The Heros - VGF

Lord_Zack · 08-07-2005, 10:53 AM

The Heros
Guide to the Heros
Mario Sprite: Renato, Leader, Superstrength
Bomberman Sprite: Boomer, Demolitions and Ranged Fighter, creates explosive blasts.
Link Sprite(by SemiJuggalo):Grubar, Comedic Relief, Can create Light
Issue 1: The Incredible Man
Chapter 1:Patrolling

The world these guys are is basically all popular superheros (Marvel,Dc,Image,ect.)plus a few original. Weither or not I will put in popular supers, like Supes or Wolvie, i don't know let, but I'll probably put in funny lesser known guys, like NFLSuperPro or the Wall.

**FACE K. POLK** · 08-07-2005, 12:02 PM

Cor...I dunno about those recolors you got goin' on there.

And was there supposed to be a joke there? I sure didn't catch it.

Definitely needs work, but not the worst I've seen around here.

~Dylan

Lord_Zack · 08-07-2005, 12:31 PM

I only recolored Mario... anyways I've got an idea for what's happening this "issue" and when they meet the "Incredible" Man that's when thing should start to get good, I hope.

Cataclysmic Paradox · 08-07-2005, 05:56 PM

It does need work, but it's better then your original series, from what I've seen so far.

Lord_Zack · 08-09-2005, 02:18 PM

Issue#1
Chapter#2

Lord_Zack · 08-09-2005, 02:19 PM

Pixelated Penguin · 08-11-2005, 07:42 PM

DON'T MIX BITTAGES
Oh, and "heros" isn't a word.

Lord_Zack · 08-12-2005, 08:43 AM

Darn you're right it's heroes. Anyways, next time it's the Secret Origin of the Heros!

[ August 12, 2005, 05:55 PM: Message edited by: Prince Zack of Ryland ]

Col. Les Claypool · 08-12-2005, 10:02 PM

Adam Sessler gives this comic a whatever out of what not

Lord_Zack · 08-13-2005, 04:07 PM

Who cares about, Adam Sessler and Morgan Webb.

Glyph Phoenix · 08-13-2005, 04:29 PM

No one. Just like no one cares about your stupid comic to give a proper review.

Maybe if it was actualy funny and you got rid of crap like mixed bittages and combined the images so you don't have to double post people would care more.

And fix your grammar. "i" instead of "I" is one of the easiest mistakes to fix and you didn't even do that.

You also didn't credit the guy who made that custom link sprite for you.

I guess I should give you credit for your decent background and existing, if cramped, text bubbles. But that's about it.

Lord_Zack · 08-13-2005, 04:32 PM

Quote:

Link Sprite(by SemiJuggalo)

Glyph Phoenix · 08-13-2005, 04:41 PM

Whoops. Sorry about that.

Col. Les Claypool · 08-13-2005, 06:29 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Prince Zack of Ryland:
Who cares about, Adam Sessler and Morgan Webb.

Adam? nobody. Morgan? Well, she is hot...

Lord_Zack · 08-14-2005, 05:58 PM

I can't do anything about it not being funny. I also can't find any good Bomberman sprites. I have good Wario sprites, I just forgot to use them, so as soon as I find good Bomberman sprites I'll put them in. So even if I can't do good jokes I'm going to try to make the best comic I can otherwise.

Glyph Phoenix · 08-14-2005, 06:35 PM

Did you not catch any of my "If the comic is not funny or interesting don't make it" posts that I make at least once a week?

Your comic isn't interesting. And it isn't funny. So stop making it until you can make one of those requirements.

[ August 14, 2005, 06:38 PM: Message edited by: Glyph Phoenix ]

Lord_Zack · 08-14-2005, 07:45 PM

I don't care. Haven't you read every other post I respond to you with? And besides It is funny to me.
Chapter 3: Origins

[ August 14, 2005, 08:41 PM: Message edited by: Prince Zack of Ryland ]

Glyph Phoenix · 08-14-2005, 09:37 PM

You should be glad I take the time to properly comment on this crap, man. Nobody else cared enough to even try.

Speaking of crap, that's what your olive backgrounds look like. Your light green background is nasty as well, and you didn't even bother to make it cover the whole white space.

What's the deal with that crappy green mixed-up house in the background? But besides that, the city BG isn't bad. That white panel with that crappy paint chair, however, is.

I still can't stand the way your sprites match up. Perhaps you could get away with it if they matched up in any sort of way, but Renato and Boomer are 2D overworld sprites while Gruber appears to be a side-scroller, and at a different resolution and of a totally different art style than the rest. And then you went and added the Advance Wars guy. He doesn't even look like a gang member!

And your text is totally screwed up. It runs right through the "Power Man" panel, and it has this nasty border on Grubar's panel and the first one.

08-07-2005, 10:53 AM	#1
Lord_Zack Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Gender: Posts: 752 Thanks: 22 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Points: 11,572.55 Bank: 2,539.69 Total Points: 14,112.24 Donate	The Heros Guide to the Heros Mario Sprite: Renato, Leader, Superstrength Bomberman Sprite: Boomer, Demolitions and Ranged Fighter, creates explosive blasts. Link Sprite(by SemiJuggalo):Grubar, Comedic Relief, Can create Light Issue 1: The Incredible Man Chapter 1:Patrolling The world these guys are is basically all popular superheros (Marvel,Dc,Image,ect.)plus a few original. Weither or not I will put in popular supers, like Supes or Wolvie, i don't know let, but I'll probably put in funny lesser known guys, like NFLSuperPro or the Wall.

