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Old 06-08-2006, 07:12 PM   #1
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chad comix

hi i made some comics called "chad comix" chad is the main charecter







kinda weird but they are fun to make
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Old 06-09-2006, 06:41 PM   #2
 
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Oh geez... Where to begin?

The art is terrible. In that first comic, it looks like you tried to manually resize the Mario and Goomba sprites and wound up making them look like crap. And to be blunt, you can't draw at all. The background is awful; never draw your own background unless you're very good at it (Like LVK or Smithy GCN.). It looks like you put little to no effort into it.

There's no nice way to say this, so I'll be frank; they aren't funny at all. Nothing else to say here except work on becoming funny.

You have a ton of work to do. Keep trying, though. I look forward to seeing improvements.

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Old 06-11-2006, 05:55 PM   #3
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The art is terrible. TERRIBLE.
They aren't funny at all, except the last frame, which I think is funny.
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Old 06-14-2006, 07:38 PM   #4
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Chad roxs
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Old 06-15-2006, 05:51 PM   #5
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You are nuts if you like them.
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Old 06-18-2006, 12:17 PM   #6
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Oh geez... Where to begin?

The art is terrible. In that first comic, it looks like you tried to manually resize the Mario and Goomba sprites and wound up making them look like crap. And to be blunt, you can't draw at all. The background is awful; never draw your own background unless you're very good at it (Like LVK or Smithy GCN.). It looks like you put little to no effort into it.

There's no nice way to say this, so I'll be frank; they aren't funny at all. Nothing else to say here except work on becoming funny.

You have a ton of work to do. Keep trying, though. I look forward to seeing improvements.

~Dylan
holy crap man all you do is complain
these are my first comics i ever made on paint. it is sorta hard to draw on paint
and i cant think of anything funny either
also im left handed and i have to use a right handed mouse to draw with

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Old 06-18-2006, 03:29 PM   #7
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^Don't sweat it. Dylan is one of the site's biggest critics. But he is right. I'll remake your comic, if you allow me to, so you can see what it should be like.

[EDIT: I'm also the mod here. Don't forget it. -Dylan]

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ok here i made a new one:

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Old 06-18-2006, 09:08 PM   #9
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It's pretty funny. Anyway, the art is still horrible. Can you let me remake them?
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Old 06-18-2006, 10:17 PM   #10
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It's pretty funny. Anyway, the art is still horrible. Can you let me remake them?
noooooo! i like crappy artwork
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Old 06-18-2006, 11:30 PM   #11
 
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As Joe Dirt put it: "It's not what you want, it's the consumer."

In other words, ditch the crappy artwork. Just because you like it doesn't mean everyone else does. It doesn't make you hip or trendy or anything. It just makes you an idiot.

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Old 06-18-2006, 11:39 PM   #12
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If you want your comics to have crappy art, maked them atleast better in physical terms. For starters, use Circles for heads, lines for stickmen bodies, and big Circles for fat bodys (and lots of squares for shirts).
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As Joe Dirt put it: "It's not what you want, it's the consumer."

In other words, ditch the crappy artwork. Just because you like it doesn't mean everyone else does. It doesn't make you hip or trendy or anything. It just makes you an idiot.

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i dont care what you say im still not gonna draw good, it takes to much time too draw good
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Old 06-19-2006, 01:40 PM   #14
 
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The time you put in is worth it.

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Old 06-19-2006, 10:01 PM   #15
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maybe i dont want to..
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That's your choice. In the meantime, your comic will still suck.

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Old 06-20-2006, 08:59 AM   #17
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Listen to bandersnatch, chad120.
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its more of the funnyness of the comic then the art. maybe once i get better at making funny comics i will work on my art in the comics
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Your comics are supposed to be humorous? I don't see how that helps your argument at all, as none of them so much as made me smile. Rather, I just shook my head in silent shame.

Work on the art first; at least then we'll be looking at unfunny comics pleasing to the eye, rather than unfunny eyesores.

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This movie should teach you that you can make make crappy art and still have it look good at the same time

If you don't want to wait 30 minutes, click here
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