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Glyph Phoenix · 08-02-2005, 02:44 PM

Fixed the link, Tigt.

Now, as for this last one, ElfLad covered most of it. But I think I should add that your Green Lantern sprite is terrible and that mixing such sprites of incredibly different styles as Ridley, Ganon, and Bowser is a big no-no.

As for the jokes... no. The one with Ridley's wings was the only one even close to being funny. I guess they aren't quite as bad as the first couple, which were abysmal, but when you're dealing with jokes this horrible it's hard to tell.

OcarinaMan · 08-02-2005, 02:48 PM

And you should have at least tried to have Ganon's head facing towards "Mysterious Bad Guy." It makes it look as though he's paying attention rather than staring blankly at a wall.

The first panel (with all the Goombas) looked pretty cool, so props for that.

Glyph Phoenix · 08-02-2005, 02:57 PM

And why is the chapter called "In darkest night" when it's not even night? Is that supposed to be a joke? If so... it's not even easy to tell.

Lord_Zack · 08-02-2005, 03:02 PM

You have never read Green Lantern have you? It's a reference to the Green Lantern Oath.

Metal Man · 08-02-2005, 06:03 PM

First, you ca't really fix the fact that Ganondorf doesn't appear to have a GOOD regular sideways sprite. Then there's the fact that the mystery villian, with that background, looks like a dark cloud that's shooting magma into the sky.

RMC · 08-02-2005, 07:37 PM

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Originally posted by Metal Man:
First, you ca't really fix the fact that Ganondorf doesn't appear to have a GOOD regular sideways sprite. Then there's the fact that the mystery villian, with that background, looks like a dark cloud that's shooting magma into the sky.

It's GANON, not Ganondorf.

Lord_Zack · 08-07-2005, 10:34 AM

After getting a really good idea, I have decided to discontinue this comic. My new series will parodize the Super Hero genre of comics and will be called "the Heros".

08-02-2005, 02:44 PM	#41
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,547.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,047.00 Donate	Fixed the link, Tigt. Now, as for this last one, ElfLad covered most of it. But I think I should add that your Green Lantern sprite is terrible and that mixing such sprites of incredibly different styles as Ridley, Ganon, and Bowser is a big no-no. As for the jokes... no. The one with Ridley's wings was the only one even close to being funny. I guess they aren't quite as bad as the first couple, which were abysmal, but when you're dealing with jokes this horrible it's hard to tell.

08-02-2005, 02:48 PM	#42
OcarinaMan Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Ikana Castle Posts: 2,482 Thanks: 1 Thanked 5 Times in 3 Posts Points: 7,797.77 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 8,297.77 Donate	And you should have at least tried to have Ganon's head facing towards "Mysterious Bad Guy." It makes it look as though he's paying attention rather than staring blankly at a wall. The first panel (with all the Goombas) looked pretty cool, so props for that.

08-02-2005, 02:57 PM	#43
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,547.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,047.00 Donate	And why is the chapter called "In darkest night" when it's not even night? Is that supposed to be a joke? If so... it's not even easy to tell.

08-02-2005, 03:02 PM	#44
Lord_Zack Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Gender: Posts: 752 Thanks: 22 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Points: 11,841.55 Bank: 2,539.69 Total Points: 14,381.24 Donate	You have never read Green Lantern have you? It's a reference to the Green Lantern Oath.

08-02-2005, 06:03 PM	#45
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,700 Thanks: 74 Thanked 187 Times in 128 Posts Points: 7,859.06 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 7,859.06 Donate	First, you ca't really fix the fact that Ganondorf doesn't appear to have a GOOD regular sideways sprite. Then there's the fact that the mystery villian, with that background, looks like a dark cloud that's shooting magma into the sky.

08-07-2005, 10:34 AM	#47
Lord_Zack Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Gender: Posts: 752 Thanks: 22 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Points: 11,841.55 Bank: 2,539.69 Total Points: 14,381.24 Donate	After getting a really good idea, I have decided to discontinue this comic. My new series will parodize the Super Hero genre of comics and will be called "the Heros".