X-3's CrashMan Comics - VGF

X-3 · 01-26-2007, 08:25 PM

Expect to see a actual background next time.

This is a test. If this fails very miserably, then this'll end.

MC Mushi Mo · 01-26-2007, 08:26 PM

I expect it to suck. Don't expect anymore comments.

...Just kidding.

MC Mushi Mo · 01-26-2007, 10:10 PM

I think this was funny, just don't use the fact that the spriting sucks as a means to make jokes so often, k?

X-3 · 01-26-2007, 11:27 PM

Thank you for the criticism, MC.

New comic. Not much happens here, just introducing some of Crash's co-stars.

MC Mushi Mo · 01-26-2007, 11:51 PM

You need to be more careful about text overlapping text, but besides that I get the jokes and they're funny. Keep it up.

X-3 · 01-27-2007, 03:08 PM

Just showing the personalities of the co-stars.

This may be trouble for Crash...

Irby · 01-27-2007, 04:25 PM

Pretty good. Remember to use text bubbles for some scenes.

UltimateGamer178 · 01-27-2007, 04:26 PM

Pretty good.

X-3 · 01-27-2007, 04:59 PM

CrystalMan has one big weakness...

X-3 · 01-28-2007, 05:56 PM

I didn't really need to DP, but it'll get more attention this way.

Smarmy Vent · 01-28-2007, 06:15 PM

Cool comic. I wish I had played more than just one Megaman game.

X-3 · 01-28-2007, 08:15 PM

Bum Bum Bum?

MC Mushi Mo · 01-28-2007, 11:47 PM

dun dun dun/bumbumbum

Pretty good so far, keep it up, and soon you will have an entertaining series on your hands.

X-3 · 01-29-2007, 09:02 PM

Who is this mysterious newcomer? What happened to MegaMan? What does Dr. Wily have planned?

Hell if I know.

MC Mushi Mo · 01-29-2007, 10:15 PM

Rumpelstiltskin?

Mikhail Gorbachev · 01-29-2007, 10:55 PM

I'm gonna be honest here.
It's bad.
I'm not good at giving criticism. *rants about what if Glyph were here*
...but I'll give you some advice.
The panels are poorly done and the sprites often cut into the ground, or the ground cuts into the sprites. The red and orange parts of the fire cuts into the ground but the yellow doesn't. I see how this could make a 3d effect, but without the yellow it's terrible. In general, it's sloppy and there are stray pixels here and there. You could also put more effort into your backgrounds and effects. I don't think I would be able to tell that was a bush unless it was labelled. The textboxes need work as well. And... the plot seems... generic and incoherent. That's all I have to say about that.

X-3 · 01-30-2007, 07:53 AM

^Thank you for your criticism. I'll try to get these to be better.

Right now, however, we'll have to do with this.

Nintendo JJW: Mr. Biscuit · 02-18-2007, 02:48 AM

The sad thing is that even though I want to puke vicously, this is the best comic I've seen on this forum; including my comics, which still make me think about suicide.

I do like the "Yar! Me text be yellow!", for some reason.

Also, If I'm correct, the reference to the "leet language" is a joke from "Bob & George"? If it's not, I'll be willing to admit my error and be known as the biggest retard in the Milky Way Galaxy.

FXGlobal · 02-18-2007, 02:52 AM

^Again, who the hell are you? And, check Vlaigarmanders VGF Chicanery; It's the bestest-est-est. Don't bump old topics.

Smarmy Vent · 02-18-2007, 11:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nintendo JJW: Mr. Biscuit

I do like the "Yar! Me text be yellow!", for some reason.

I heartily agree.

01-26-2007, 08:25 PM	#1
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,001 Thanks: 263 Thanked 273 Times in 202 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 5,315.53 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,315.53 Donate	X-3's CrashMan Comics Expect to see a actual background next time. This is a test. If this fails very miserably, then this'll end.

01-26-2007, 10:10 PM	#3
MC Mushi Mo This Isn't Real. Really, It's not. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: That one place. Gender: Posts: 6,596 Thanks: 108 Thanked 308 Times in 245 Posts Points: 8,109.65 Bank: 43,244.58 Total Points: 51,354.23 Donate	I'm making a double post to comment. Yay. I think this was funny, just don't use the fact that the spriting sucks as a means to make jokes so often, k?

01-27-2007, 03:08 PM	#6
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,001 Thanks: 263 Thanked 273 Times in 202 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 5,315.53 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,315.53 Donate	Just showing the personalities of the co-stars. This may be trouble for Crash... Last edited by X-3; 01-27-2007 at 04:20 PM.

01-28-2007, 11:47 PM	#13
MC Mushi Mo This Isn't Real. Really, It's not. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: That one place. Gender: Posts: 6,596 Thanks: 108 Thanked 308 Times in 245 Posts Points: 8,109.65 Bank: 43,244.58 Total Points: 51,354.23 Donate	dun dun dun/bumbumbum Pretty good so far, keep it up, and soon you will have an entertaining series on your hands. __________________ RUN, SERAS, RUN!!

