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| Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: texas Gender: Posts: 30 Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts | chad comix hi i made some comics called "chad comix" chad is the main charecter ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() kinda weird but they are fun to make |
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| Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,102 Thanks: 856 Thanked 876 Times in 400 Posts | Oh geez... Where to begin? The art is terrible. In that first comic, it looks like you tried to manually resize the Mario and Goomba sprites and wound up making them look like crap. And to be blunt, you can't draw at all. The background is awful; never draw your own background unless you're very good at it (Like LVK or Smithy GCN.). It looks like you put little to no effort into it. There's no nice way to say this, so I'll be frank; they aren't funny at all. Nothing else to say here except work on becoming funny. You have a ton of work to do. Keep trying, though. I look forward to seeing improvements. ~Dylan |
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| Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In YO FACE Gender: Posts: 1,033 Thanks: 41 Thanked 13 Times in 13 Posts | The art is terrible. TERRIBLE. They aren't funny at all, except the last frame, which I think is funny. |
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| Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: texas Gender: Posts: 30 Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts | Quote:
these are my first comics i ever made on paint. it is sorta hard to draw on paint and i cant think of anything funny either also im left handed and i have to use a right handed mouse to draw with Last edited by chad120; 06-18-2006 at 12:38 PM. | |
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| Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In YO FACE Gender: Posts: 1,033 Thanks: 41 Thanked 13 Times in 13 Posts | ^Don't sweat it. Dylan is one of the site's biggest critics. But he is right. I'll remake your comic, if you allow me to, so you can see what it should be like. [EDIT: I'm also the mod here. Don't forget it. -Dylan] Last edited by Dylan; 06-18-2006 at 08:32 PM. |
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| Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: texas Gender: Posts: 30 Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts | Quote:
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| Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,102 Thanks: 856 Thanked 876 Times in 400 Posts | As Joe Dirt put it: "It's not what you want, it's the consumer." In other words, ditch the crappy artwork. Just because you like it doesn't mean everyone else does. It doesn't make you hip or trendy or anything. It just makes you an idiot. -Dylan |
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| Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Planet X Gender: Posts: 3,807 Thanks: 278 Thanked 182 Times in 128 Posts | If you want your comics to have crappy art, maked them atleast better in physical terms. For starters, use Circles for heads, lines for stickmen bodies, and big Circles for fat bodys (and lots of squares for shirts). |
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| Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: texas Gender: Posts: 30 Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts | Quote:
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| Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,102 Thanks: 856 Thanked 876 Times in 400 Posts | The time you put in is worth it. ~Dylan |
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| Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,102 Thanks: 856 Thanked 876 Times in 400 Posts | That's your choice. In the meantime, your comic will still suck. -Dylan |
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| Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: texas Gender: Posts: 30 Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts | Quote:
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| Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,102 Thanks: 856 Thanked 876 Times in 400 Posts | Your comics are supposed to be humorous? I don't see how that helps your argument at all, as none of them so much as made me smile. Rather, I just shook my head in silent shame. Work on the art first; at least then we'll be looking at unfunny comics pleasing to the eye, rather than unfunny eyesores. ~Dylan |
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| Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Planet X Gender: Posts: 3,807 Thanks: 278 Thanked 182 Times in 128 Posts | |
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