My Comics - Page 7

Demonicus Prime · 03-16-2007, 11:01 PM

Wow, man. Those are actually really good! I'll admit, the font/text is a bit off, but other than that, these are good. Keep 'em coming!

☎☃☢ · 03-16-2007, 11:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SephirothKirby

And why didn't you put me in it?

Because you suck.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Irby

....Why did you put me in it anyway? >_>

Because you suck, but not as much as the guy above.

And please, no one take this to seriously. It's mostly a joke.

SephirothKirby · 03-17-2007, 12:15 AM

To say it to my face did not insult me, though I did nothing to you.

But saying "Its mostly a joke" leaves me bewildered as to whether or not you actually insulted me though we've had no communication prior to this.

MC Luigi · 03-17-2007, 03:29 PM

Good comments + free time + MC Luigi = Part 2.
Nuff said.

Hope you all like it!

Irby · 03-17-2007, 03:30 PM

Ha I LOVE how you threw in a gay joke. [/sarcasm] Take me out of it plz thx

MC Luigi · 03-17-2007, 03:48 PM

Ok.
Sheesh you take out all the fun. They're just JOKES.
Weeeellllllllll, now I have Sephiroth Kirby to mess with.....

Demonicus Prime · 03-17-2007, 03:58 PM

But not me....

MC Luigi · 03-17-2007, 04:01 PM

^you want in? OK.

SephirothKirby · 03-17-2007, 04:16 PM

I don't get the gay joke.

He just randomly said "Gay?!"

But okay, I'm glad to be in it. Even if you make fun of me.

Marx · 03-17-2007, 04:24 PM

Hey, you can put me in it to replace Irby.

Here's my sprite sheet:

Spritedude · 03-17-2007, 05:24 PM

Nice work. I'm fine with you using me in it.

MC Luigi · 03-18-2007, 06:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SephirothKirby

I don't get the gay joke.

He just randomly said "Gay?!"

But okay, I'm glad to be in it. Even if you make fun of me.

I was gonna put "Gay much?" but it didn't fit.

I'll mess with Kenny.

SephirothKirby · 03-18-2007, 06:31 PM

Well, I'd like to criticize something.

I think you should stick with one comic, rather than making a new one every month. It's getting very confusing.

Spray blood doesn't work. It just doesn't. Although I must note you're getting much better at using it.

The text occasionally comes out of the text boxes, I think you should try harder for it to not do that. Though it's good that you're using text boxes at all.

I would comment how poor the effects are, but you don't seem to scribble them in anymore.

I can't tell what's going on most of the time. For this comic, I know it's just a death match, but in the last one, how did they get in the sky? It's rather confusing.

Your comic has good potential, I just think it needs more work put into it.

**Dylan** · 03-18-2007, 06:36 PM

^ Took the words right out of my mouth.

Also, if I hear one more person say "omg u made a gay joke im not ur friend anymore", heads will roll. I can take Dave Chappelle ripping on white people, so you should take straights ripping on gays.

-Dylan

MC Luigi · 03-19-2007, 08:05 PM

^^They were going to the sky if you saw the end of Part 1.
I'm going to delay that one's production because i like working on the VGF one. The SSB Blitz., well, just no. That was a filler for me to make comix when my mind was blank for new stories.
Nice review. If GYLPH were here, he would of bashed me so hard I'd fall off my seat.

MC Luigi · 03-24-2007, 12:35 PM

OK. Here's the next one.

Enjoy! This one's better.

MC Luigi · 03-29-2007, 07:43 PM

Something I made cuz I was bored. It's not part of the story, so it's 3.5.

SephirothKirby · 03-29-2007, 08:04 PM

I really didn't get the last one, but it seems you're making a plot. Nice.

blaziken3 · 03-29-2007, 08:21 PM

I think that you need to add a chapter where everyone faces a can of corn

MC Luigi · 04-08-2007, 04:05 PM

^I promise to fulfill that request another time.

Hope you like part 4! Yeah, Perez is my last name.

03-16-2007, 11:01 PM	#121
Demonicus Prime Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: I Pity The Fool Who Confuses Me With Someone Other Than YoshiFreak. Gender: Posts: 2,977 Thanks: 584 Thanked 111 Times in 75 Posts Points: 16,817.89 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 16,817.89 Donate	Wow, man. Those are actually really good! I'll admit, the font/text is a bit off, but other than that, these are good. Keep 'em coming!

03-17-2007, 12:15 AM	#123
SephirothKirby The best Q player on VGF Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: **** YEAH SEAKING Gender: Posts: 4,782 Thanks: 221 Thanked 448 Times in 260 Posts Points: 2,200.66 Bank: 193,078.54 Total Points: 195,279.20 Donate	To say it to my face did not insult me, though I did nothing to you. But saying "Its mostly a joke" leaves me bewildered as to whether or not you actually insulted me though we've had no communication prior to this.

03-17-2007, 03:29 PM	#124
MC Luigi Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In YO FACE Gender: Posts: 1,033 Thanks: 41 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Points: 10,275.64 Bank: 23,165.44 Total Points: 33,441.07 Donate	Good comments + free time + MC Luigi = Part 2. Nuff said. Hope you all like it!

