Defenders of Ermaria - VGF

Lord_Zack · 07-25-2005, 10:28 AM

Chapter 1 again: The Quest

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Chaper 2 coming soon, with humor a non-roleplayer can understand.

Glyph Phoenix · 07-25-2005, 08:18 PM

I don't think you can really call that humor. Not even roleplaying humor. Because the whole idea behind humor is that it's funny. "OMG D20 nobody's ever done that!" Except they've done it a million times before. Order of the Stick had some d20 jokes, 8-bit theatre had some, and there's one with magic dice and everything so your "humor" loses in both funny and originality.

Your text background is far too vivid. It should be much nearer to white. And the old man should have black lines in his robes and stuff when he's not on his usual black background. And what's with the floating? Also, change the characters' poses once in a while. Staying in a walking frame for the entire comic really sucks.

You lose extra points for degrading the old man from Zelda. He ruled, and now he has to be in your crap comic.

**L007 is Undecided** · 07-25-2005, 08:27 PM

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07-25-2005, 10:28 AM	#1
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07-25-2005, 08:18 PM	#2
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,549.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,049.00 Donate	I don't think you can really call that humor. Not even roleplaying humor. Because the whole idea behind humor is that it's funny. "OMG D20 nobody's ever done that!" Except they've done it a million times before. Order of the Stick had some d20 jokes, 8-bit theatre had some, and there's one with magic dice and everything so your "humor" loses in both funny and originality. Your text background is far too vivid. It should be much nearer to white. And the old man should have black lines in his robes and stuff when he's not on his usual black background. And what's with the floating? Also, change the characters' poses once in a while. Staying in a walking frame for the entire comic really sucks. You lose extra points for degrading the old man from Zelda. He ruled, and now he has to be in your crap comic.

07-25-2005, 08:27 PM	#3
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