Inadequate Avacado: The Neglected Story - VGF

ChuckleHuck · 04-01-2007, 03:38 PM

Here's an introduction so you don't feel so lost.

(I'll use text boxes in the future, I swear!)

MC Luigi · 04-02-2007, 03:50 PM

It seems promising.... but it best be good.

Detective Lilac Bandicoot · 04-02-2007, 04:35 PM

Same here.

The blowing up joke seems a bit... weird... but I like it! ^^;;

SephirothKirby · 04-02-2007, 07:26 PM

WHY IS THERE NO EPISODE 1? BAD CHAD, BAD!

I love the, WTF? joke with Luigi.

**L007 is Undecided** · 04-02-2007, 08:13 PM

AAAUUUGGGHHH!!! BITTAGE MIXTURE! KILL IT WITH FIRE!

**Launches load from RPG Shooter**

ChuckleHuck · 04-03-2007, 09:40 AM

^^I was gonna post it! You're such a cheap co-organizer.

Ep. 2, foo'.

I'm a bit rusty on jokes lately.

Log in, rate my crap, be a fan or something, eh?

Detective Lilac Bandicoot · 04-03-2007, 10:04 AM

I can see.

EVIL WHITE SHIP OF DOOM! xD

Sorry... I wanted to do that. SOme of it made me grin though.

MC Luigi · 04-03-2007, 04:44 PM

I love the comix. Especially the first one with the Bwuk.
Bad sprite mixing (with the backgrounds and all), crappy evil ship, and I love the idea of them being controlled by a computer guy.
No more evil ship, even though it was funny.

ChuckleHuck · 04-03-2007, 06:48 PM

I've finally acquired an evil base. (So that means no more crappy backgrounds.)

April Fool thing.

Don't worry, I'll get better jokes. Seriously.

Detective Lilac Bandicoot · 04-04-2007, 06:24 AM

Protoman in your series is freaking me out. O,O

SephirothKirby · 04-04-2007, 09:21 AM

I don't even get why Protoman says that...

ChuckleHuck · 04-04-2007, 10:16 AM

^ & ^^ I'd edit it to make it better, but I'm just too lazy.

New comic.

SephirothKirby · 04-04-2007, 10:22 AM

XDDD

"...But..." *BLAM*

Detective Lilac Bandicoot · 04-04-2007, 01:36 PM

"It's Satan!"

xDDDDD Funnay.

ChuckleHuck · 04-06-2007, 10:44 AM

Comic time!

But seriously, I should check that oven.

SephirothKirby · 04-06-2007, 11:22 AM

Great comic, it's hilarious, but here's some pointers.

1) Don't make them suddenly in a forest. At least try to make it similar, I know there's a bridge battle ground in FFVI or so.

2) You know how it's all one color when you take a sprite sheet? You should make insides white, otherwise it's still green. Look at the explosion.

Otherwise, it's very funny, keep up the good work.

xD Luigi knows Ultima.

Detective Lilac Bandicoot · 04-06-2007, 11:51 AM

Lots of awesome humor.

"AUGH! THE OVEN!"

ChuckleHuck · 04-06-2007, 08:10 PM

Quote:

2) You know how it's all one color when you take a sprite sheet? You should make insides white, otherwise it's still green. Look at the explosion.

I actualy tried to make that look like a toxic explosion. Otherwize, it's not that noticeable

Quote:

1) Don't make them suddenly in a forest. At least try to make it similar, I know there's a bridge battle ground in FFVI or so.

I didn't see one.

SephirothKirby · 04-06-2007, 08:18 PM

The Spriters Resource

It's in the middle right.

But, it doesn't matter, I don't expect you to edit it.

ChuckleHuck · 04-06-2007, 08:26 PM

The scary thing is, I have the potential to do it.

But what use would be my crappy island?

04-01-2007, 03:38 PM	#1
ChuckleHuck Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Next to this man in rags with a knife. He seems very friendly! Gender: Posts: 1,842 Thanks: 83 Thanked 38 Times in 31 Posts Points: 10,356.35 Bank: 10,056.82 Total Points: 20,413.17 Donate	Inadequate Avacado: The Neglected Story Here's an introduction so you don't feel so lost. (I'll use text boxes in the future, I swear!) Last edited by ChuckleHuck; 04-03-2007 at 09:38 AM.

04-02-2007, 03:50 PM	#2
MC Luigi Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In YO FACE Gender: Posts: 1,033 Thanks: 41 Thanked 13 Times in 13 Posts Points: 9,016.64 Bank: 23,165.44 Total Points: 32,182.07 Donate	It seems promising.... but it best be good.

04-02-2007, 04:35 PM	#3
Detective Lilac Bandicoot Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Grr... Gender: Posts: 1,025 Thanks: 18 Thanked 17 Times in 14 Posts Points: 8,789.30 Bank: 846.73 Total Points: 9,636.03 Donate	Same here. The blowing up joke seems a bit... weird... but I like it! ^^;;

04-02-2007, 07:26 PM	#4
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: **** YEAH SEAKING! Gender: Posts: 3,771 Thanks: 190 Thanked 255 Times in 155 Posts Points: 646.05 Bank: 91,311.33 Total Points: 91,957.38 Donate	WHY IS THERE NO EPISODE 1? BAD CHAD, BAD! I love the, WTF? joke with Luigi.

