care. I love this comic. I can see the bad effects but not everyone is an artist.

QUIT BUMPING OLD TREADS

05-14-2005, 06:34 PM	#1
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,227.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,727.00 Donate	Alright, sorry about ditching my "scruffinators" comic, but when you think about it, it would've been a bad idea, and when I think its a bad idea the whole comic goes down the drain. and my computer crashed...again, but i managed to get my sprites back, so thats a plus! anyway, here's part 1...to an unnamed comic right now [ May 15, 2005, 02:53 PM: Message edited by: Shadow Sean ]

05-14-2005, 09:41 PM	#2
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,604.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,104.00 Donate	One would think if you were carried by Ridley, you'd change your pose.

05-14-2005, 11:22 PM	#3
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 7,053.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,553.00 Donate	Zing! But really, he was being picked up by the hood. The pose didn't really need to change. We can't hold that against him, what with all the other glaring problems this comic has. And his mouth doesn't open when he talks while being carried away by ridley, either. Normally this isn't a problem... but on this sprite you can see his unopen mouth and everything. Some of your backgrounds are resized incorrectly. Your sprites are of different bittages, thanks to your crappy 8-bit Sean recolor. You have sprites of all different sizes and perspectives together. You resized the Pokemon starter town background incorrectly. You have annoying black space on the side of your comic. You put a freakin' Pokemon battle sprite behind an Earthbound counter. The comic is not very funny. Now, on to the good things about this comic... ...your text is nice. That should be it.

05-14-2005, 11:30 PM	#4
thunt Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: MY MOTHER WAS A SAINT!!! :punch: Gender: Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,604.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,104.00 Donate	Well, his feet shouldn't be looking like they were still on the ground.

05-15-2005, 01:33 PM	#5
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,227.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,727.00 Donate	Alright, here's my second comic. And yeah, I thought the ending was bad, and I always change my sprites, and it's not funny, and the resizing horrible. But at least I actually watch my spelling...most of the time. Oh yeah, I just saw that I forgot to add some of the Lines pointing to who's talking. Its kind of obvious who is though.

05-15-2005, 02:52 PM	#6
sladd54 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: my parent\'s basement, right next to the cheers dartboard Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,227.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,727.00 Donate	here's part 3

05-16-2005, 10:18 AM	#7
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 7,053.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,553.00 Donate	Okay, naming some of the guards after The Chimpunks was kinda funny. And while I really should be tired of characters being smart for a change and pulling Uzis out instead of some stupid RPG weapon, I have to admit... I'm not. But that's about it. Putting yourself and your friends as characters in a comic is still dumb. Your sprites still don't match at all. Your special effects are really bad. Your blood is ridiculous, you're not impressing anyone with red lines drawn on your characters, especially when the lines mysteriously disappear the next frame.

06-20-2005, 02:39 AM	#8
indexcard Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 37 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,128.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,628.00 Donate	I actually like this comic. The effects are lame but I don't care. I love this comic. I can see the bad effects but not everyone is an artist.

06-20-2005, 12:54 PM	#9
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 7,053.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,553.00 Donate	[Sorry, I didn't know what I said here was already addressed in other threads] [ June 20, 2005, 01:00 PM: Message edited by: Glyph Phoenix ]