The X-facter - VGF

Cluelesscat · 08-24-2007, 11:54 PM

I'll be putting more panels up periodicly.

Bomby von FACEville · 08-25-2007, 12:00 AM

1. You spelled "factor" wrong.
2. The beginning is not intriguing enough to capture the viewer's attention.
3. It seems a bit on the homophobic side.

**FACE K. POLK** · 08-25-2007, 11:12 AM

Some text boxes would be nice.

-Dylan

The Eddie Stilson · 09-09-2007, 02:43 PM

Very short.

Chunky Kong12345 · 09-09-2007, 04:19 PM

I don't get it.

Also, stop using the cliched "LOL X AND ZERO ARE GAY OR ARE THEY".

t3hDarkness · 09-10-2007, 04:44 PM

The original version was female. Then the American version was written as a male. The Japanese version gets retconned as a male.

08-24-2007, 11:54 PM	#1
Cluelesscat Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Gender: Posts: 42 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,129.00 Bank: 1,061.20 Total Points: 2,190.20 Donate	The X-facter I'll be putting more panels up periodicly.

08-25-2007, 12:00 AM	#2
Bomby von FACEville VGF's Unsung Hero Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: Mad City, WI Gender: Posts: 14,302 Thanks: 187 Thanked 412 Times in 293 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 322.76 Bank: 1,618,563.98 Total Points: 1,618,886.75 Donate	1. You spelled "factor" wrong. 2. The beginning is not intriguing enough to capture the viewer's attention. 3. It seems a bit on the homophobic side.

08-25-2007, 11:12 AM	#3
FACE K. POLK Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 5,982 Thanks: 805 Thanked 807 Times in 372 Posts Points: 34,309.65 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 34,309.66 Donate	Some text boxes would be nice. -Dylan

09-09-2007, 02:43 PM	#4
The Eddie Stilson Newbie Join Date: Aug 2007 Gender: Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 113.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 113.00 Donate	Very short.

09-09-2007, 04:19 PM	#5
Chunky Kong12345 The Eternally Overlooked Outcast Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: ogmftwbqq Gender: Posts: 16,292 Thanks: 61 Thanked 201 Times in 146 Posts Points: 787.88 Bank: 86,115.20 Total Points: 86,903.08 Donate	I don't get it. Also, stop using the cliched "LOL X AND ZERO ARE GAY OR ARE THEY".

09-10-2007, 04:44 PM	#6
t3hDarkness Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: I've been lost here before Gender: Posts: 4,153 Thanks: 43 Thanked 109 Times in 87 Posts Points: 11,579.81 Bank: 84,629.27 Total Points: 96,209.07 Donate	The original version was female. Then the American version was written as a male. The Japanese version gets retconned as a male.