Shy Guy Adventures! - VGF

Irby · 12-03-2006, 05:07 PM

Shy Guy Adventures is a comic series that I post on NSider and I decided to post it here too.If you have been to the Mario NSider boards you might have noticed the comic Shy Guy Tale.I use the same sprites and backgrounds and he let us use em so dont think this as a rip off.Yes I know there isnt much humour but im not good with humour when it comes to comics.
Prolog.:

Part 1:

I didn't use speech bubbles because it would mess up the comic.It shouldn't be to hard to read.

Edit: Irby isn't me.

Lord Kenny · 12-03-2006, 05:44 PM

Hmm...It's ok, but you should use speech bubbles, especially in the town scene. It was sorta hard to read that part. The Prolog was a good introduction for the charatcers but nothing really happens in part 1. Irby just slaps a bad guy. It was funny, though.

Make sure to spell check and use correct grammer!

Hey, can I appear in your comic since I'm a Shy Guy? I can make you a Lord Kenny Shy Guy sprite that matches those.

Irby · 12-03-2006, 05:55 PM

Sure.I can always use submissions! I can give you the sprite sheet if you want.A blank one.

Lord Kenny · 12-03-2006, 05:57 PM

Ok! Just email it to me or somthing, and I'll give you the sprites later today. =)

Irby · 12-03-2006, 06:07 PM

Ill give em to you later when im not lazy.

Lord Kenny · 12-03-2006, 06:09 PM

Edit: Bah!

Irby · 12-03-2006, 06:12 PM

Parts 2 and 3:

Part 3:

Lord Kenny · 12-03-2006, 06:15 PM

Ok, now its starting to get interesting. Lemon Guy... Lime Guy... Is Citrus Man going to show up? =)

Irby · 12-03-2006, 06:30 PM

I have up to part 12.

X-3 · 12-03-2006, 06:42 PM

Needs improvement. Like text bubbles. And it needs a better plot/better humor(If this is a comedy).

Irby · 12-03-2006, 06:57 PM

This isnt a comedy and speech bubbles would make the comic longer and harder to make.I have reasons.

Lord Kenny · 12-03-2006, 07:00 PM

You don't need text "bubbles", but like, put them in a small, white box. This way, we can see the words better, and it will take up as little space as possible!

Irby · 12-03-2006, 07:02 PM

Ill TRY and fix the speech problems but don't hold your breath because you might die.

Irby · 12-03-2006, 07:05 PM

Part 4:

Part 5:

The orange Shy Guy is a user made Shy Guy.A submission.Same with Ghost Guy.Ghost Guy is a Guy who THINKS he is a ghost and Super Guy(The orange guy) is a Super Hero who always messes things up.

Lord Kenny · 12-03-2006, 07:20 PM

You see, compare the text on the white backrounds to the text on the other backrounds.

The storys kinda...well, its not bad, but you could explain some stuff, like why Irby keeps teleporting in part 5, and why Super Guy dosn't save Irby.

Link CDLVI · 12-03-2006, 07:25 PM

There are a few Grammatical errors.
And another thing...

does Ghost Guy have to be that annoying?

Lord Kenny · 12-03-2006, 07:27 PM

It's kinda funny how Ghost Guy stops acting like a ghost when Super Guy appears.

Irby · 12-03-2006, 07:32 PM

The teleportation in this is random.

Ghost Guy isnt really a ghost and Super Guy sucks at Super Heroing.

Irby · 12-03-2006, 08:12 PM

Part 6:

Part 7:

Character bio's coming soon!

Double Genocide · 12-03-2006, 08:39 PM

Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! *gets slapped*

You should have, like, a Rhyme Guy! He should be purple.

12-03-2006, 05:07 PM	#1
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 6,120 Thanks: 302 Thanked 87 Times in 73 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 32,522.36 Bank: 11,887.58 Total Points: 44,409.94 Donate	Shy Guy Adventures! Shy Guy Adventures is a comic series that I post on NSider and I decided to post it here too.If you have been to the Mario NSider boards you might have noticed the comic Shy Guy Tale.I use the same sprites and backgrounds and he let us use em so dont think this as a rip off.Yes I know there isnt much humour but im not good with humour when it comes to comics. Prolog.: Part 1: I didn't use speech bubbles because it would mess up the comic.It shouldn't be to hard to read. Edit: Irby isn't me.

12-03-2006, 06:09 PM	#6
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: YES Gender: Posts: 1,968 Thanks: 216 Thanked 201 Times in 89 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 983.77 Bank: 113,767.57 Total Points: 114,751.34 Donate	Edit: Bah! Last edited by Lord Kenny; 12-03-2006 at 06:16 PM.

12-03-2006, 07:05 PM	#14
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 6,120 Thanks: 302 Thanked 87 Times in 73 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 32,522.36 Bank: 11,887.58 Total Points: 44,409.94 Donate	Part 4: Part 5: The orange Shy Guy is a user made Shy Guy.A submission.Same with Ghost Guy.Ghost Guy is a Guy who THINKS he is a ghost and Super Guy(The orange guy) is a Super Hero who always messes things up. Last edited by Irby; 12-03-2006 at 07:13 PM.

12-03-2006, 08:12 PM	#19
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 6,120 Thanks: 302 Thanked 87 Times in 73 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 32,522.36 Bank: 11,887.58 Total Points: 44,409.94 Donate	Part 6: Part 7: Character bio's coming soon! Last edited by Irby; 12-03-2006 at 08:20 PM.

