this iz ware ill post my comix - VGF

**Crazyswordsman** · 02-06-2006, 11:25 PM

Well, the double posting effect was superb

. The fact that we can't even make out what was going on also was cool.

Seriously, though, that looks more like an abstract comix than a real thing. Organize your frames to make it look like something is happening. If you use clear backgrounds, textboxes are unnecessary, especially if they are messy. If you email me, I can get you some good, ready made ones which you can size yourself. Also, make the text more legible. I have no idea what you're doing. You keep changing frame sizes, and text sizes. This is a fault I have (at least with frames), but that is just a mess. Lastly, put some original jokes in. They don't have to be funny, but they have to be GOOD. Those jokes aren't that good. Good luck! -CSM

Metal Man · 02-06-2006, 11:33 PM

Ow...

It's too incoherant and random to follow. I won't even start about the graphics until I can follow it.

BLUEDASH2 · 02-06-2006, 11:42 PM

go to the mystical forest zone and look at the comic dorei then go to newgrounds and wacth sonics quest for power 1-3

BLUEDASH2 · 02-06-2006, 11:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BLUEDASH2

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BLUEDASH2 · 02-07-2006, 12:01 AM

Cataclysmic Paradox · 02-07-2006, 02:52 AM

It's not showing up for me, but based on the comments it's been getting, maybe I should be thankful for that.

Metal Man · 02-07-2006, 04:27 PM

Here's a link to it

I should say, press that link, then add a space at the end of the url. THEN it'll pop up.

So much work to burn your eyes. Eesh.

Cataclysmic Paradox · 02-07-2006, 06:27 PM

That's got to be one of the worst comics I've ever seen. There's so much wrong with it... I advise reading the "Okay, so you want to make comix?" thread, 'cause there's so much wrong with this comic, I can't say it all. That, and I'm feeling lazy right now. Is that floating head thing supposed to be Sigma? For shame, BLUEDASH2. For shame...

BLUEDASH2 · 02-08-2006, 02:23 PM

thats how sigma looks in megaman x2

BLUEDASH2 · 02-08-2006, 02:24 PM

if my blog doesnt show up go to www.phonixcomics.tk

Metal Man · 02-08-2006, 03:50 PM

At last. A place I can hotlink to.

Shees. BMPs? Those eat bandwidth. And those "new" comics are only slightly more easy to understand than the first one. Try to improve something. Anything. Please?

Cataclysmic Paradox · 02-08-2006, 08:30 PM

*checks Sprites Inc.* Okay, they look slightly alike. But the one in your comics appears to be made from scratch, and obviously not made very well. If you look at the sprite you apparently based it on, you'll see that only the eyes were red, not the entire outline. The outline was green, the eyes were red, and the rest was transparent.

BLUEDASH2 · 02-11-2006, 04:53 PM

it is the same one i just filled it in cause i was bored

BLUEDASH2 · 02-11-2006, 04:56 PM

its two seprate comics the middle one is sonic vs mario the bottom the part is part of mario v sonic i forgot to post and the top one is 2parts of a tenpart series cALLED_{if anyone would like to sugest names for the comic post a reply at a new topic ill open calleed suggestions}

BLUEDASH2 · 02-11-2006, 05:02 PM

to metalman; duh thats why i save it as a png it takes up less space

**Dylan** · 02-11-2006, 05:38 PM

Stop triple posting. Seriously.

And I'm going to reiterate what everyone else said, because it seems like you don't seem to care about their advice; work on your comics. I'm going to be blunt; they suck. Really. Why they suck has already been covered, so it'd be a little rendundant to go over again.

And so, No triple posting + good comics = happy moderator. Try it sometime.

~Dylan

BLUEDASH2 · 02-11-2006, 05:46 PM

ok ok ok ill take out the comic and work on it see ya in three days

BLUEDASH2 · 02-11-2006, 09:10 PM

ok tell me {when u go back to phonixcomics.tk} if thats better

02-06-2006, 11:09 PM	#1
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,404.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,996.72 Donate	this iz ware ill post my comix

02-06-2006, 11:10 PM	#2
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,404.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,996.72 Donate	tis iz the site

02-08-2006, 02:23 PM	#11
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,404.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,996.72 Donate	duh thats how sigma looks in megaman x2

02-11-2006, 04:53 PM	#15
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,404.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,996.72 Donate	it is the same one i just filled it in cause i was bored Last edited by BLUEDASH2; 02-11-2006 at 05:12 PM.