08-07-2005, 12:02 PM	#2
FACE K. POLK Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 5,982 Thanks: 805 Thanked 807 Times in 372 Posts Points: 34,315.65 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 34,315.66 Donate	Cor...I dunno about those recolors you got goin' on there. And was there supposed to be a joke there? I sure didn't catch it. Definitely needs work, but not the worst I've seen around here. ~Dylan

08-07-2005, 12:31 PM	#3
Lord_Zack Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Gender: Posts: 752 Thanks: 22 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Points: 11,572.55 Bank: 2,539.69 Total Points: 14,112.24 Donate	I only recolored Mario... anyways I've got an idea for what's happening this "issue" and when they meet the "Incredible" Man that's when thing should start to get good, I hope.

08-07-2005, 05:56 PM	#4
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,586.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,205.27 Donate	It does need work, but it's better then your original series, from what I've seen so far.

08-09-2005, 02:18 PM	#5
Lord_Zack Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Gender: Posts: 752 Thanks: 22 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Points: 11,572.55 Bank: 2,539.69 Total Points: 14,112.24 Donate	Issue#1 Chapter#2

08-09-2005, 02:19 PM	#6
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08-11-2005, 07:42 PM	#7
Pixelated Penguin Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 199 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,394.01 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,894.01 Donate	DON'T MIX BITTAGES Oh, and "heros" isn't a word.

08-12-2005, 08:43 AM	#8
Lord_Zack Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Gender: Posts: 752 Thanks: 22 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Points: 11,572.55 Bank: 2,539.69 Total Points: 14,112.24 Donate	Darn you're right it's heroes. Anyways, next time it's the Secret Origin of the Heros! [ August 12, 2005, 05:55 PM: Message edited by: Prince Zack of Ryland ]

08-12-2005, 10:02 PM	#9
Col. Les Claypool PUDDING TIME! Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Around the world, around the world, around the world, around the world... Gender: Posts: 10,518 Thanks: 440 Thanked 783 Times in 561 Posts Blog Entries: 9 Points: 4,533.52 Bank: 14,668.29 Total Points: 19,201.81 Donate	Adam Sessler gives this comic a whatever out of what not

08-13-2005, 04:07 PM	#10
Lord_Zack Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Gender: Posts: 752 Thanks: 22 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Points: 11,572.55 Bank: 2,539.69 Total Points: 14,112.24 Donate	Who cares about, Adam Sessler and Morgan Webb.

08-13-2005, 04:29 PM	#11
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Points: 6,384.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 6,884.00 Donate	No one. Just like no one cares about your stupid comic to give a proper review. Maybe if it was actualy funny and you got rid of crap like mixed bittages and combined the images so you don't have to double post people would care more. And fix your grammar. "i" instead of "I" is one of the easiest mistakes to fix and you didn't even do that. You also didn't credit the guy who made that custom link sprite for you. I guess I should give you credit for your decent background and existing, if cramped, text bubbles. But that's about it.

08-13-2005, 04:41 PM	#13
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Points: 6,384.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 6,884.00 Donate	Whoops. Sorry about that.

08-14-2005, 05:58 PM	#15
Lord_Zack Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Gender: Posts: 752 Thanks: 22 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Points: 11,572.55 Bank: 2,539.69 Total Points: 14,112.24 Donate	I can't do anything about it not being funny. I also can't find any good Bomberman sprites. I have good Wario sprites, I just forgot to use them, so as soon as I find good Bomberman sprites I'll put them in. So even if I can't do good jokes I'm going to try to make the best comic I can otherwise.

08-14-2005, 06:35 PM	#16
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Points: 6,384.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 6,884.00 Donate	Did you not catch any of my "If the comic is not funny or interesting don't make it" posts that I make at least once a week? Your comic isn't interesting. And it isn't funny. So stop making it until you can make one of those requirements. [ August 14, 2005, 06:38 PM: Message edited by: Glyph Phoenix ]

08-14-2005, 07:45 PM	#17
Lord_Zack Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Gender: Posts: 752 Thanks: 22 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Points: 11,572.55 Bank: 2,539.69 Total Points: 14,112.24 Donate	I don't care. Haven't you read every other post I respond to you with? And besides It is funny to me. Chapter 3: Origins [ August 14, 2005, 08:41 PM: Message edited by: Prince Zack of Ryland ]

08-14-2005, 09:37 PM	#18
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Points: 6,384.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 6,884.00 Donate	You should be glad I take the time to properly comment on this crap, man. Nobody else cared enough to even try. Speaking of crap, that's what your olive backgrounds look like. Your light green background is nasty as well, and you didn't even bother to make it cover the whole white space. What's the deal with that crappy green mixed-up house in the background? But besides that, the city BG isn't bad. That white panel with that crappy paint chair, however, is. I still can't stand the way your sprites match up. Perhaps you could get away with it if they matched up in any sort of way, but Renato and Boomer are 2D overworld sprites while Gruber appears to be a side-scroller, and at a different resolution and of a totally different art style than the rest. And then you went and added the Advance Wars guy. He doesn't even look like a gang member! And your text is totally screwed up. It runs right through the "Power Man" panel, and it has this nasty border on Grubar's panel and the first one.