12-03-2006, 05:44 PM	#2
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: YES Gender: Posts: 1,968 Thanks: 216 Thanked 201 Times in 89 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 983.77 Bank: 113,767.57 Total Points: 114,751.34 Donate	Hmm...It's ok, but you should use speech bubbles, especially in the town scene. It was sorta hard to read that part. The Prolog was a good introduction for the charatcers but nothing really happens in part 1. Irby just slaps a bad guy. It was funny, though. Make sure to spell check and use correct grammer! Hey, can I appear in your comic since I'm a Shy Guy? I can make you a Lord Kenny Shy Guy sprite that matches those.

12-03-2006, 05:55 PM	#3
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 6,120 Thanks: 302 Thanked 87 Times in 73 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 32,522.36 Bank: 11,887.58 Total Points: 44,409.94 Donate	Sure.I can always use submissions! I can give you the sprite sheet if you want.A blank one.

12-03-2006, 05:57 PM	#4
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: YES Gender: Posts: 1,968 Thanks: 216 Thanked 201 Times in 89 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 983.77 Bank: 113,767.57 Total Points: 114,751.34 Donate	Ok! Just email it to me or somthing, and I'll give you the sprites later today. =)

12-03-2006, 06:07 PM	#5
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 6,120 Thanks: 302 Thanked 87 Times in 73 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 32,522.36 Bank: 11,887.58 Total Points: 44,409.94 Donate	Ill give em to you later when im not lazy.

12-03-2006, 06:12 PM	#7
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 6,120 Thanks: 302 Thanked 87 Times in 73 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 32,522.36 Bank: 11,887.58 Total Points: 44,409.94 Donate	Parts 2 and 3: Part 3:

12-03-2006, 06:15 PM	#8
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: YES Gender: Posts: 1,968 Thanks: 216 Thanked 201 Times in 89 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 983.77 Bank: 113,767.57 Total Points: 114,751.34 Donate	Ok, now its starting to get interesting. Lemon Guy... Lime Guy... Is Citrus Man going to show up? =)

12-03-2006, 06:30 PM	#9
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 6,120 Thanks: 302 Thanked 87 Times in 73 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 32,522.36 Bank: 11,887.58 Total Points: 44,409.94 Donate	I have up to part 12.

12-03-2006, 06:42 PM	#10
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 8,711 Thanks: 237 Thanked 248 Times in 184 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 10,979.30 Bank: 3,762.99 Total Points: 14,742.29 Donate	Needs improvement. Like text bubbles. And it needs a better plot/better humor(If this is a comedy).

12-03-2006, 06:57 PM	#11
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 6,120 Thanks: 302 Thanked 87 Times in 73 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 32,522.36 Bank: 11,887.58 Total Points: 44,409.94 Donate	This isnt a comedy and speech bubbles would make the comic longer and harder to make.I have reasons.

12-03-2006, 07:00 PM	#12
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: YES Gender: Posts: 1,968 Thanks: 216 Thanked 201 Times in 89 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 983.77 Bank: 113,767.57 Total Points: 114,751.34 Donate	You don't need text "bubbles", but like, put them in a small, white box. This way, we can see the words better, and it will take up as little space as possible!

12-03-2006, 07:02 PM	#13
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 6,120 Thanks: 302 Thanked 87 Times in 73 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 32,522.36 Bank: 11,887.58 Total Points: 44,409.94 Donate	Ill TRY and fix the speech problems but don't hold your breath because you might die.

12-03-2006, 07:20 PM	#15
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: YES Gender: Posts: 1,968 Thanks: 216 Thanked 201 Times in 89 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 983.77 Bank: 113,767.57 Total Points: 114,751.34 Donate	You see, compare the text on the white backrounds to the text on the other backrounds. The storys kinda...well, its not bad, but you could explain some stuff, like why Irby keeps teleporting in part 5, and why Super Guy dosn't save Irby.

12-03-2006, 07:25 PM	#16
Link CDLVI Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: a box under the stairs in the corner of the basement a block down the street from Jerry's Bait Shop Gender: Posts: 1,214 Thanks: 13 Thanked 13 Times in 12 Posts Points: 6,952.63 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 6,952.64 Donate	There are a few Grammatical errors. And another thing... does Ghost Guy have to be that annoying?

12-03-2006, 07:27 PM	#17
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: YES Gender: Posts: 1,968 Thanks: 216 Thanked 201 Times in 89 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 983.77 Bank: 113,767.57 Total Points: 114,751.34 Donate	It's kinda funny how Ghost Guy stops acting like a ghost when Super Guy appears.

12-03-2006, 07:32 PM	#18
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 6,120 Thanks: 302 Thanked 87 Times in 73 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 32,522.36 Bank: 11,887.58 Total Points: 44,409.94 Donate	The teleportation in this is random. Ghost Guy isnt really a ghost and Super Guy sucks at Super Heroing.

12-03-2006, 08:39 PM	#20
Double Genocide Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: In front of my computer with my games and my guitars. Gender: Posts: 2,576 Thanks: 97 Thanked 87 Times in 79 Posts Points: 56,458.19 Bank: 0.40 Total Points: 56,458.59 Donate	Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! gets slapped You should have, like, a Rhyme Guy! He should be purple.