02-06-2006, 11:25 PM	#3
Crazyswordsman RPG Mod Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Booyaville (yeah!) Gender: Posts: 7,980 Thanks: 538 Thanked 373 Times in 256 Posts Points: 126,599.11 Bank: 26,695.24 Total Points: 153,294.34 Donate	Well, the double posting effect was superb . The fact that we can't even make out what was going on also was cool. Seriously, though, that looks more like an abstract comix than a real thing. Organize your frames to make it look like something is happening. If you use clear backgrounds, textboxes are unnecessary, especially if they are messy. If you email me, I can get you some good, ready made ones which you can size yourself. Also, make the text more legible. I have no idea what you're doing. You keep changing frame sizes, and text sizes. This is a fault I have (at least with frames), but that is just a mess. Lastly, put some original jokes in. They don't have to be funny, but they have to be GOOD. Those jokes aren't that good. Good luck! -CSM

02-06-2006, 11:33 PM	#4
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,701 Thanks: 74 Thanked 190 Times in 130 Posts Points: 8,068.89 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 8,068.89 Donate	Ow... It's too incoherant and random to follow. I won't even start about the graphics until I can follow it.

02-06-2006, 11:42 PM	#5
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,404.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,996.72 Donate	go to the mystical forest zone and look at the comic dorei then go to newgrounds and wacth sonics quest for power 1-3

02-07-2006, 12:01 AM	#7
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02-07-2006, 02:52 AM	#8
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,717.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,336.27 Donate	It's not showing up for me, but based on the comments it's been getting, maybe I should be thankful for that.

02-07-2006, 04:27 PM	#9
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,701 Thanks: 74 Thanked 190 Times in 130 Posts Points: 8,068.89 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 8,068.89 Donate	Here's a link to it I should say, press that link, then add a space at the end of the url. THEN it'll pop up. So much work to burn your eyes. Eesh.

02-07-2006, 06:27 PM	#10
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,717.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,336.27 Donate	That's got to be one of the worst comics I've ever seen. There's so much wrong with it... I advise reading the "Okay, so you want to make comix?" thread, 'cause there's so much wrong with this comic, I can't say it all. That, and I'm feeling lazy right now. Is that floating head thing supposed to be Sigma? For shame, BLUEDASH2. For shame...

02-08-2006, 02:24 PM	#12
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,404.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,996.72 Donate	if my blog doesnt show up go to www.phonixcomics.tk

02-08-2006, 03:50 PM	#13
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,701 Thanks: 74 Thanked 190 Times in 130 Posts Points: 8,068.89 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 8,068.89 Donate	At last. A place I can hotlink to. Shees. BMPs? Those eat bandwidth. And those "new" comics are only slightly more easy to understand than the first one. Try to improve something. Anything. Please?

02-08-2006, 08:30 PM	#14
Cataclysmic Paradox Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hiding from the voices... Shh... Gender: Posts: 576 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Points: 6,717.02 Bank: 27,619.25 Total Points: 34,336.27 Donate	checks Sprites Inc. Okay, they look slightly alike. But the one in your comics appears to be made from scratch, and obviously not made very well. If you look at the sprite you apparently based it on, you'll see that only the eyes were red, not the entire outline. The outline was green, the eyes were red, and the rest was transparent.

02-11-2006, 04:56 PM	#16
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,404.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,996.72 Donate	its two seprate comics the middle one is sonic vs mario the bottom the part is part of mario v sonic i forgot to post and the top one is 2parts of a tenpart series cALLED_{if anyone would like to sugest names for the comic post a reply at a new topic ill open calleed suggestions}

02-11-2006, 05:02 PM	#17
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,404.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,996.72 Donate	to metalman; duh thats why i save it as a png it takes up less space

02-11-2006, 05:38 PM	#18
Dylan Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,102 Thanks: 856 Thanked 876 Times in 400 Posts Points: 30,721.92 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 30,721.93 Donate	Stop triple posting. Seriously. And I'm going to reiterate what everyone else said, because it seems like you don't seem to care about their advice; work on your comics. I'm going to be blunt; they suck. Really. Why they suck has already been covered, so it'd be a little rendundant to go over again. And so, No triple posting + good comics = happy moderator. Try it sometime. ~Dylan

02-11-2006, 05:46 PM	#19
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,404.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,996.72 Donate	ok ok ok ill take out the comic and work on it see ya in three days

02-11-2006, 09:10 PM	#20
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,404.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,996.72 Donate	ok tell me {when u go back to phonixcomics.tk} if thats better