Random Short Comics - VGF

Shady Red · 07-17-2005, 12:07 PM

I am now starting to make random short comix now. Today I've completed The bar story, which explains how the hell I made friends with that weird one, Hamtaro...

I speak in dark blue (yes thats me)
Hamtaro speaks in brown
The Bartender speaks in light blue
The Bazooka Koopa Trooper speaks in green
Bowser speaks in dark red
Waluigi speaks in black

RSC #1 What happens when you get drunk

[ July 17, 2005, 12:30 PM: Message edited by: Mister Angry ]

Ghost Kitty · 07-17-2005, 12:14 PM

Can't reweiew it when I can't read it.

Shady Red · 07-17-2005, 12:26 PM

How can't you read it?

YOU ARE MY FRIENDS · 07-17-2005, 12:52 PM

Decent...I was glad Hamtaro got shot

Ghost Kitty · 07-17-2005, 02:06 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Mister Angry:
How can't you read it?

The word are way too small, I can't read them...

Glyph Phoenix · 07-17-2005, 03:00 PM

If you can't spell "does" right, don't make comics.

Shady Red · 07-17-2005, 04:28 PM

I'm sorry...
You never heard of typos?

*controlls urge to make a smart ass remark*

[ July 17, 2005, 04:30 PM: Message edited by: Mister Angry ]

Glyph Phoenix · 07-17-2005, 04:54 PM

If your remark is of the same quality as these comics it'll be a dumb ass remark.

Hard to follow dialogue, blank space, random violence, bad special effects, and poor grammar galore. And besides the comments the main character made while mistaking a hampster for James Bond, this wasn't funny.

But, to be fair, one funny part is probably one funny part more than most other comics around here.

Shady Red · 07-17-2005, 04:59 PM

First off...

Name: Mister Angry
Random violence is my fun.

Second off... You can deal with it because your advice is the equal worth of the crap stains in some ones underwear.

Oh yes and its diolauge, not a piece of literature. Most real people speak with improper grammar.

The end, period.

[ July 17, 2005, 05:01 PM: Message edited by: Mister Angry ]

Glyph Phoenix · 07-17-2005, 05:47 PM

Random violence and improper dialogue (not diolauge) may be fun for you, but it makes for some crappy comic material. And if you didn't want people to say things about the comic you shouldn't have posted it.

Ghost Kitty · 07-17-2005, 06:46 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Glyph Phoenix:
Random violence and improper dialogue (not diolauge) may be fun for you, but it makes for some crappy comic material. And if you didn't want people to say things about the comic you shouldn't have posted it.

How can you read it? All I see are little blurred lines and a comic that, from what I can tell, dosent make sense...

Glyph Phoenix · 07-17-2005, 07:02 PM

Damn it, 9-volt, are you just not clicking the zoom button in the bottom right corner of Internet Explorer?

Shady Red · 07-17-2005, 08:43 PM

(Never said I don't welcome opinions...)
Why I'm so sorry I cannot type just like you oh skillfull one. Can you teach me the way of the non-suck please?

*sarcasm ends*

Anyway...Time to make more comics which will be frowned upon by my master here because I'm bored as hell and have nothing else to do. Everyone else who likes my retarded sence of humor (like my other friends do :\), enjoy...blah...

Ghost Kitty · 07-17-2005, 09:48 PM

Sorry that I don't have internet explorer, but I have CS. (I know, it sucks, but you gotta use what you got...)

Glyph Phoenix · 07-18-2005, 07:59 PM

Actually it's probably a good thing that you don't use IE because it's buggy and has security holes. It's just that usually when one person in particular can't view a big image it's because IE automatically shoves the image into a little square on your screen regardless of how many screens it takes up.

Codiekitty · 07-20-2005, 11:41 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Glyph Phoenix:
If you can't spell "does" right, don't make comics.

Quote:

Originally posted by Glyph Phoenix:
And besides the comments the main character made while mistaking a hampster for James Bond, this wasn't funny.

If you can't spell "hamster" right, don't be a grammar nazi.

Where are these lemmings going? The Super Nintendo Super Shire! Hop in line and follow them there!

ludwigvan · 07-20-2005, 01:17 PM

For fairness, CK, a lot of people do pronounce it "hampster". It could very well be one of those learning by association things.

It still bugs the crap out of me, so forget that last comment.

For fairness, CK, is that out of all of that, he only made the mistake of misspelling "Hamster". Now, although it wasn't a terribly complicated word, it wasn't something like "Hello" or "Does", or every other word. Now, don't get me wrong, I think it's kinda stupid to spell "Hamster" wrong, but I'm saying, everybody makes at least a few mistakes, and right here was one mistake.

Glyph Phoenix · 07-20-2005, 04:02 PM

Hey. That was a rare grammatical lapse. Except for all those other grammatical lapses. But I guess if there's no standard to speak of then it's not a lapse.

Hey, look over there! It's somebody spelling gerbil with two l's!

*dives out window*

Ike · 07-22-2005, 09:01 PM

People, this is not the place to be taking up Crusades against grammatical errors.

Glyph Phoenix · 07-22-2005, 09:24 PM

Then where? I don't see a grammatical crusade forum anywhere around here.

