Im Back With Advengence - VGF

BLUEDASH2 · 02-25-2007, 01:34 PM

my new comics line (advencence is advance 4 game boy advance and vengence but together)

Smarmy Vent · 02-25-2007, 01:35 PM

Whoa, deja vu.

YOU ARE MY FRIENDS · 02-25-2007, 01:37 PM

Did you pay attention to your last topic?

BLUEDASH2 · 02-25-2007, 02:02 PM

i gave u a better vocab structure

heres a preview ( i ll have better artwork)

YOU ARE MY FRIENDS · 02-25-2007, 03:19 PM

Wow, that is worse than my comic.

BLUEDASH2 · 02-25-2007, 03:26 PM

i mde it quickly is was at school

YOU ARE MY FRIENDS · 02-25-2007, 04:12 PM

You shouldn't make your comics quickly. Take your time on writing the comic first. Then, once you have it all written out, use the spell check. Also, please get a storyline. A random battle is not a storyline. You must lead up to why they are fighting. Otherwise it's just random fighting.

In the comic, you should've just had three lines where Protoman was, and have the full Protoman sprite behind Mega Man.

That sprite doesn't look like Protoman at all. It just looks like a MM recolor. There are multiple sprite sites like The Spriter's Resource to help you.

Good Night, and have a pleasant tomorrow.

BLUEDASH2 · 02-25-2007, 04:20 PM

i klnow thats were im getting my new comic sprites from in stead of megaman just being the only one it will be a mix of mario sonic dbz and megaman

***Ace Mercury*** · 02-25-2007, 04:26 PM

Well, it's a... start.

BLUEDASH2 · 02-25-2007, 04:27 PM

sorry im takiing so long w/ my posts im working on my other series right now

BLUEDASH2 · 02-25-2007, 06:10 PM

okay im gonna show u what i got

in the third panel mario says then why are we waiting lets a play

**Dylan** · 02-26-2007, 01:32 AM

-Dylan

Smarmy Vent · 02-26-2007, 01:51 AM

Okay, your comicking really needs some work. The sprites are sloppy, there's MSPaint scribbles everywhere, the text is small and scrunched together. My suggestion is to take your time. The more you put into your comic, the more people will get out of it.

Also, try to make your panels more than 10x10 pixels in size.

BLUEDASH2 · 02-26-2007, 07:19 PM

i know but this is just part as a privew

LinkManDX... FACE · 02-26-2007, 09:15 PM

4 blank panels?

BLUEDASH2 · 02-26-2007, 10:35 PM

im not done with the page the next panel will start the fight

BLUEDASH2 · 03-11-2007, 08:52 PM

sorry i havent made any new posts i dont have a mouse so i cant make my comix got any ideas i could give out a storyline but that be tmi

Irby · 03-11-2007, 09:07 PM

Lord Kenny · 03-11-2007, 09:27 PM

*slowly hides the topic under a rug*

BLUEDASH2 · 03-12-2007, 07:41 PM

heres the page

02-25-2007, 01:34 PM	#1
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,380.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,972.72 Donate	Im Back With Advengence my new comics line (advencence is advance 4 game boy advance and vengence but together)

02-25-2007, 01:37 PM	#3
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02-25-2007, 02:02 PM	#4
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,380.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,972.72 Donate	i gave u a better vocab structure heres a preview ( i ll have better artwork) Last edited by BLUEDASH2; 02-25-2007 at 02:58 PM.

02-25-2007, 03:19 PM	#5
YOU ARE MY FRIENDS JESUS SAID Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: ON A FRIENDSHIP TREK (Panfan) Gender: Posts: 11,123 Thanks: 476 Thanked 837 Times in 599 Posts Blog Entries: 12 Points: 2,234.25 Bank: 21,468.11 Total Points: 23,702.36 Donate	Wow, that is worse than my comic. __________________ L2R: Alex, Max, Bitch, Ethan, I'm not sure she has a name.

02-25-2007, 03:26 PM	#6
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,380.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,972.72 Donate	i mde it quickly is was at school Last edited by BLUEDASH2; 02-25-2007 at 03:36 PM.

02-25-2007, 01:35 PM	#2
Smarmy Vent The night is darkest just before the dawn. Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Gotham Gender: Posts: 12,621 Thanks: 725 Thanked 1,135 Times in 598 Posts Points: 54.76 Bank: 115,718.15 Total Points: 115,772.91 Donate	Whoa, deja vu.

02-25-2007, 04:12 PM	#7
YOU ARE MY FRIENDS JESUS SAID Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: ON A FRIENDSHIP TREK (Panfan) Gender: Posts: 11,123 Thanks: 476 Thanked 837 Times in 599 Posts Blog Entries: 12 Points: 2,234.25 Bank: 21,468.11 Total Points: 23,702.36 Donate	You shouldn't make your comics quickly. Take your time on writing the comic first. Then, once you have it all written out, use the spell check. Also, please get a storyline. A random battle is not a storyline. You must lead up to why they are fighting. Otherwise it's just random fighting. In the comic, you should've just had three lines where Protoman was, and have the full Protoman sprite behind Mega Man. That sprite doesn't look like Protoman at all. It just looks like a MM recolor. There are multiple sprite sites like The Spriter's Resource to help you. Good Night, and have a pleasant tomorrow. __________________ L2R: Alex, Max, Bitch, Ethan, I'm not sure she has a name.

02-25-2007, 04:20 PM	#8
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,380.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,972.72 Donate	i klnow thats were im getting my new comic sprites from in stead of megaman just being the only one it will be a mix of mario sonic dbz and megaman

02-25-2007, 04:26 PM	#9
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02-25-2007, 04:27 PM	#10
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,380.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,972.72 Donate	sorry im takiing so long w/ my posts im working on my other series right now

02-25-2007, 06:10 PM	#11
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,380.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,972.72 Donate	okay im gonna show u what i got in the third panel mario says then why are we waiting lets a play

02-26-2007, 01:32 AM	#12
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02-26-2007, 01:51 AM	#13
Smarmy Vent The night is darkest just before the dawn. Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Gotham Gender: Posts: 12,621 Thanks: 725 Thanked 1,135 Times in 598 Posts Points: 54.76 Bank: 115,718.15 Total Points: 115,772.91 Donate	Okay, your comicking really needs some work. The sprites are sloppy, there's MSPaint scribbles everywhere, the text is small and scrunched together. My suggestion is to take your time. The more you put into your comic, the more people will get out of it. Also, try to make your panels more than 10x10 pixels in size.

02-26-2007, 07:19 PM	#14
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,380.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,972.72 Donate	i know but this is just part as a privew

02-26-2007, 09:15 PM	#15
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02-26-2007, 10:35 PM	#16
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,380.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,972.72 Donate	im not done with the page the next panel will start the fight

03-11-2007, 08:52 PM	#17
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,380.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,972.72 Donate	sorry i havent made any new posts i dont have a mouse so i cant make my comix got any ideas i could give out a storyline but that be tmi

03-11-2007, 09:07 PM	#18
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03-11-2007, 09:27 PM	#19
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03-12-2007, 07:41 PM	#20
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 5,380.86 Bank: 4,591.86 Total Points: 9,972.72 Donate	heres the page