The Adventure of Dr. Donez!! - VGF

Lord Kenny · 12-02-2006, 08:06 PM

Yeah, I found this one comic that I was working on a while ago. I think I might continue it, since this place has a comic fourm.
Note: The first few episodes won't really be that good/funny. The newer episodes that I'm working on will be better. So, here is is!

Lord Kenny · 12-02-2006, 08:07 PM

Lord Kenny · 12-02-2006, 08:13 PM

Ok, after everyones done complaining about part 1, I'll get the next episode up. =)

Link CDLVI · 12-02-2006, 08:33 PM

It was completly out of the random.

It didn't have to much of a story line...
It was ok for a laugh.
You might want to add a body, instead of stick figures.

Other than that, it was alright. Keep em' coming. 7/10.

Spritedude · 12-02-2006, 08:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Link456

You might want to add a body, instead of stick figures.

Have you even read the NC comix?

Seemed like a bunch of NC comix made into one. Pretty good.

Lord Kenny · 12-02-2006, 08:44 PM

Really? It's...good?! Wow. This first parts just kinda...Well, it starts as a dream that Jay has, then he ends up going crazy. I'll get the next part up later tonight. Right now, I'm eating some cake or somthing.

Link CDLVI · 12-02-2006, 08:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spritedude

Have you even read the NC comix?

Yea, i've read em'

Lord Kenny · 12-02-2006, 09:04 PM

Yeah, the first part was the prolouge. This is Episode 1. Here it go.

Lord Kenny · 12-02-2006, 09:05 PM

Ok, once I get some more posts from people, I'll put up Episode 2.

Link CDLVI · 12-02-2006, 10:06 PM

I liked that. It was pretty good.
Some things I did happen to see was:

What was that thing in Dr. Donez's house? The thing that looks like a cut-off B.
In your second post, on your first 3 panels, they were completly random.

Other than that, Better than the prolouge. 7 1/2 /10

Lord Kenny · 12-02-2006, 10:18 PM

The "cut-off B"...Are you talking about the window? Thats a window.

The last panel of the first post and the first three in the second was Dr. Donez thinking where his robot is.

Lord Kenny · 12-02-2006, 11:18 PM

Lord Kenny · 12-02-2006, 11:20 PM

Lord Kenny · 12-02-2006, 11:21 PM

Well, how is it?

Mikhail Gorbachev · 12-02-2006, 11:37 PM

Terrible. It's completely incoherent, the jokes are awful and stolen from NC, there is a relatively high amount of spelling errors, and the .jpg format ruins the color information more than Jay's horrible .gif dithering did. Be less reckless about spelling, save using a better format, and for god's sake, stop ripping off of NC.

Lord Kenny · 12-02-2006, 11:43 PM

Thank you for being honest, Phonestheme. =) I'll make sure to work really hard on the next episodes.

Mikhail Gorbachev · 12-02-2006, 11:49 PM

I'm glad that there's someone making comics who's open to criticism for a change. Most people in the comix forum post a crappy comic, get panned for it, and then never come back.

Lord Kenny · 12-02-2006, 11:52 PM

I would rather be told I suck so I can improve and make good comics than be lied to and told they're good and continue to make sucky comics.

Lord Kenny · 12-03-2006, 12:25 AM

Thank God, the last old episode. I found out I made 1/2 of episode four, and not one part of it is funny, so I'll be re-doing it. So, it'll be a day or two before the next episode. Trust me, after seeing this episode, you'll want to know what happens next.

Lord Kenny · 12-03-2006, 12:27 AM

Soooo...?

12-02-2006, 08:06 PM	#1
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate	The Adventure of Dr. Donez!! Yeah, I found this one comic that I was working on a while ago. I think I might continue it, since this place has a comic fourm. Note: The first few episodes won't really be that good/funny. The newer episodes that I'm working on will be better. So, here is is! Last edited by Lord Kenny; 12-02-2006 at 08:16 PM.

12-02-2006, 09:04 PM	#8
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate	Episode 1 Yeah, the first part was the prolouge. This is Episode 1. Here it go.

12-02-2006, 11:18 PM	#12
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate	Episode II - Attack of the Clones! Wait...what?

12-03-2006, 12:25 AM	#19
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate	Episode 3 Thank God, the last old episode. I found out I made 1/2 of episode four, and not one part of it is funny, so I'll be re-doing it. So, it'll be a day or two before the next episode. Trust me, after seeing this episode, you'll want to know what happens next.

12-02-2006, 08:07 PM	#2
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate

12-02-2006, 08:13 PM	#3
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate	Ok, after everyones done complaining about part 1, I'll get the next episode up. =)

12-02-2006, 08:33 PM	#4
Link CDLVI Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: a box under the stairs in the corner of the basement a block down the street from Jerry's Bait Shop Gender: Posts: 1,271 Thanks: 15 Thanked 16 Times in 15 Posts Points: 409.88 Bank: 8,162.32 Total Points: 8,572.20 Donate	It was completly out of the random. It didn't have to much of a story line... It was ok for a laugh. You might want to add a body, instead of stick figures. Other than that, it was alright. Keep em' coming. 7/10.

12-02-2006, 08:44 PM	#6
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate	Really? It's...good?! Wow. This first parts just kinda...Well, it starts as a dream that Jay has, then he ends up going crazy. I'll get the next part up later tonight. Right now, I'm eating some cake or somthing.

12-02-2006, 09:05 PM	#9
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate	Ok, once I get some more posts from people, I'll put up Episode 2.

12-02-2006, 10:06 PM	#10
Link CDLVI Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: a box under the stairs in the corner of the basement a block down the street from Jerry's Bait Shop Gender: Posts: 1,271 Thanks: 15 Thanked 16 Times in 15 Posts Points: 409.88 Bank: 8,162.32 Total Points: 8,572.20 Donate	I liked that. It was pretty good. Some things I did happen to see was: What was that thing in Dr. Donez's house? The thing that looks like a cut-off B. In your second post, on your first 3 panels, they were completly random. Other than that, Better than the prolouge. 7 1/2 /10

12-02-2006, 10:18 PM	#11
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate	The "cut-off B"...Are you talking about the window? Thats a window. The last panel of the first post and the first three in the second was Dr. Donez thinking where his robot is.

12-02-2006, 11:20 PM	#13
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate

12-02-2006, 11:21 PM	#14
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate	Well, how is it?

12-02-2006, 11:37 PM	#15
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,490 Thanks: 25 Thanked 60 Times in 45 Posts Points: 169.14 Bank: 23,930.81 Total Points: 24,099.95 Donate	Terrible. It's completely incoherent, the jokes are awful and stolen from NC, there is a relatively high amount of spelling errors, and the .jpg format ruins the color information more than Jay's horrible .gif dithering did. Be less reckless about spelling, save using a better format, and for god's sake, stop ripping off of NC.

12-02-2006, 11:43 PM	#16
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate	Thank you for being honest, Phonestheme. =) I'll make sure to work really hard on the next episodes.

12-02-2006, 11:49 PM	#17
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,490 Thanks: 25 Thanked 60 Times in 45 Posts Points: 169.14 Bank: 23,930.81 Total Points: 24,099.95 Donate	I'm glad that there's someone making comics who's open to criticism for a change. Most people in the comix forum post a crappy comic, get panned for it, and then never come back.

12-02-2006, 11:52 PM	#18
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate	I would rather be told I suck so I can improve and make good comics than be lied to and told they're good and continue to make sucky comics.

12-03-2006, 12:27 AM	#20
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,330.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,455.26 Donate	Soooo...?