07-17-2005, 12:07 PM	#1
Shady Red Newbie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Hell Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,050.00 Bank: 510.00 Total Points: 1,560.00 Donate	I am now starting to make random short comix now. Today I've completed The bar story, which explains how the hell I made friends with that weird one, Hamtaro... I speak in dark blue (yes thats me) Hamtaro speaks in brown The Bartender speaks in light blue The Bazooka Koopa Trooper speaks in green Bowser speaks in dark red Waluigi speaks in black RSC #1 What happens when you get drunk [ July 17, 2005, 12:30 PM: Message edited by: Mister Angry ]

07-17-2005, 12:14 PM	#2
Ghost Kitty Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: The place... THE PLACE!!! Gender: Posts: 787 Thanks: 4 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Points: 9,840.87 Bank: 68.67 Total Points: 9,909.55 Donate	Can't reweiew it when I can't read it.

07-17-2005, 12:26 PM	#3
Shady Red Newbie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Hell Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,050.00 Bank: 510.00 Total Points: 1,560.00 Donate	How can't you read it?

07-17-2005, 12:52 PM	#4
YOU ARE MY FRIENDS JESUS SAID Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: ON A FRIENDSHIP TREK (Panfan) Gender: Posts: 11,161 Thanks: 481 Thanked 842 Times in 602 Posts Blog Entries: 12 Points: 4,221.01 Bank: 21,897.47 Total Points: 26,118.48 Donate	Decent...I was glad Hamtaro got shot

07-17-2005, 03:00 PM	#6
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,572.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,072.00 Donate	If you can't spell "does" right, don't make comics.

07-17-2005, 04:28 PM	#7
Shady Red Newbie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Hell Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,050.00 Bank: 510.00 Total Points: 1,560.00 Donate	I'm sorry... You never heard of typos? controlls urge to make a smart ass remark [ July 17, 2005, 04:30 PM: Message edited by: Mister Angry ]

07-17-2005, 04:54 PM	#8
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,572.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,072.00 Donate	If your remark is of the same quality as these comics it'll be a dumb ass remark. Hard to follow dialogue, blank space, random violence, bad special effects, and poor grammar galore. And besides the comments the main character made while mistaking a hampster for James Bond, this wasn't funny. But, to be fair, one funny part is probably one funny part more than most other comics around here.

07-17-2005, 04:59 PM	#9
Shady Red Newbie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Hell Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,050.00 Bank: 510.00 Total Points: 1,560.00 Donate	First off... Name: Mister Angry Random violence is my fun. Second off... You can deal with it because your advice is the equal worth of the crap stains in some ones underwear. Oh yes and its diolauge, not a piece of literature. Most real people speak with improper grammar. The end, period. [ July 17, 2005, 05:01 PM: Message edited by: Mister Angry ]

07-17-2005, 05:47 PM	#10
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,572.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,072.00 Donate	Random violence and improper dialogue (not diolauge) may be fun for you, but it makes for some crappy comic material. And if you didn't want people to say things about the comic you shouldn't have posted it.

07-17-2005, 07:02 PM	#12
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,572.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,072.00 Donate	Damn it, 9-volt, are you just not clicking the zoom button in the bottom right corner of Internet Explorer?

07-17-2005, 08:43 PM	#13
Shady Red Newbie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Hell Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,050.00 Bank: 510.00 Total Points: 1,560.00 Donate	(Never said I don't welcome opinions...) Why I'm so sorry I cannot type just like you oh skillfull one. Can you teach me the way of the non-suck please? sarcasm ends Anyway...Time to make more comics which will be frowned upon by my master here because I'm bored as hell and have nothing else to do. Everyone else who likes my retarded sence of humor (like my other friends do :\), enjoy...blah...

07-17-2005, 09:48 PM	#14
Ghost Kitty Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: The place... THE PLACE!!! Gender: Posts: 787 Thanks: 4 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Points: 9,840.87 Bank: 68.67 Total Points: 9,909.55 Donate	Sorry that I don't have internet explorer, but I have CS. (I know, it sucks, but you gotta use what you got...)

07-18-2005, 07:59 PM	#15
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,572.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,072.00 Donate	Actually it's probably a good thing that you don't use IE because it's buggy and has security holes. It's just that usually when one person in particular can't view a big image it's because IE automatically shoves the image into a little square on your screen regardless of how many screens it takes up.

07-20-2005, 01:17 PM	#17
ludwigvan Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: The well of wishes. Gender: Posts: 5,444 Thanks: 3 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Points: 10,624.44 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 11,124.44 Donate	For fairness, CK, a lot of people do pronounce it "hampster". It could very well be one of those learning by association things. It still bugs the crap out of me, so forget that last comment. For fairness, CK, is that out of all of that, he only made the mistake of misspelling "Hamster". Now, although it wasn't a terribly complicated word, it wasn't something like "Hello" or "Does", or every other word. Now, don't get me wrong, I think it's kinda stupid to spell "Hamster" wrong, but I'm saying, everybody makes at least a few mistakes, and right here was one mistake.

07-20-2005, 04:02 PM	#18
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,572.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,072.00 Donate	Hey. That was a rare grammatical lapse. Except for all those other grammatical lapses. But I guess if there's no standard to speak of then it's not a lapse. Hey, look over there! It's somebody spelling gerbil with two l's! dives out window

07-22-2005, 09:01 PM	#19
Ike Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: I don't know. Where do I live? Gender: Posts: 5,648 Thanks: 7 Thanked 159 Times in 112 Posts Points: 6,551.39 Bank: 185,327.42 Total Points: 191,878.81 Donate	People, this is not the place to be taking up Crusades against grammatical errors.

07-22-2005, 09:24 PM	#20
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,572.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,072.00 Donate	Then where? I don't see a grammatical crusade forum anywhere around here.