04-02-2007, 08:13 PM	#5
L007 is Undecided Axe Shreddin' Mod Join Date: May 2001 Location: Farmerland. Gender: Posts: 7,343 Thanks: 90 Thanked 292 Times in 172 Posts Points: 2,403.50 Bank: 16,603.91 Total Points: 19,007.41 Donate	AAAUUUGGGHHH!!! BITTAGE MIXTURE! KILL IT WITH FIRE! Launches load from RPG Shooter

04-03-2007, 09:40 AM	#6
ChuckleHuck Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Next to this man in rags with a knife. He seems very friendly! Gender: Posts: 1,842 Thanks: 83 Thanked 38 Times in 31 Posts Points: 10,356.35 Bank: 10,056.82 Total Points: 20,413.17 Donate	^^I was gonna post it! You're such a cheap co-organizer. Ep. 2, foo'. I'm a bit rusty on jokes lately. Log in, rate my crap, be a fan or something, eh?

04-03-2007, 10:04 AM	#7
Detective Lilac Bandicoot Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Grr... Gender: Posts: 1,025 Thanks: 18 Thanked 17 Times in 14 Posts Points: 8,789.30 Bank: 846.73 Total Points: 9,636.03 Donate	I can see. EVIL WHITE SHIP OF DOOM! xD Sorry... I wanted to do that. SOme of it made me grin though.

04-03-2007, 04:44 PM	#8
MC Luigi Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In YO FACE Gender: Posts: 1,033 Thanks: 41 Thanked 13 Times in 13 Posts Points: 9,016.64 Bank: 23,165.44 Total Points: 32,182.07 Donate	I love the comix. Especially the first one with the Bwuk. Bad sprite mixing (with the backgrounds and all), crappy evil ship, and I love the idea of them being controlled by a computer guy. No more evil ship, even though it was funny.

04-03-2007, 06:48 PM	#9
ChuckleHuck Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Next to this man in rags with a knife. He seems very friendly! Gender: Posts: 1,842 Thanks: 83 Thanked 38 Times in 31 Posts Points: 10,356.35 Bank: 10,056.82 Total Points: 20,413.17 Donate	I've finally acquired an evil base. (So that means no more crappy backgrounds.) April Fool thing. Don't worry, I'll get better jokes. Seriously.

04-04-2007, 06:24 AM	#10
Detective Lilac Bandicoot Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Grr... Gender: Posts: 1,025 Thanks: 18 Thanked 17 Times in 14 Posts Points: 8,789.30 Bank: 846.73 Total Points: 9,636.03 Donate	Protoman in your series is freaking me out. O,O

04-04-2007, 09:21 AM	#11
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: **** YEAH SEAKING! Gender: Posts: 3,771 Thanks: 190 Thanked 255 Times in 155 Posts Points: 646.05 Bank: 91,311.33 Total Points: 91,957.38 Donate	I don't even get why Protoman says that...

04-04-2007, 10:16 AM	#12
ChuckleHuck Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Next to this man in rags with a knife. He seems very friendly! Gender: Posts: 1,842 Thanks: 83 Thanked 38 Times in 31 Posts Points: 10,356.35 Bank: 10,056.82 Total Points: 20,413.17 Donate	^ & ^^ I'd edit it to make it better, but I'm just too lazy. New comic.

04-04-2007, 10:22 AM	#13
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: **** YEAH SEAKING! Gender: Posts: 3,771 Thanks: 190 Thanked 255 Times in 155 Posts Points: 646.05 Bank: 91,311.33 Total Points: 91,957.38 Donate	XDDD "...But..." BLAM

04-04-2007, 01:36 PM	#14
Detective Lilac Bandicoot Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Grr... Gender: Posts: 1,025 Thanks: 18 Thanked 17 Times in 14 Posts Points: 8,789.30 Bank: 846.73 Total Points: 9,636.03 Donate	"It's Satan!" xDDDDD Funnay.

04-06-2007, 10:44 AM	#15
ChuckleHuck Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Next to this man in rags with a knife. He seems very friendly! Gender: Posts: 1,842 Thanks: 83 Thanked 38 Times in 31 Posts Points: 10,356.35 Bank: 10,056.82 Total Points: 20,413.17 Donate	Comic time! But seriously, I should check that oven.

04-06-2007, 11:22 AM	#16
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: **** YEAH SEAKING! Gender: Posts: 3,771 Thanks: 190 Thanked 255 Times in 155 Posts Points: 646.05 Bank: 91,311.33 Total Points: 91,957.38 Donate	Great comic, it's hilarious, but here's some pointers. 1) Don't make them suddenly in a forest. At least try to make it similar, I know there's a bridge battle ground in FFVI or so. 2) You know how it's all one color when you take a sprite sheet? You should make insides white, otherwise it's still green. Look at the explosion. Otherwise, it's very funny, keep up the good work. xD Luigi knows Ultima.

04-06-2007, 11:51 AM	#17
Detective Lilac Bandicoot Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Grr... Gender: Posts: 1,025 Thanks: 18 Thanked 17 Times in 14 Posts Points: 8,789.30 Bank: 846.73 Total Points: 9,636.03 Donate	Lots of awesome humor. "AUGH! THE OVEN!"

04-06-2007, 08:18 PM	#19
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: **** YEAH SEAKING! Gender: Posts: 3,771 Thanks: 190 Thanked 255 Times in 155 Posts Points: 646.05 Bank: 91,311.33 Total Points: 91,957.38 Donate	The Spriters Resource It's in the middle right. But, it doesn't matter, I don't expect you to edit it.

04-06-2007, 08:26 PM	#20
ChuckleHuck Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Next to this man in rags with a knife. He seems very friendly! Gender: Posts: 1,842 Thanks: 83 Thanked 38 Times in 31 Posts Points: 10,356.35 Bank: 10,056.82 Total Points: 20,413.17 Donate	The scary thing is, I have the potential to do it. But what use would be my crappy island?