01-29-2007, 10:15 PM	#15
MC Mushi Mo This Isn't Real. Really, It's not. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: That one place. Gender: Posts: 6,596 Thanks: 108 Thanked 308 Times in 245 Posts Points: 8,109.65 Bank: 43,244.58 Total Points: 51,354.23 Donate	Rumpelstiltskin? __________________ RUN, SERAS, RUN!!

01-26-2007, 08:26 PM	#2
MC Mushi Mo This Isn't Real. Really, It's not. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: That one place. Gender: Posts: 6,596 Thanks: 108 Thanked 308 Times in 245 Posts Points: 8,109.65 Bank: 43,244.58 Total Points: 51,354.23 Donate	I expect it to suck. Don't expect anymore comments. ...Just kidding.

01-26-2007, 11:27 PM	#4
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,001 Thanks: 263 Thanked 273 Times in 202 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 5,315.53 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,315.53 Donate	Thank you for the criticism, MC. New comic. Not much happens here, just introducing some of Crash's co-stars.

01-26-2007, 11:51 PM	#5
MC Mushi Mo This Isn't Real. Really, It's not. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: That one place. Gender: Posts: 6,596 Thanks: 108 Thanked 308 Times in 245 Posts Points: 8,109.65 Bank: 43,244.58 Total Points: 51,354.23 Donate	You need to be more careful about text overlapping text, but besides that I get the jokes and they're funny. Keep it up.

01-27-2007, 04:25 PM	#7
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 6,444 Thanks: 306 Thanked 93 Times in 78 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 37,332.68 Bank: 13,387.34 Total Points: 50,720.02 Donate	Pretty good. Remember to use text bubbles for some scenes.

01-27-2007, 04:26 PM	#8
UltimateGamer178 Guest Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: In a pizza box under the Brooklyn Bridge Gender: Posts: 1,495 Thanks: 7 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Points: 10,591.57 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 10,591.57 Donate	Pretty good.

01-27-2007, 04:59 PM	#9
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,001 Thanks: 263 Thanked 273 Times in 202 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 5,315.53 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,315.53 Donate	CrystalMan has one big weakness...

01-28-2007, 05:56 PM	#10
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,001 Thanks: 263 Thanked 273 Times in 202 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 5,315.53 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,315.53 Donate	I didn't really need to DP, but it'll get more attention this way.

01-28-2007, 06:15 PM	#11
Smarmy Vent The night is darkest just before the dawn. Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Gotham Gender: Posts: 12,617 Thanks: 722 Thanked 1,134 Times in 598 Posts Points: 164.72 Bank: 115,313.15 Total Points: 115,477.87 Donate	Cool comic. I wish I had played more than just one Megaman game.

01-28-2007, 08:15 PM	#12
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,001 Thanks: 263 Thanked 273 Times in 202 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 5,315.53 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,315.53 Donate	Bum Bum Bum?

01-29-2007, 09:02 PM	#14
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,001 Thanks: 263 Thanked 273 Times in 202 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 5,315.53 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,315.53 Donate	Who is this mysterious newcomer? What happened to MegaMan? What does Dr. Wily have planned? Hell if I know.

01-29-2007, 10:55 PM	#16
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,481 Thanks: 25 Thanked 60 Times in 45 Posts Points: 13.00 Bank: 23,461.58 Total Points: 23,474.58 Donate	I'm gonna be honest here. It's bad. I'm not good at giving criticism. rants about what if Glyph were here ...but I'll give you some advice. The panels are poorly done and the sprites often cut into the ground, or the ground cuts into the sprites. The red and orange parts of the fire cuts into the ground but the yellow doesn't. I see how this could make a 3d effect, but without the yellow it's terrible. In general, it's sloppy and there are stray pixels here and there. You could also put more effort into your backgrounds and effects. I don't think I would be able to tell that was a bush unless it was labelled. The textboxes need work as well. And... the plot seems... generic and incoherent. That's all I have to say about that.

01-30-2007, 07:53 AM	#17
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,001 Thanks: 263 Thanked 273 Times in 202 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 5,315.53 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,315.53 Donate	^Thank you for your criticism. I'll try to get these to be better. Right now, however, we'll have to do with this.

02-18-2007, 02:48 AM	#18
Nintendo JJW: Mr. Biscuit Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Seattle Gender: Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 1,281.75 Bank: 557.83 Total Points: 1,839.58 Donate	"You just had to stand there licking the jewel!" - Luigi, TPBA (12/24/03) The sad thing is that even though I want to puke vicously, this is the best comic I've seen on this forum; including my comics, which still make me think about suicide. I do like the "Yar! Me text be yellow!", for some reason. Also, If I'm correct, the reference to the "leet language" is a joke from "Bob & George"? If it's not, I'll be willing to admit my error and be known as the biggest retard in the Milky Way Galaxy.

02-18-2007, 02:52 AM	#19
FXGlobal Member Join Date: May 2006 Location: In that one place. Yeah... Gender: Posts: 1,375 Thanks: 49 Thanked 32 Times in 29 Posts Points: 6,282.62 Bank: 92,776.41 Total Points: 99,059.03 Donate	^Again, who the hell are you? And, check Vlaigarmanders VGF Chicanery; It's the bestest-est-est. Don't bump old topics.