03-17-2007, 03:30 PM	#125
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Irby's baaaaaaarn Gender: Posts: 7,781 Thanks: 377 Thanked 160 Times in 134 Posts Blog Entries: 6 Points: 34,316.19 Bank: 26,773.21 Total Points: 61,089.40 Donate	Ha I LOVE how you threw in a gay joke. [/sarcasm] Take me out of it plz thx

03-17-2007, 03:48 PM	#126
MC Luigi Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In YO FACE Gender: Posts: 1,033 Thanks: 41 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Points: 10,275.64 Bank: 23,165.44 Total Points: 33,441.07 Donate	Ok. Sheesh you take out all the fun. They're just JOKES. Weeeellllllllll, now I have Sephiroth Kirby to mess with.....

03-17-2007, 03:58 PM	#127
Demonicus Prime Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: I Pity The Fool Who Confuses Me With Someone Other Than YoshiFreak. Gender: Posts: 2,977 Thanks: 584 Thanked 111 Times in 75 Posts Points: 16,817.89 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 16,817.89 Donate	But not me....

03-17-2007, 04:01 PM	#128
MC Luigi Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In YO FACE Gender: Posts: 1,033 Thanks: 41 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Points: 10,275.64 Bank: 23,165.44 Total Points: 33,441.07 Donate	^you want in? OK.

03-17-2007, 04:16 PM	#129
SephirothKirby The best Q player on VGF Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: **** YEAH SEAKING Gender: Posts: 4,782 Thanks: 221 Thanked 448 Times in 260 Posts Points: 2,200.66 Bank: 193,078.54 Total Points: 195,279.20 Donate	I don't get the gay joke. He just randomly said "Gay?!" But okay, I'm glad to be in it. Even if you make fun of me.

03-17-2007, 04:24 PM	#130
Marx I GOT THE SUN AND THE MOON TO FIGHT. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Popstar Gender: Posts: 1,994 Thanks: 244 Thanked 214 Times in 92 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 289.00 Bank: 208,834.47 Total Points: 209,123.47 Donate	Hey, you can put me in it to replace Irby. Here's my sprite sheet:

03-17-2007, 05:24 PM	#131
Spritedude Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: The Centennial State Gender: Posts: 1,000 Thanks: 20 Thanked 28 Times in 22 Posts Points: 2,561.60 Bank: 159,298.74 Total Points: 161,860.34 Donate	Nice work. I'm fine with you using me in it.

03-18-2007, 06:31 PM	#133
SephirothKirby The best Q player on VGF Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: **** YEAH SEAKING Gender: Posts: 4,782 Thanks: 221 Thanked 448 Times in 260 Posts Points: 2,200.66 Bank: 193,078.54 Total Points: 195,279.20 Donate	Well, I'd like to criticize something. I think you should stick with one comic, rather than making a new one every month. It's getting very confusing. Spray blood doesn't work. It just doesn't. Although I must note you're getting much better at using it. The text occasionally comes out of the text boxes, I think you should try harder for it to not do that. Though it's good that you're using text boxes at all. I would comment how poor the effects are, but you don't seem to scribble them in anymore. I can't tell what's going on most of the time. For this comic, I know it's just a death match, but in the last one, how did they get in the sky? It's rather confusing. Your comic has good potential, I just think it needs more work put into it.

03-18-2007, 06:36 PM	#134
Dylan Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,361 Thanks: 1,004 Thanked 1,000 Times in 457 Posts Points: 38,223.10 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 38,223.10 Donate	^ Took the words right out of my mouth. Also, if I hear one more person say "omg u made a gay joke im not ur friend anymore", heads will roll. I can take Dave Chappelle ripping on white people, so you should take straights ripping on gays. -Dylan

03-19-2007, 08:05 PM	#135
MC Luigi Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In YO FACE Gender: Posts: 1,033 Thanks: 41 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Points: 10,275.64 Bank: 23,165.44 Total Points: 33,441.07 Donate	^^They were going to the sky if you saw the end of Part 1. I'm going to delay that one's production because i like working on the VGF one. The SSB Blitz., well, just no. That was a filler for me to make comix when my mind was blank for new stories. Nice review. If GYLPH were here, he would of bashed me so hard I'd fall off my seat.

03-24-2007, 12:35 PM	#136
MC Luigi Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In YO FACE Gender: Posts: 1,033 Thanks: 41 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Points: 10,275.64 Bank: 23,165.44 Total Points: 33,441.07 Donate	OK. Here's the next one. Enjoy! This one's better.

03-29-2007, 07:43 PM	#137
MC Luigi Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In YO FACE Gender: Posts: 1,033 Thanks: 41 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Points: 10,275.64 Bank: 23,165.44 Total Points: 33,441.07 Donate	Something I made cuz I was bored. It's not part of the story, so it's 3.5.

03-29-2007, 08:04 PM	#138
SephirothKirby The best Q player on VGF Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: **** YEAH SEAKING Gender: Posts: 4,782 Thanks: 221 Thanked 448 Times in 260 Posts Points: 2,200.66 Bank: 193,078.54 Total Points: 195,279.20 Donate	I really didn't get the last one, but it seems you're making a plot. Nice.

03-29-2007, 08:21 PM	#139
blaziken3 Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Private Gender: Posts: 28 Thanks: 17 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 2,564.69 Bank: 0.54 Total Points: 2,565.22 Donate	I think that you need to add a chapter where everyone faces a can of corn

04-08-2007, 04:05 PM	#140
MC Luigi Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In YO FACE Gender: Posts: 1,033 Thanks: 41 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Points: 10,275.64 Bank: 23,165.44 Total Points: 33,441.07 Donate	^I promise to fulfill that request another time. Hope you like part 4! Yeah, Perez is my last name.